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renire (Mar 30, 2005)
a sad story that goes with the picture:


Jenny was so happy about the house they had found. For once in her life 'twas on the right side of town. She unpacked her things with such great ease. As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze. How wonderful it was to have her own room. School would be starting; she'd have friends over soon. There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy It's just the way she wanted her life to be. On the first day of school, everything went great. She made new friends and even got a date! She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be, Because I just got a date with the star of the team!" To be known in this school you had to have clout, And dating this guy would sure help her out. There was only one problem stopping her fate. Her parents had said she was too young to date. "Well I just won't tell them the entire truth. They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?" Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night. Her parents frowned but said, "All right." Excited, she got ready for the big event But as she rushed around like she had no sense, She began to feel guilty about all the lies, But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride? Well the pizza was good, and the party was great, But the moonlight ride would have to wait. For Dan was half drunk by this time. But he kissed her and said that he was just fine. Then the room filled with smoked and Dan took a puff. Jenny couldn't believe he was smoking that stuff. Now Dan was ready to ride to the point But only after he'd smoked another joint. They jumped in the car for the moonlight ride, Not thinking that he was too drunk to drive. They finally made it to the point at last, And Dan started trying to make a pass. A pass is not what Jenny wanted at all (and by a pass, I don't mean playing football.) "Perhaps my parents were right....maybe I am too young. Boy, how could I ever, ever be so dumb." With all of her might, she pushed Dan away: "Please take me home, I don't want to stay." Dan cranked up the engine and floored the gas. In a matter of seconds they were going too fast. As Dan drove on in a fit of wild anger, Jenny knew that her life was in danger. She begged and pleaded for him to slow down, But he just got faster as they neared the town. "Just let me get home! I'll confess that I lied. I really went out for a moonlight ride." Then all of a sudden, she saw a big flash. "Oh God, Please help us! We're going to crash!" She doesn't remember the force of impact. Just that everything all of a sudden went black. She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble, And heard, "call an ambulance! These kids are in trouble! Voices she heard...a few words at best. But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck. Then wondered to herself if Dan was all right, And if the people in the other car was alive. She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad. "You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad." These voices echoed inside her head, As they gently told her that Dan was dead. They said "Jenny, we've done all we can do. But it looks as if we'll lose you too." "But the people in the other car!?" Jenny cried. "We're sorry, Jenny, they also died." Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done I only wanted to have just one night of fun." "Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim, And wish I could return their families to them." "Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied, And that it's my fault so many have died. Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?" The nurse just stood there-she never agreed. But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes. And a few moments later Jenny died. A man asked the nurse, "Why didn't you do your best To bid that girl her one last request?" She looked at the man with eyes so sad. "Because the people in the other car were her mom and dad." This story is sad and unpleasant but true, So young people take heed, it could have been you.
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renire (edited Mar 31, 2005)
ok....ok...ok.......SHEESH......oh and thanks chezas ^_^........its not my fault im stupid at drawings, and im sorry about this whole thing......*hides away in corner*

oh and childlike.......ITS A BACKGROUND U DIV
Childlike_Vampire (Apr 1, 2005)
I is Child, not Childlike....what's a DIV? O_o
renire (Apr 4, 2005)
div, divvy or whatever, it means you are stupid and childish.
Childlike_Vampire (Apr 15, 2005)
Well...OH NO YOU CALLED ME CHILDISH that's the last thing I was going for with the whole CHILDLIKE thing...gaspeth to no end.
But I know I'm not stupid so that doesn't offend me either. It was nice of you to try though!
(psst your picture still sucks maybe you could put as much effort into your drawings as you do into your comebacks...oh wait they would still suck.)

OKAY...I'm sorry. That was the mean-ness side of me, now how about....you are obviously young, and this is actually a cute drawing. I think the girl is very cute and she looks very sad and lonely. (I refuse to read the story by the way I'm afraid it might be a bad sad story.) I just was trying to inspire you to prove me wrong and do better. Maybe you will someday, I dunno. I just always am hoping people try harder around here all the time. It, like my ever present longing for a second childhood, will probably never happen. *shrug*
drawn in 34 min with Lascaux Sketch Classic
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how do i search up someones name?
renire (Mar 30, 2005)
cos i need to search ppls names up so i can see what theyeve drawn.
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Public Boards/Beginner 
staci (Mar 30, 2005)
18 plus for skeery pony-ness. you will agree.
(and because penor isnt as fun unless its typed in leet)


test of CK's tutorial ^_^
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PolythenePam (Mar 30, 2005)
LOL, I hope that comment was sarcastic, atleast, the first part.
Anna (Mar 30, 2005)
rofl @ renire.. You amaze me.
renire (Mar 31, 2005)
how anna?
mazi (Mar 31, 2005)
renire, if you dont know what penor is i think you should probably stay away from the 18+ images?
This is hidden because it is rated 18+. Edit your privacy settings to make it visible.
drawn in 16 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
hideyourface (Mar 29, 2005)
..
8 comments – latest 4:
davincipoppalag (Mar 29, 2005)
Thanks for posting that 'cello. I knew I had seen similar, but I couldn't recall who had done it. This is good too hide.
emmamommalag (Mar 29, 2005)
Very nice. I wonder if it's morning or evening. I like the little bird sitting on the wire.
hideyourface (Mar 29, 2005)
thanks for comparing mine to one thats totally better -_-
TaCO (Mar 29, 2005)
I like this one better, It has a much better feel to It.
But I still say It needs shoes hanging on the power line.
drawn in 35 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
Public Boards/Advanced 
marcello (Mar 28, 2005)
freaking realism.
photo ref used.
18 comments – latest 4:
TaCO (edited Mar 29, 2005)
Great pic!!!!!!
Is dat your Sha????
davincipoppalag (Mar 29, 2005)
I keep looking at this picture Marcello,you should do more like this, it's very beautiful.
Rosemary (Mar 30, 2005)
great drawing...wonderful skintones and expression in this one :)
Xodiak (Apr 5, 2005)
She looks so pretty and cute, like the kind of women whose faces remind me of little girls, Xod barely resists to pinch their cheeks when I see them! <:)
Very realistic drawing Marcello and you made it so fast. Excellent! >:)
|XOD|
drawn in 1 hour 37 min with Lascaux Sketch Classic
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nyao (Mar 27, 2005)
happy easter everyone~!
hope you all have lots of candy ^O^
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marcello (Mar 27, 2005)
I mean, she's totally groping that chick.
Kenshin (Mar 27, 2005)
XDDDDD Yes.. XDD
KiLi (Mar 27, 2005)
cuuute~ heh, i like the egg-y thing in the background.
Reich (Mar 28, 2005)
haha..verry nice...god i need a tablet...i cant draw with the stupid mouse....damn it...if i had a tablet i would rock this site with the awsomeness that is my drawings...actuly there are alot of people i know that are better than i am.....but anyway, nice pic ^^...happy easter
drawn in 1 hour 47 min with PaintBBS
Public Boards/Beginner 
nekodesu (Dec 11, 2004)
yep...a bit out of porportion though
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Animegirl250 (Mar 27, 2005)
I think this one is used to make something fly (must check refernces...) yeah i think so.. (Ed's gonna hurt me if I'm wrong)
Reich (Mar 28, 2005)
heh awsome FMA is cool....yeah....heh..heh...i wish i was an alchamist >.<
xiau (Aug 1, 2005)
I love FMA! Ed ish sexeh XD

You did really good on this! It looks just like it!
DrsFan (Jan 15, 2006)
I lovw fma,its the BEST!
drawn in 8 min with Lascaux Sketch Classic
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DeadlyBlondeArcher (Mar 25, 2005)
No, she doan wancho numbah, and you can't have hers.
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Reich (edited Mar 28, 2005)
lol....nicely done, heh...i hope brytani dosnt see this, she'd prolly kill me, er....i love you hunny <3....if your reading this i think your way sexier than this chick....WHAT?....stop looking at me like that baby.....er.....i love you?...lol ^^
cheetos (Mar 28, 2005)
Nooooo! Her butt's talking to me!! not the talking butts again!!!!
Cherry (Mar 29, 2005)
wow love the shape of her body u drew her very well.her hair looks very realistic . Nicely drawn gstring 2 ;)
Renuar (Aug 7, 2005)
Wow, i don’t think i got round to telling you how beautiful her bum is. Really and truly. Great pic.
drawn in 9 hours 6 min with Lascaux Sketch Classic
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shi-painter
kejoco (Mar 26, 2005)
Is it just me or is the animation for shi-painter not working??
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Public Boards/Intermediate 
snow_child (Dec 21, 2004)
it's a start...
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sisco_frisco (Dec 21, 2004)
wow...it looks like water colour! that is cool...that is so freakin cool!
StrawberryYamichan (Dec 22, 2004)
this looks amazing so far. i'm gonna keep an eye on this.
mukumuku (Dec 22, 2004)
i love the tones on the skin, i cant wait to see this done
respyre (Mar 26, 2005)
this is great - really smooth - it almost looks like a 3d render w/ a really nice clay shader :D
drawn in 2 hours 27 min with Lascaux Sketch Classic
 
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