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nekodesu
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Gha...he's deformed DX |
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xiau
(Jul 8, 2004)
yeah, i got bore-ded...
Knockoff (Jul 8, 2004)
Haha, pie.....This isn't bad at all.! I like the nice clean lineart, and the shading. Nice job!
Destervetha (Jul 9, 2004)
;) damn shoyrus, hogging all of Eyrie's deserving glory. *spits at the nicely-shaded shoyru* Ptooie! Ptooie!
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (May 6, 2006)
Eh..... I luff this so much!! Neopets rock meh Irish socks.... Though... I luff my halloween kougra more!!
NOVEMBER93 (May 6, 2006)
when i played neopets, my favorite was teh shoyru |
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nobody
(May 2, 2006)
heh... ref: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/15358528/this could be frightening. ;) |
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quintessence
(Aug 3, 2005)
Mm, solids.
fleeting_memory (Aug 4, 2005)
nice job on the lips and good hand-very nice :)
Ian (Aug 4, 2005)
ooohh ahhh! very well done! like the pastel colours!
Knockoff (May 3, 2006)
I love this, everything about it. Esp. the colors. Wish she'd draw here more :[
Sweetcell (May 5, 2006)
Looks like a pop poster, this is beautifully colored, I'm with you knockoff. |
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keikai
(May 1, 2006)
Eeef I'm working on my wings so they don't look bad....
Sasuke-fan-Sapphire (May 2, 2006)
wow. this is really good =) very lovely
Knockoff (May 3, 2006)
I like this, you really did a good job on it, with the different poses and stuff. Good coloring too, it's subtle but it looks real nice.
Sweetcell (May 5, 2006)
Well done, they're beautiful and golden. Keep it up.
keikai (May 5, 2006)
Thank you all! It's always nice to think somebody likes anything I do. I just hope I can get better and better and soon make something really good like a ton of you guys! |
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keikai
(May 3, 2006)
13+ for gore? Sort of? Dunno...basic idea of picture, Khal (shinrin and Niki's first born son, yes they just had their puppies ^^ yay!) has been attacked and is mentally scared with the image of a shadow like creature attacking him. This is one of his many dreams, sorry for the cornyness. I really would love to get some hard core critique. The more harsh, the better. Ego boosts rock too but critique is the only way I'll get any better, right?
Knockoff (May 3, 2006)
This really need some improvement. The blurred clouds and bad glow really distract you from the character, but the paw prints make up for it, a bit :)Just keep practicing!
keikai (May 3, 2006)
Got it! I agree, the blur did take a lot away, as did the whole background scheme, clouds, rain, ect. I was just out of ideas for a good background ^^; ehehe...also I thought the pawprints were a bit off but I'm glad you disagree. Anyways thanks so much for the critique! I'll be sure to keep it in mind next time.
Sweetcell (May 5, 2006)
The best way to learn is to look at pictures and see how the anotomy works, the heads fine but the body seems off, especially the neck, it's a good picture though.
keikai (May 5, 2006)
Thanks! I was trying to make the neck sort of lanky and 'graceful like a swan' but I failed horribly. I'll try your advice right away. Thanks once again for all your help! |
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NOVEMBER93
(May 2, 2006)
Maiko (May 3, 2006)
one of those white ones :Dthe dots are a figment of my imagination.
Akechi456 (May 4, 2006)
You're getting a lot better Oomily~ :3
NOVEMBER93 (edited Jun 1, 2010)
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xswirvex
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Knockoff (May 3, 2006)
This is really nice. I love the angled background, makes it such a unique perspective all while the main character is still standing straight up.Although it almost looks like you rushed on coloring parts, like the right arm, [her left] and it almost seems as too much of the abdomin is dark. But other then that, this is really nice, so keep the good work up :]
hideyourface (May 3, 2006)
the space between her legs is too wide, and her torso is too thin. The shading also lacks definition and the right shape.
Knockoff (May 3, 2006)
Mm, yup, now that hideyourface points those things out, makes me see how the legs are too far apart. And they almost seem to big for how wide her upper body is, but I guess it depends on the person you look at ;\I still like it :D
GOODBYE (May 4, 2006)
adding to more constructive critisizm her arms as well as her neck seem a bit wide. It looks like the left hand is not existant but that the wrist is attached to the hip. But I do like the ove exaggerated shading, i like the work put into it :) good job |
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TaCO
(May 3, 2006)
So lets all be Pirates!!!!!!!!
Knockoff (May 3, 2006)
Arh! Sounds great :]Good picture, his look is slightly scary for some reason.
davincipoppalag (May 3, 2006)
No...if we are pirates, we have to live in Pittsburgh and that's too far from the ocean. Can I be a burglar instead? He looks.."holy" with those beams emanating |
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Ambi
(May 3, 2006)
an 8 minute drawing...definatly not my best...but HEY!
Knockoff (May 3, 2006)
Yes, you should spend more quality time on this. Add details, such as shading, and fix the lineart next time around. You do know, just because you draw something, you don't have to submit it.
christiangirl (May 3, 2006)
Oh dear, not into this length and quality deal again!! Yeah it's cute, and it looks good when its small because you can't see the imperfections very well. Spending more than 8 minutes (30 is a good medium approximately, or an even better hour or more!!!) is a FABULOUS idea!
LasRever (May 3, 2006)
I didnt know you were on here. This is cute, I'm likin' the blue. Next time try Okkeki Shi-Painter (i proabably spelled that wrong) You might like it better then lascaux sketch, then again, you might not. |
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So are all the girls in One Piece *Cough* They're all anorexic *cough*
But tons of people like them!
I think he's cute, in all his deformed glory!
Plus, I love this manga.
i love that show so good ^^
great pic ^^
the eyes are a master peice
She's talking about One Peice.. Which is a manga and an Anime..