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Hi Bloob (under the sun)

Balrog (Apr 18, 2003)

oh, something happened, well i have to edit, let's see what i can get ^^

Edit: Fixed ^^

11 comments – latest 4:

Balrog (edited Apr 20, 2003)

That's true, but do you like 'em? i'm new i want some more critics :P

SandyDexHamtaro (edited Apr 23, 2003)

No, I don't like them.....I LOVE THEM!!!! CUTENESS!! I also wish I were a blob. *laughs like a giddy school girl*

Balrog (edited May 3, 2003)

Thx i apreciatte it ^^, i'll try my best to make 'em better

Nanibunny (edited May 5, 2003)

hehehehe awwinness they're so huggably adorable!!! ^.^

The story to my screen name.

rosalyn (Apr 20, 2003)

When he reached Roe?s house, all he could see was people carrying out boxes of stuff out of her home. Then he noticed Roe on her lawn leaning against her big pine tree.
?Roe what is going on?? Matt asked in a calm voice so not to upset her.
?Matt? Something happened back home,? Roe began to explain,? I?m leaving and I don?t know how long. My father said it would be very hard to come back. I won?t be able to see you ever again??
?This is messed up? Why? I need you Roe. You are the only friend I?ve had, ever.? said Matt with tears in his eyes. They hugged each other and cried. Roe?s dad honked the car horn and called for Roe.
?Roselyn, we are going be late for our plane!?
?I guess this is good-bye? I?ll miss you Matt. Just, no matters what happens, don?t forget me.?
?I will never forget you Roe.?
Matt and Roe hugged each other one last time then Roe turned around and headed towards the car. Matt slumped his heart broken body on the pine tree and watched.
?Matt!? Roe yelled running towards him.
They grabbed each others hands and kissed. All the memories of what they?ve done together spilt over Matt?s mind. He looked on as the person he cared about more than ever left his life forever.
?I will never forget you Roe?? Matt cried in his arms.

This is a scene from a book not yet published. It is about a boy the age of 15 who finds himself and the love inside his heart. What do you think?

7 comments – latest 4:

CessaJ13 (edited Apr 23, 2003)

awwwwwwwww. i like the story line, so romantic.

Balrog (edited Apr 23, 2003)

Makes me cry :(
Good Job ;D!

darkk_angel (edited Apr 24, 2003)

nice pic.... good story too... but dont think im one for mushy romances;)

rosalyn (edited Jul 6, 2003)

I like it! I like romance! XP

agrivation...death of my computer

pyrobarbie (Apr 22, 2003)

yea..igot super fustrated with my computer...this is the result...i didn't really do that..but i wish i could

7 comments – latest 4:

Mnemosyne (edited Apr 23, 2003)

I wish I could do it too. Someday I probably will, it will just cost alot of money (and since I'm not very strong) it will probably leave me with a mangled hand.

Equus (edited Apr 24, 2003)

*Agrees with Mnemosyne* You just need to fill in the inside of the 'O' and the 'S'.

darkk_angel (edited Apr 24, 2003)

oy.... heheheh i wish i could do that to the macs at my school....

RazorClaw (edited Apr 25, 2003)

*Agrees with darkk_angel* I hope to someday rid the world of macs and those iratating people that think they are better than ... non-macs

*cough* no offense

confusion

pyrobarbie (Apr 23, 2003)

just how i allways am....confused...or lost ^.~

4 comments – latest 4:

Balrog (edited Apr 23, 2003)

You are beatiful ^^

Equus (edited Apr 24, 2003)

Hehe, I like this one too. Draw more pictures so I can admire them ^^

pyrobarbie (edited Apr 24, 2003)

will do ^.~ i'm glad u like them

darkk_angel (edited Apr 24, 2003)

cute..... the hair shines are great... you are awesome at this stuff, pyro~~@<--princess leia is that how you spell it?

......

demons (Apr 21, 2003)

wawier

2 comments – latest 2:

Balrog (edited Apr 21, 2003)

what is it? :P

Turtlebuster (edited Apr 22, 2003)

it's a forest in front of mountains with a blue sky and a particularly lovely cloud in the background.
and birds.

moon over water

Airdrahana (Apr 20, 2003)

man Bakaneko`s is waw difrent from this (Dragon) is my sn over there yeesh i drew this same pick over there & it was so much easeyer to do i think i need practice with this painting program yeesh ><

6 comments – latest 4:

feena95 (edited Apr 20, 2003)

^^U i just understand the end.. @.@ cool!! the moon! i love it ^^

Spudz (edited Apr 20, 2003)

the moon looks shiny...

Balrog (edited Apr 21, 2003)

Great, you just need to work in the sea :)

darkk_angel (edited Apr 22, 2003)

nice moon! so fluffy... where the hell did that come from!?!?!

tear

Fairhair1 (Apr 19, 2003)

im still just playing around with this...pretty cool stuff.

9 comments – latest 4:

SandyDexHamtaro (edited Apr 21, 2003)

This...is...AWESOME!!!!!!! Wonderful use of colours, I must say.

darkk_angel (edited Apr 22, 2003)

beautiful lips... like the tear too.,....

Carlucci (edited Apr 25, 2003)

Wow! I love it! I like how you did that color! and the tears cool too

Doodlibop (edited May 8, 2003)

@.@
~wow~.
I wish I could color like that.

"Hello My Friends!"

Balrog (Apr 15, 2003)

yay ^_^... third Oekaki :P

11 comments – latest 4:

Belleza (edited Apr 15, 2003)

is that a poring? and does it have... an arm? 0.o

http://i.isa-geek.org/uploads/porink.gif sorry if it's not, just looks really similar o_O

raenboe (edited Apr 17, 2003)

OMG that thing is CUTE!

Balrog (edited Apr 18, 2003)

Poring? never knew it was a poring i just use my imagination ^^

SandyDexHamtaro (edited Apr 23, 2003)

Blobs! How adorable. You're good at blobs. I want this one!