Yes, with that I agree... both the legs are off in terms of what the human body is capable of... There's no way to bend them like that, or for them to be that high... OK, thanks a lot, Gigandas! I really appreciate it! n____n

Ah, the neck, I didn't even notice! T__T Thanks, though!

well yeah, that and the flat looking body, the giant neck, and the large forearm. Where the legs are now make it seem as if the upper leg is much too short, and the lower is much too long.

But how do you suggest on changing it hide, that's what she's asking.

For me it's the arm. I assume it's pushed behind her? Though it would be smaller to show distance it's far too small. It needs beefing up. From the shoulder to her elbow to her wrist. It would taper as it gets farther back but the way it is now it seems too... sticklike. Especially in comparison to the rest of her body. Thicken it up a bit (including her hand,) and I think it'll be alright.

As for her legs both fore legs need to be lowered. As it is now the thighs would only be half as long then they normally would be. If we saw her knee it would be near the blue of the Description strip window. We'd only see a bit of her left leg. We would see the whole of her right leg. It needs to be shortened, only half the calf showing, in the perspective her right boot would look shorter than her right because of the angle.

And as for her chest, even flat chested there would be a suggestion of form by way of the shoulder, curving out to where the chest is, then of course curving to the stomache. (I hope that makes sense.) Best ref's to use I think are cliff jumpers or sky divers. They come closest to bending like this.

I hope you take it as suggestions. Overall it's a great composition and you'll know what to do on your next piece. In art it's an ever growing process of learning and bettering yourself.

Just don't change the colors. They're like a wonderful eye candy. *<>*

Oh, the eyes are fantastic! So pretty. I really like this version.

I totally heart the blue-eye-black-hair combo.

I love how you've drawn the hair too ^^ It looks so gentle and wispy~

that's amazing hair. This is an adorably cute picture-wonderful job.

Nice drawing, the profiles and the colouring are great.

That's so pretty... You did really well on this... I love it.

the arm gets way too thin where it should be thicker at the top. Other than that it looks awesome.

really pretty

I adore the lineart on the hair! *o* Great coloring, the jeans look real. :3

For some reason, I see Cloud and Garnet in this picture....wonder if this manga/anime show has similar characters?

-Not to mention, your user name here is Garnet :o....*Twilight Zone theme*

mewh! I have the first couple novels that I bought while I was in Hakone, Japan. =_= however, I can speak japanese, but I can't read it worth crap. okay, so I can read some stuff... thats beside the point. Anyways, this is really wonderful!

Wait, He's from Naruto, right..?..0.o

Lee my love! :O <3
This is hawt XD
*random* Ya big turd o.o

GGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAIIIII-SEEEENNNSEEEEIIIIIII *******TT________TT*****
(they're sparkles. Really :< )

<3 Lee

ha! i love it when people can do lineart like that, with the really thin pencil and whatnot, and make it look right. i sure can't. but it's fun as hell to look at.

eeeeee! hip bones...soooo sexy! ^_^
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*grabs picture and runs away with it*

eeeeeeeeee!!! CAN I KEEP HIM?! CanIcanIcanIPWEASE?!?! haha, this is really awsome. I bow down to your skills.

I really like this drawing, very nice job. I like his smile both ways. I have no idea who he is, but I really like the forearms, too. :D

awww.. :D He's so happeh :o I really like his forearms, too. And I love the expression on his face :3

thats sweet. i love the popart look of it

wow, this is really good, ^^ the colors work really well together

Mm, I'm diggin the hair and the linework. :D