Yes, with that I agree... both the legs are off in terms of what the human body is capable of... There's no way to bend them like that, or for them to be that high... OK, thanks a lot, Gigandas! I really appreciate it! n____n

Ah, the neck, I didn't even notice! T__T Thanks, though!

well yeah, that and the flat looking body, the giant neck, and the large forearm. Where the legs are now make it seem as if the upper leg is much too short, and the lower is much too long.

But how do you suggest on changing it hide, that's what she's asking.

For me it's the arm. I assume it's pushed behind her? Though it would be smaller to show distance it's far too small. It needs beefing up. From the shoulder to her elbow to her wrist. It would taper as it gets farther back but the way it is now it seems too... sticklike. Especially in comparison to the rest of her body. Thicken it up a bit (including her hand,) and I think it'll be alright.

As for her legs both fore legs need to be lowered. As it is now the thighs would only be half as long then they normally would be. If we saw her knee it would be near the blue of the Description strip window. We'd only see a bit of her left leg. We would see the whole of her right leg. It needs to be shortened, only half the calf showing, in the perspective her right boot would look shorter than her right because of the angle.

And as for her chest, even flat chested there would be a suggestion of form by way of the shoulder, curving out to where the chest is, then of course curving to the stomache. (I hope that makes sense.) Best ref's to use I think are cliff jumpers or sky divers. They come closest to bending like this.

I hope you take it as suggestions. Overall it's a great composition and you'll know what to do on your next piece. In art it's an ever growing process of learning and bettering yourself.

Just don't change the colors. They're like a wonderful eye candy. *<>*

I don't wear earrings, ever. I do, however, poke the earrings through the holes every half year or so so they don't close up, since I often have to wear earrings at formal occasions like weddings and such (although I don't know why)

And I think the reason my mom got our ears pierced so young is because the ear is thinner then, so it doesn't hurt as much. Then again, I guess it doesn't matter, since you don't remember the pain anyways since you're so little D:

The thing of it is she had hers done before mine and she was HOWLING, and it almost, ALMOST made me change my mind.

Wearing earrings too long just hurts. Then again people who wear them constantly never have that problem.

And I dye when I want to, that is I dye my hair I don't DIE...nevermind 8}

i had the same problem. once i tried to dye my hair black and it turned PURPLE! and it said black. then i got perminant red and it turned Kyou Sohma orange. *sigh* i hate my hair. i guess i'll bleach it till it turns blonde or white. ffviiac cosplay will be easy then.

oh yeah, cute pic!

I loved that movie and this picture rocks!

Well too bad.He doesn't need a forehead.

should be more shading on the upper lip i think

Yeah, the lips just generally have issues... I'll try and fix it, but I make no guarantees ;)

this is very very cool
love your style

=0 girl guys are cute tho :D <--*wtf*

seriously, I thought it was a girl. that even looks like girl cleavage.

I can tell why that man has a smile on his face, and it has to do with the position of the girls hand... indeed so...

how can we tell whether you're ugly or not when this is a unproportional cartoon?

The perspective in this is amazing. I don't think I can find anything to critique.
Your style is very unique. I'm jealous. Even your doodles are better than anything I could ever do.

*bows down*

Hardly anyone knows what hardcore is these days >_>

i like the pov, looks nice ;)

fooop.

Mr ref is looking pretty good there Derrick...