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A suggestion. It is better to finish your unfinished piece (and in the future, perhaps; pieces) before starting new ones. Other than that, the shading on the hill is too dark from shade to shade, let the colours sort of leak into eachother; I don't mean blur it more, I'm not fond of the blur too, I mean to pick at least one colour to go in between the colours you have (try selecting a colour where the shades merge).

Her head is too big as well, perhaps you wanted to have it big for more detail, but it would be more aesthetic if she were proportionate (And remember to darken up the lineart, it will be easier to colour that way).

The clouds are very nice though, I often have trouble doing clouds, one bit of advice about them though; I don't think that they should slope with the hill, but that's the only thing odd I can find about them.
Just trying to be helpful, so you can't complain that no one tells you how to be better ~_^.

(P.S. Giving the girl a bit of a shadow would be cool too.) *Shrugs* Anyway, I'm not trying to be harsh, I know your unfinished, but I always think that if one starts out with a strange picture, they'll end up with a bad one. Just trying to prevent that, but do your own thing.
OH and be sure to finish your picture with your next edit, because you're close to the KB limit.

ebilkitti (Nov 2, 2003)

I agree with Harmanye on many things except I think you need some source of light, or rays of light to give it a better touch, but it's your piece so... go with it

khotz (Nov 4, 2003)
drawn in 42 min

Well... finished, I guess.. I like the sky, but the grass and girl look a bit... bleh...

Watch Your Back!

Hakkai (Nov 4, 2003)

Kyahahah! The Green Bunnie Ladie will come and tackle you if you aren't careful! o_o

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furyofroy (Nov 4, 2003)

Ah! The shading on the jacket is delectable!

ladylime (Nov 4, 2003)

haha thats soo cute!

nyao (Nov 5, 2003)

*laughing my head off* ahaa haa ha... that bunnie is coot and funni!

taori (Nov 5, 2003)

I think I want one for a pet.

That guy, not the bunnie. >:D heh heh heh... *goes off muttering something about "with sprinkles and a cherry"*

Skratchbord tek bublez

Erin-san (Nov 4, 2003)

funfunfunfunfunfun!!!! *Is watching ed edd & eddy*

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joe_shmo (Nov 4, 2003)

ewww ed edd and eddy?! what ru thinking ***confused***

strangeoid (Nov 4, 2003)

*GASP* I LURRRRVE THE EDS!! Double D is my favorite... no, maybe Ed (you know, the stupid one)... I find it very amusing. ^___^ Even if the animation is hideous.

sunrise

elenawing (Nov 3, 2003)

i dont really know if this is done yet..plz comment and say anything u think should be added cus theres something nagging me about this pic, i really think something's missing

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ladylime (Nov 3, 2003)

a moon?

bluesky (Nov 3, 2003)

reminds me of a prairie, with gathering dust clouds from running horses in the distance... pretty imagery

elenawing (Nov 4, 2003)
drawn in 5 min

well i added a moon and changed the water's image, im finally happy with this pic ^_^ i hope you are too

Papercut

ky (Nov 4, 2003)

I've missed so much on 2Draw. All my friends have improved so well...

3 comments – latest 3:

mazi (Nov 4, 2003)

whoo! ky! *cheers*

p.s. i promise not to draw you any more fanboys =\

furyofroy (Nov 4, 2003)

We may have improved, but you're still one of the best. :D

RabidMalikFanGirl (Nov 14, 2003)

Holy frickin cow!!! It's Kyyy!!! *huggles Ky*

SesshouMaru

Maiko (Nov 3, 2003)

Bweehee ^^
Mafuyu's rquest ^^
it's Fluffy sama! and that's my computer's name too
sorry if it's bad ><;;;;;;

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Lark (Nov 4, 2003)

sesshoumaru... it's a very pretty pic..... but he seems to look...old... no offense! but he looks...old...older than the other sesshy pic you drew... ... ...

but dat's no boa feather! it's his tail!!!

Gothic_Otaku (Nov 8, 2003)

uh....tail? And is it just me or does he wear eye shadow> O_o

rosalyn (Nov 8, 2003)

SesshouMaru sama! Ooo!! And i just got the movies toO! awesome job! I Like it when him and his brother quarrel. I usually rute for SesshouMaru.^.^

nyao (Nov 12, 2003)

SESSHIE!! fluffie!! *jumps into fluffiness* I luv his eyes, so prettie. ^^

R.E.

Aoi (Nov 3, 2003)

i dont know what R.E. states for

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furyofroy (edited Nov 3, 2003)

Resident Evil? Anyway, My favorite guy is in the middle. His eye makes me feel all giggly inside. :) I bet this would look even better with some cleaner lineart. But sketchy is a style all in it's own, so do what you wish.

ladylime (Nov 3, 2003)

very cool! i love the idea ^-^

bluesky (Nov 3, 2003)

ooh pretzelly cool! luv the color genre and how it all just... just looks cool....

Tare-ness

Mafuyu (Nov 3, 2003)

Tare panda! C&C please.

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ladylime (Nov 3, 2003)

aww its tarepanda!!! tis so cute...

Moo

Serchul (Nov 3, 2003)

Rawr

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bluesky (Nov 3, 2003)

beautiful reflection... so simple a pix, but so nice a pix!

jord (Nov 4, 2003)

hm, shouldn't the reflection be more stretched or oval? and maybe the moon needs some 'gloomy circle' around it...hehe, or it's just abstract (which is nice too)

Fin_beast (Dec 18, 2003)

Can I see my mum in this pic?

Yair (edited Jan 15, 2004)

So Marvelous!!!
Amazing... That's so sane...