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Knockoff
(Sep 6, 2003)
What, Am I not supposed to say what im saying? You can't hold KO down.
furyofroy (edited Sep 6, 2003)
They all seem to be slanting slightly to the left. ^_^ But you're right, we can't.
amuy (Sep 6, 2003)
Oh i like it! the shading is neatos and I love the eyes! Its all gravy!! ;)
Merulotte (Sep 6, 2003)
Of course we can't hold you down. This is all just over the internet, there is nothing physical about it. Again, the shading doesn't seem to go along the contours, and the light source looks like a couple of straight beams going across them... Perhaps you could make a lightsource next time, and make the contours of the face, shadows, and folds of the clothing. It'd really spruce it up. |
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Serchul
(Sep 6, 2003)
More Lascaux fun.
ShadowKitten (Sep 6, 2003)
Wow nice shading
Merulotte (Sep 6, 2003)
Maybe you could put the practice you've gotten with drawing these into a nice picture that isn't just...The orb itself. I think it's maybe three or four that you've done by now... So... Maybe you could try something else, as they all resemble eachother in some ways...
marcello (Sep 6, 2003)
There's no maybe about it, 1 is enough. |
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pyrobarbie
(Sep 3, 2003)
just a short nap after school...stressfull day with a friend ^ ^i will finish!
marcello (Sep 5, 2003)
Ya, his left upper-arm is definitely a lot longer than his right. I'd say increase the right, decrease the left to about even, less flat towards the elbow.ok i tried to fix his arm best i could..is it better?
mazi (Sep 5, 2003)
thats better =)
concannon (Sep 5, 2003)
The arms are much better now. ^^ Great job. You're improving. |
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6 comments
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Merulotte (Sep 4, 2003)
Eee! It's like, a furry magical girl character! I wonder what that crown of hers doubles as... Shuriken, probably. Those socks are great. ^_^
amuy (Sep 5, 2003)
wow! couldn't help but comment on this! really nice! i *huggles* coloring! eeek! Its unbelieveably kewt! i love the stars.awww
nyao (Sep 30, 2003)
wow! so cute! i luv the solid style, it' great! and her pose is really neat too! ^_^
tappie_chan (Dec 17, 2003)
this is amazing! everything is so wonderful! |
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Hakkai
(Sep 3, 2003)
Raah~! Beware.. I bite. >_o;
dragon_girl (edited Sep 4, 2003)
i love this drawing.
Merulotte (Sep 4, 2003)
Youkai... I've heard that somewhere before... Well, at least I have a clue as to what it could ever be.It's small, but detailed. The background's simplicity doesn't attract away from the subject, so... (Eck. I've said that three times in a week or so...) It's nice, of course. The biting is a bit of something to be wary of, I'd say...
Maiko (Sep 6, 2003)
aww ~~ *glomps it and gets bitten* ow OOYoukai means : ghost, demon, devil etc etc... very cute hakkai ~~ ^__^ -Kitsunebi |
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porridgebird2002
(Sep 4, 2003)
Death Clouds...They only there in your dreams. When you go to bed at night, you may wake up in a fright, because you'll be in the land of Death clouds! You can try and stay still, so as not to fall, But a sudden movement, could make clouds like sand, falling into the eternal darkness... You can try and hang on, put your hands in the clouds, But as the expression will go, 'put your head in the clouds', you'll start to forget everything you know! So if you lay down, because your to tired, You will start to fade... and..fade...and...fade... But the one true way to get away from the Death Clouds, Is to close your eyes... Think happy thoughts, walk to the edge of the clouds...and fall. The next morning you wake, Thinking 'who, what and where?', But your mom's by your side and you know that for you, she'll care. Mkkmypet wrote that. She's my neice. I decided to use it for my picture, and the reason one arm is bigger than the other is because you'll start to fade, and his arm's getting skinnier, and that's also the reason why he isn't colored. "Because in thre land of the death clouds, there no such thing as color."
mkkmypet (Sep 4, 2003)
Awww, I'm honored that you used my poem! Thank you!
dragon_girl (Sep 4, 2003)
I don't get it I really don't get can some one explaine whats happing
Knockoff (Sep 4, 2003)
Well Lets see. Im eating some potato chips. And I spilled a glass of milk. Yup thats about it.
Merulotte (Sep 4, 2003)
You're getting better! Something I could suggest is looking for proportions and anatomy books/sites/resources. They really help. If you keep at it, things will go smoothly, of course. ^_^ |
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amuy
(Sep 3, 2003)
Its our old rotten tree in my backyard...we had some bad winds and 'woosh' he fell down...(thats kinda what the pic is)go hug a tree...it wont hug back..but thats ok.
mkkmypet (Sep 4, 2003)
Haha! This is great! I love how the tree shows so much motion!
dragon_girl (edited Sep 4, 2003)
Poor tree, I feel sorry for it because I adore trees.
Merulotte (Sep 4, 2003)
Oh, poor rotting compost tree... It looks quite shocked right now. That happy, pretty tree in the background... I think I can hear it mocking the falling one. o_o
strangeoid (Sep 4, 2003)
It reminds me of...umm.... what's that one movie? You know, with all the fairies? It was about a forest.... umm.... With that blonde guy and his tape player, when he gets shrunk... OH! FERN GULLY! |
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Knockoff
(Sep 4, 2003)
Major cookies if anyone can guess who this is. Cuz it dont look like him at all. =:)
concannon (Sep 4, 2003)
Um, Lex Luthor? I dunno. The head shape is good, but the chin is slightly too sharp, and the neck to thick where it connect to the head.Just a thought.
Knockoff (Sep 4, 2003)
Yea I know vis, It wasnt as pointy before I colored it in.
amuy (Sep 4, 2003)
who is it who is it!! nice pic! I really need a cookie..or chicken express tea or something good to eat im starving...
RIKG (Sep 6, 2003)
Cookie eh? ^^ yummy. To bad I dont know who it is. Ah well. Good drawing anyways. |
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porridgebird2002
(Sep 3, 2003)
I do nottt know. My first drawing, thank you very much. Lol....
Knockoff (Sep 3, 2003)
Hmmm Not bad for a first.! The ey is very purdy. Id say to put some shading on (or is the red the shading. Well Welcome again.
mkkmypet (Sep 3, 2003)
I think that the red is like a glow from the background. Shading would be good, but it's only the first drawing. -_- The lips are x-ellent.
dragon_girl (Sep 3, 2003)
its not that good you defenetly need to improve
Merulotte (Sep 3, 2003)
Dragon_Girl, it's his first try, and it's not like anyone should tell someone else to just improve. It's far more superior to tell them their mistakes, so they can fix them next time...As for those... Shading, as mentioned, could be useful. In front of the eye, the head indents slightly, and then convexes outward subtly, just as it passes the eye to form the forehead. The nose seems good for a slightly more realistic work. The lips are fairly good, as well. The eye is normally an almondy shape or a slightly ovular almondy shape. The almond's tip ends on the side not facing the brow (forehead-rest of head spot, mentioned earlier) but it's a bit less sharp. The only other thing I see that could be added is hair. ^_^ Unless the person is bald, of course. And maybe an eyebrow (or eyebrows). You're off to a good start, and with practice, your potential can be revealed. |
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cat14133
(Sep 2, 2003)
my dragonair is very beautiful
realityincognito (Sep 2, 2003)
Nice background effect. Very nice.
Merulotte (Sep 2, 2003)
Hm, I always did like Dragonair better than Dragonite... But I try not to use overused creatures, either way.It's nice how it is slightly submerged into the water... It looks like a very cold climate in that picture. ^_^ |
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