I like the lighting and the way it looks like rays of light washing over the front of the tower, but I think that maybe the two clouds seem out of place since they're much more muted and much greyer than any of the other colors here.

Interesting use of oranges, a color normally thought of as the most active and exciting color, to draw someone sleeping. It's like they're laying in the sun.

didnt know there was a comic. i thought it was just some thing some people made into a movue

Well I have no idea what the title says. I could find out if I wanted but I'm too lazy for that. So really, although like you said this was made for a friend, it seems like a bit of a problem to me that your audience, the rest of the site and guests, probably has a hard time even knowing what this is about. It'd be nice if you could have mentioned it in the description. As for the image itself I think it looks pretty good overall. I like the way the red designs are standing out against the background too. His hand looks a bit off, though it's hard to tell exactly in what way since I can get my hand in almost that same pose. Might just be the lack of shading there that causes the bottom of his palm to flatten out instead of being more rounded.

hey nice start. cant wait to see it when its done nice use of colors

The shade of red you used works well with the greys and blues here and the soft texture of the background is a very nice touch, but as I've said before to someone else here I think blood tends to be far overused in art posted online and it does very quickly lose its effect. I think compositionally too it'd look better if the only red was in the eyes since the red of the corner is pulling my attention too far from the main subject area here. You have a great "in the moment" effect going on. It really looks like a snapshot of time as some unseen event was really happening.

I'm not sure if you plan on doing anything else besides finishing the two characters, but I thought I'd point out that there seems to be some disharmony between your use of soft shading in the sky and a bit in the grass and your use of sharp, pure black lines on the characters and the horizon. I think it may be better if you stuck more with one or the other in this case.

Yes the fact that you had to draw it small. But you can draw pictures smaller than that but your new so until you get use to the tabblet and things. I think your'll come together and draw some crazy art work. I would also like to saywhen you draw feet don't make them sguare.

Looks a lot like the mountains we have here. Actually in a way, and you may or may not like this, it reminds me of the mountains Bob Ross would make because of the way you textured the snow onto it.

It's good that the gun was drawn so large since it helps the idea he's a kid. The background is also cool how it's simple but it compliments the character well.

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