awesome. the first time i saw this it was on 16 bit color. the second on a crappy dark school comp. but now i see. and its kickass. though theres kinda lacking where the eyebrow meets the top of the nose?

Yah, yah, I know. -___- If you watch teh animation, you can see I tried, but it just didn't want to work with me.

Personally, I'm in love with teh lips.

very nice, I love the eye, she looks like she could do good deep throat.. :)

It's Vinny. -bursts into laughter- He looks so funny.

its an undead hippie

the grass looks real good, but everything else sucks

Ooo, constructive Mr. Mikhail...

Anyway, it could be better, this is for sure (What couldn't?), I would suggest giving him a mouth, perhaps. And the 'hair covering one eye' trick is kinda old, and unnatural looking in this picture.
The specs might need lenses, his skin wants a bit more shading, and the lineart could stand some cleaning up as well, unless you like it messy, some people do.

On the good side, and there is one, he does look surprised, which I expect was the look you were going for, the specs are cool, and his hair is wonderful, as is the sky.

Ooh, perhaps you shouldn't give him a nose either? Just let the specs suggest the nose.

But those are all suggestions; you needn't listen to me if you don't want do.
After all, you're older than me; I can't tell you what to do.

Navaer, Happy drawing, and all that.

hey, I always welcome sugestions, for he who belives that he knows everything never will.

And although I belive that everyone has the right to have their own opinions, I have a few "other" opinions about Mikhail over there...

Glow. Hmm, I don't think glow would work, too much light from the fire to have more glowing stuff, wouldn't look right methinks.
There is a lot of free space, this I know and worry about.
When I start I don't usually know what I'm drawing beyond a rough idea, so my canvas size isn't always right.

Bubmp, bubmp, a chandalier, I don't know if that would work, they're rather Victorian, them chandeliers...
At least the ones I've seen are.
Maybe I can work it out, bubmp

Thank you Mr. Mikhail.

I like the lighting from the torch and the sconce! Are those trees outside or lightning?

i like the texture on the rose

I like the rose, but maybe the stem shouldn't bend so much near the bottom. So much empty space!Grr! heehee, cant wait to see the finished product!

LOL Fin_beast, not every picture of someone waving is a copy off of you ^_^

Anyway, less blur would be good, but it's one can't undo it now, just like one can't unring a bell.
I like her hair, and her face. Your hands are awesome, so hand-like, not just flesh coloured blobs.
I love her skirt, blue is good. ^_^
Navaer.

Her collarbone should be smaller and a shorter space should be between the depression of the bone. :D I like the pic though!

Awww, kawaii!!! ^_^ *glomps little chibi-thing*
The brick wall rules all XP

*blush* for me??? oh yea i remember that request... sorta... heehee... thnx... i don't care what you do, everything you draw is so GOOD!!! wah wah wah wah... but the hair isn't like his hair....