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I posted at the intermediate for tips to get better..alas in beginner I get none..u__u..
please critique..?? ^^..

this was based off a painting in real life..^^

my hand hurts now..e__e..*shakes mouse* and ...I am sorry if colors seem off to everyone. My computer is bad and colors get weird on me..^^;;;;

7 comments – latest 4:

emmamommalag (Aug 5, 2005)

I like this picture very much. I agree that it needs more sharpness in places. The places depend upon your intention.. I see the plants as mostly underwater with the water surface being the defining line.. in that case, the plants and grass above the water line need sharpening. If you intended the plants to be in the foreground with the the water as the background, then the whole thing needs sharpening. Hope this makes sense. :-\

kisara (Aug 5, 2005)

thank you all very much *^^* I will work on this some more with what has been stated ^^

oikitsumaru (Aug 5, 2005)

I disagree with davin about the water that is furthur away being the darkest. Its not nessesarily true. Maybe if it were at nighttime. And I also disagree with emma, If you want your focus to be on the plants in the front, that is where you should be more detailed. Not even nessesarily sharpened. The background you can get away with it being more out of focus. And with shading, things closest to the sun should be brighter. Since there isn't anything blocking light.
XD It is really nice, what you have. I think you have a really good feel for backgrounds!

lycene (Aug 5, 2005)

Actually, I don't mind the coloring at all; it's very pretty, and could be more so if it was more defined. Also, I think that it would be much more powerful compositionally if you lowered the horizon line and/or raised the hill in front to make the difference between the two really stand out. I can't do landscapes for beans, but you really have something going here--good luck!

Marimite Comic

GeeGee (Aug 5, 2005)

x_X appelet screwed up...

2 comments – latest 4:

GeeGee (Aug 5, 2005)
drawn in 1 hour 19 min

Weee! XD Coming along nicely ^^

GeeGee (Aug 5, 2005)
drawn in 47 min

XD Uhhhh...only people who know what Marimite (Maria-sama ga miteru) will understand this...o_o;

I always kid Yumi, (the ponytailed one) that her seour, Sachiko (they spritual sisters in a school they both go to, hence the "onee-sama") always ties her bows tighter, or fixes a coller, and so here...Sachiko is fixing Yumi's scarf. xDDD

Done for my own enjoyment, I was bored <_<

Xodiak (Aug 6, 2005)

Nice and romantic, hehe...
|XOD|

Heartsdomain (Aug 6, 2005)

lol i wish that was me...*crying*

dark clouds

pencilhero (Aug 5, 2005)

i guess the main theme is the clouds XD i don't like comicstyle artwork but i could'nt do anything else with shi-painter i should have chosen lascuax XD .
shi painter isn't good it's very buggy when i scroll or zoom in weird lines appear XD.
Tsk i need a new wacom this thing is bad
my drawings look like i have parkinson or something :/ i bet those wacom intuos must be good...

4 comments – latest 4:

friend (edited Aug 5, 2005)

Parkinson lol! They don't make you look like that! the clouds are Very good, they are so puffy and...delicious! The girl is gorgeous!

davincipoppalag (Aug 5, 2005)

This is a nice drawing..I like how you drew her dress (no evidence of parkinsons)..

darkshadow (Aug 5, 2005)

Great pic the clouds are very nice i am drawn to her face........... Lovly

lycene (Aug 5, 2005)

I really like the shading on the dress and the clouds--you definitely have a talent for it.
I've been working on our collab (not done yet); please let me know if you're happy with it so far or if you want any changes made.

Black and White

Cineya (Aug 4, 2005)

Done. Well, I didn't have any ideas, when I began to draw this. ^^' Nyo, nyo. Their weird.

5 comments – latest 4:

George_Goat (Aug 4, 2005)

Pretty!
I like the whole inverse color idea with them. It seems very mysterious yet bold, and the mist/steam really adds something to it. ^.^

SanzoGirl (Aug 5, 2005)

Wow, nice effect! It's so emotional, this is great. :D

Minty_hippo (Aug 5, 2005)

wow thats cool
you added eyebrows!! and that thingy at the top intrigues me *touches it* ooooooo0o0o0o

Cineya (Aug 5, 2005)

n_n I forgot the eyebrows when I drew this yesterday. ^^' Thanks for your comments.

Nosferatu

Kloxboy (Aug 5, 2005)

Retro vampire in color.

13 comments – latest 4:

HunterKiller_ (Aug 6, 2005)

I'm jealous of this painting.

Kloxboy (Aug 6, 2005)

Aww, you're super good Hunter. Alex, you're a saint. Xod, you're precious. David, your the shiznoz. Kasha, you're a great artist and you're uber sexay. Renuar, thanks palski, you rock the digi drawing. Solve, love your work. Mayo...my best friend...er...well, thank you. And last but actually least in people I know, Seklyan, thank you sherski.

me007 (Aug 6, 2005)

Awsome picture Clox, he almost looks like a rat. Your concept of lighting awes me, great work man.

Anna (Aug 6, 2005)

Geezus this is awesome.

homotastic.

mazi (Aug 5, 2005)

i just had to out myself to my parents. feck.

not in a proper-shading mood.

9 comments – latest 4:

quintessence (Aug 5, 2005)

Love you dear. <3 <3 Stalked your LJ as well, will talk to you later if I can. Mmm, awkward coming-outs. ~______~

darkshadow (Aug 5, 2005)

mazi i have freinds who have done the same thing.they say it the parents are the hardest to tell.
this is a great picture it convays your mood in a vary strong way
good job and again great picture

Seklyan (Aug 5, 2005)

totally love this picture. it says so much. i'm happy for you, big step to being free, hope it all works out for you. ````*^^*````

Kloxboy (Aug 5, 2005)

Good for you.
We support you, hope all goes well.
Be strong.

Hello There!

frenchtoast (Aug 5, 2005)

Ah ha ha, first impressions are always interesting!
Hmm... Its been awhile since I've been here; so I guess you could call me new! Everythings has changed...
Anyways, I hope I'm welcomed here and I hope eveyone enjoys my bunny girl.
~679
(p.s. I didnt spend 11 hrs on this, lol, only about 3... the other hours i was goofing off)

15 comments – latest 4:

Knockoff (Aug 5, 2005)

pinklynx?!! NO WAY! :O I think many people have been waiting for this day ;]. I've always wondered why you left and when you'd come back. Hope you produce more lovely art.

darkshadow (edited Aug 5, 2005)

love the come and get it look as she shakes her tail
wonderful picture
why did you leave
you are very good and i am glad you came back. i really like your Belldandy out of all of you pics. it is my fav i look at it often in a 110 clean way of corse god and evil is great as well well deserving of a showcase

Cordelia_Pink (Aug 6, 2005)

Wow, is it really you??? You've been on a really lonnnnnng vacation from a computer. Where to, Antarctica or something??? lol Anyhow, nice picture (oh yeah I commented already DUH). You have, like, 90 percent of your pictures in Showcase. Well, glad to see you back again.

Xodiak (Aug 14, 2005)

Ah, 5 days late, but Happy Birthday! >:D
|XOD|

Naked old girl

Xodiak (Aug 5, 2005)

Allo, I like naked old girls. Miss Trish wanted me to draw a naked girl with pubic hair and the idea was great! Oh and I like girls when they are 60 or 70 years old. It is a very sexual and sensuous age. <:)
|XOD|

6 comments – latest 4:

hideyourface (Aug 5, 2005)

haha. It's disgusting.. but haha.

Kloxboy (Aug 5, 2005)

The beauty of experience. I don't think I've ever seen a GILF but this is pretty close.

Kasha (Aug 5, 2005)

lol, dick nipples.

15grifficorntears (Aug 5, 2005)

mmmm thank you xod this has truly made my day. i love the sexy white pubic hair XP

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It's all in the eyes

Tezzy (Aug 4, 2005)

Look at the reflection
and repeat after me,
She isnt going to love you
and this is key.
You are a love sick pet,
open your eyes and see.
Lies come easy,
to She.

6 comments – latest 4:

Xodiak (Aug 5, 2005)

What a beautiful face. And beautiful poem. Gorgeous artwork! <:)
|XOD|

Satern (Aug 5, 2005)

Very lovely picture, the texture is nice and it looks a lot like a pencil drawing, just the right kind of crispness :)

Childlike_Vampire (Aug 5, 2005)

Holy shit, that's hot. Beautiful piece of work, the poem, I really love the rythym of the last two lines. And the purty drawring captured the atmosphere of it well. ^^

AmyLurvesRichard (Aug 6, 2005)

Tez wow, like I said before I need ur autograph kk hun? U kno my addy XD