Yay for the string! Good clean up on the hand. very very nice.

Aww, you got rid of the ripples...I can see you tried hard though with all the revisions :). Well, art takes practice too, so you'll probably like what you see as you keep practicing. I mean I never heard of getting worse by practicing, so it'll definitely be better with each one. All you need is patience, so keep in there and I know you can do it ;).

He looks Super Cool, or Super tired, well one of the two, or both. I where a mask occasionally. When I'm called master. He. :}

haha I always know your drawings by those big circle eyes :)

thanks ^_^
i ll' try work it tomorow :D

ohh, I like teh castle thing you've added in the background. I think what would've made it better, is if the guy's wrist was done a bit better, and maybe if he was looking at the girl. Maybe some kind of border would've been cool too. Overall, still a good piece of art.

yeah, the arrows move up the screen and you have to step on the corresponding arrow when it reaches a the top of the screen.

I agree, but nice too. I like the sweatshirt

Thanks so much, JK! I had problems getting the relative darkness and shadows correct, as I work from print-outs, and my printer is almost out of black and white ink. The whole pic ended up several shades lighter, with horizontal lines running through the whole thing (eew)! I didn't want to go into too much detail in the clothing, as I wanted to really focus on the face. (That, and I got lazy). I probably should have made the shadows much purer than they actually are.
Hideyourface, I can't really see the angle difference, but that's probably just me being biased and blind because I drew it. Oh, well, too late to fix it now.

I'm just in awe. zep, you're just too good. very inspirational.

It can be tempermental (I ahven't the patience for it, unels when I do pixel art)
I like this so far, once you figure our Lascaux I'm sure you'll be absolutely terrific ^^

Such soulful eyes *nods* and pretty mouth... not to mention 'FWOOSH'y hair.. hehehe

Ouch, yeah, that back of the hair thing can get ya.. I learned early, when I did Dolls...

One thing I could suggest is when you make your lineart, make sure you use a layer beneath it for the background, and I can't remember if the fill tool works properly behind lined layers, but you usually want to use a large brush.. hopefully that should cut down on the white parts in between the lineart strokes.. which should probably be cleaned just a little, in the future ^^ I like solid lineart, but it's a bit scratchy.
I like the way you do hair...
Better luck next time ^^