Dragon_Girl, it's his first try, and it's not like anyone should tell someone else to just improve. It's far more superior to tell them their mistakes, so they can fix them next time...
As for those... Shading, as mentioned, could be useful. In front of the eye, the head indents slightly, and then convexes outward subtly, just as it passes the eye to form the forehead. The nose seems good for a slightly more realistic work. The lips are fairly good, as well. The eye is normally an almondy shape or a slightly ovular almondy shape. The almond's tip ends on the side not facing the brow (forehead-rest of head spot, mentioned earlier) but it's a bit less sharp. The only other thing I see that could be added is hair. ^_^ Unless the person is bald, of course. And maybe an eyebrow (or eyebrows).
You're off to a good start, and with practice, your potential can be revealed.
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As for those... Shading, as mentioned, could be useful. In front of the eye, the head indents slightly, and then convexes outward subtly, just as it passes the eye to form the forehead. The nose seems good for a slightly more realistic work. The lips are fairly good, as well. The eye is normally an almondy shape or a slightly ovular almondy shape. The almond's tip ends on the side not facing the brow (forehead-rest of head spot, mentioned earlier) but it's a bit less sharp. The only other thing I see that could be added is hair. ^_^ Unless the person is bald, of course. And maybe an eyebrow (or eyebrows).
You're off to a good start, and with practice, your potential can be revealed.