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Ooo, constructive Mr. Mikhail...

Anyway, it could be better, this is for sure (What couldn't?), I would suggest giving him a mouth, perhaps. And the 'hair covering one eye' trick is kinda old, and unnatural looking in this picture.
The specs might need lenses, his skin wants a bit more shading, and the lineart could stand some cleaning up as well, unless you like it messy, some people do.

On the good side, and there is one, he does look surprised, which I expect was the look you were going for, the specs are cool, and his hair is wonderful, as is the sky.

Ooh, perhaps you shouldn't give him a nose either? Just let the specs suggest the nose.

But those are all suggestions; you needn't listen to me if you don't want do.
After all, you're older than me; I can't tell you what to do.

Navaer, Happy drawing, and all that.

kaT (Nov 24, 2003)

hey, I always welcome sugestions, for he who belives that he knows everything never will.

And although I belive that everyone has the right to have their own opinions, I have a few "other" opinions about Mikhail over there...

kaT (Nov 25, 2003)
drawn in 33 min

uppdated a bit on some suggestions, and I think it does look better. I'm still just not used to doing pics all digitally. I perfer to color scans.

Parf Faer

Harmanye (Nov 22, 2003)

Book Ghost. Teehee.
Oh, anyway. Comments please? (I know, I sound pitiful, but really, I'd like to have something, I mean. Uh. I'm blank right now)
BTW, I had this open for 22 hrs, but that's not how long it took.
Three hours at most; I like to mess around a lot, and I didn't feel like saving it unfinished anything.

5 comments – latest 4:

mikhail (edited Nov 24, 2003)

yes it does look better, the drawing is well composed, however there is much free space above so i would suggest putting in a chandaleer with candles if u know what im talking about... and maybe you could make the ghost glow

Harmanye (Nov 24, 2003)

Glow. Hmm, I don't think glow would work, too much light from the fire to have more glowing stuff, wouldn't look right methinks.
There is a lot of free space, this I know and worry about.
When I start I don't usually know what I'm drawing beyond a rough idea, so my canvas size isn't always right.

Bubmp, bubmp, a chandalier, I don't know if that would work, they're rather Victorian, them chandeliers...
At least the ones I've seen are.
Maybe I can work it out, bubmp

Thank you Mr. Mikhail.

elana (Nov 24, 2003)

I like the lighting from the torch and the sconce! Are those trees outside or lightning?

Harmanye (edited Nov 24, 2003)
drawn in 1 hour 4 min

It's lighting, Ghosts always turn up when it's storming outside, remember?

Hearts flowers and cigarettes

loserxnextdoor (Nov 23, 2003)

I'm not done ^^; But uh It's going to be a picture of a quote I have. It'll be on there later. Please cirtique! I need help >_>: ._.!!!!!!

5 comments – latest 4:

Zinc (Nov 23, 2003)

Outline of it looks rough.. if that helped any. The stem looks irregular though. It's skinny and thick in the wrong places. The stem part between the two leaves is skinny..

mikhail (Nov 23, 2003)

i like the texture on the rose

elana (Nov 24, 2003)

I like the rose, but maybe the stem shouldn't bend so much near the bottom. So much empty space!Grr! heehee, cant wait to see the finished product!

loserxnextdoor (Nov 26, 2003)
drawn in 25 min

Just added a few stuff. I'm really busy ._.

trying something diffrent

SuzieSuze (Sep 25, 2003)

Just trying a diffrent style.. don't like it much

ok well I don't think I am ever going to get to fixing this up.. so I guess this is it.

3 comments – latest 3:

Fin_beast (Sep 26, 2003)

ehhh.........did you just flip my drawing?

It's good but it would have looked better if you didnt use the smudge tool as much as you did.

Harmanye (Nov 24, 2003)

LOL Fin_beast, not every picture of someone waving is a copy off of you ^_^

Anyway, less blur would be good, but it's one can't undo it now, just like one can't unring a bell.
I like her hair, and her face. Your hands are awesome, so hand-like, not just flesh coloured blobs.
I love her skirt, blue is good. ^_^
Navaer.

elana (Nov 24, 2003)

Her collarbone should be smaller and a shorter space should be between the depression of the bone. :D I like the pic though!

yo! (?)

nyao (Nov 12, 2003)

to bluesky. it's not what I had in mind tho... in a different style. should i make it cleaner? (i kinda like this messy style)

3 comments – latest 3:

haruko_ryuu (Nov 13, 2003)

i think it looks good messy like this. great shading an lineart. i like it alot

Ari (Nov 22, 2003)

Awww, kawaii!!! ^_^ *glomps little chibi-thing*
The brick wall rules all XP

bluesky (Nov 23, 2003)

*blush* for me??? oh yea i remember that request... sorta... heehee... thnx... i don't care what you do, everything you draw is so GOOD!!! wah wah wah wah... but the hair isn't like his hair....

Street Fashion

Porcelain (Nov 21, 2003)

In Japan, they wear layers and layers of mis-matched clothes. And it's 'cool' to them. XD

5 comments – latest 4:

Porcelain (Nov 21, 2003)
drawn in 2 min

Fixed up the shirt (a bit). :)

supermonkey (Nov 22, 2003)

X3 Hehe, this one is cute. Your style is amazing. The sleeve with the polka dots on it looks kinda funny though.

Heh, teh Japs so dress like this, I've seen them.. hehe...

Ari (Nov 22, 2003)

Japanese street fashion r0xx0rz j00r s0xx0rz!!! ^_^ Awesome job, love your style!

concannon (Nov 23, 2003)

I love how bright this is; I particularly like the pink. Porcelain, you're under appreciated. We all need to comment on your pics more often. ~__~