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hahaha! everytime i look at it its even more funny! DO u think it sux cause i do! (its my drawing by the way if u havnt loooked so i can critize it right?)
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ChinkyFlip (edited Mar 12, 2003)

If you criticize your own work like that (especially negatively), no one will want to criticize with you. If you're looking for pity, then.. Stop it. I think this work is great for a beginner. I love the tones you did with the sun, and the mermaid's tail is cute. I'm guessing you don't know much about layers (not in this drawing, anyways). With more time put into this, I'm sure it could be great.

Go ahead and add a more lively background. Like a sandy beach, palmtrees, birds, dolphins jumping, other mermaids, rocks, ships, whatever you like. Let your imagination run wild--but not too wild.

Ladie

watermage248 (Mar 9, 2003)

Opinions opinions!! Im not quite sire whether this sucks or is ok so i neeeeeedddd opinions!

5 comments – latest 4:

Genkigirl7 (edited Mar 9, 2003)

LAY off of the mascara!
HA

Cienna (edited Mar 11, 2003)

yay! ^____^ it's really good cept you should try to use thinner lines!

Kazukie (edited Mar 11, 2003)

Is she pregnant?! I'd hope so..

ChinkyFlip (edited Mar 12, 2003)

Watermage, that's very beautiful. I love the chopsticks in her hair. =) They're so purty; I have a few sets of chopsticks at home myself.

This picture has a real lumberjack, hillbilly flavor. If that's what you were going for, then great! If not, then work on complimentary colors and body proportions. Also, a bit of her shirt is leaking into her arms, and her eyes are kind of bloody. =P

You might want to reduce the pixels of your line art a bit as well. Use a solid, 2 pixel (since it seems your comfortable with the thicker art). And line thickness variation around the face makes her seem 'very' chubby. Try again! I'm sure you'll do a great job. =)

Hey it's a crappy chibi!

Cienna (Mar 11, 2003)

Hey i'm so sorry about this like batch of crappy pictures! :3 I think i have some sort of artists block!? i mean i never was a good artist any way and the school's mouse doesn't help! ARGH!!!! *tears out hair*

3 comments – latest 3:

Kazukie (edited Mar 11, 2003)

I can't see it's legs... =\

Cienna (edited Mar 12, 2003)

Nope it's WAY to crappy to be having legsies

ChinkyFlip (edited Mar 12, 2003)

How cute! You should make friends with "Cherikitchan." I don't remember her name quite, really. Once again, don't blame your work on your mouse. It's skill that's the problem.

I love her shirt, by the way. I have one just like it (except the cloth is white, and the strings are blue). You've inspired me. =) I'll get to work on a drawing later.

Strange looking Tenshi

Nepty (Mar 8, 2003)

I have a pencil version of this character it was submitted a art show for our county fair and it got me 1st place, I sorta don't like the colors but I'll find good colors for her. Maybe purple or Dark blue. Who knows! ^_^ I really like the background to this , its so airy.

2 comments – latest 2:

Azelrellon (edited Mar 8, 2003)

Wow. I really like the wings!
And the background (or what is visible. =P) is like a panorama from RM2k...
The headress is also very nice...

ChinkyFlip (edited Mar 12, 2003)

Wow. Have you seen, "Neverending Story?" For some reason, it really brings to mind the "Childlike Empress". You've done a great job on the clouds. All that I see that needs work is her wings (much too jagged (unless you wanted it that way), hands, and most importantly, clothing folds. Try to clean up your lines. This would make a splendid picture to place in a collage--it's very beautiful.

Damien

Kregek_Kahn (Mar 11, 2003)

Ok! this is the first pic that I've ever done here. Man I didn't do very good on this did I? ^_^;; I'll try again sometime. Anyways this is a pic of my Friend's Furry character Damien the Hedgedemon

4 comments – latest 4:

Azelrellon (edited Mar 11, 2003)

FIRST!
Cool pic rene... I dunno how to draw anthro...

White_Kitty (edited Mar 11, 2003)

yay it's me char damien came out pretty cool tho ^_^

Kazukie (edited Mar 11, 2003)

Neat but I don't like his shoes or the background.. o.O;;

ChinkyFlip (edited Mar 12, 2003)

Aww.. He's got adorable wings. And I like the way you positioned the shadow under him.

Kazukie is right, however. Colorful (but not too colorful), crazy (but not ballistic), and mood setting backgrounds often leave a picture more attractive.

Example, you could have him standing in an alleyway with a single light up top, and a few doors on the brick walls, etc etc. That sort of thing. Let your imagination run wild. I can see lots of things in this picture. =)

Terqouse

Nepty (Mar 3, 2003)

WOw I like this verson of drawing even for a test it looks really good. ^_^ It took me a while to color but it looks pirtty. *yawn*"need sleepies, night ,night"

6 comments – latest 4:

ky (edited Mar 4, 2003)

Turquoise. Looks nice.

Kazukie (edited Mar 4, 2003)

Funky hair.. I like her shoulders.. His?

Knockoff (edited Mar 4, 2003)

Yea this is cool. I like the hair and the eyes.

ChinkyFlip (edited Mar 12, 2003)

It looks as though he's staring at you, like.. Wanting something more from you. It's a very complex drawing--even if you can't see it that way. ^_~

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Fin_beast (Mar 4, 2003)

Why is it always so dark?

5 comments – latest 4:

Fin_beast (edited Mar 4, 2003)

man

RabidMalikFanGirl (edited Mar 5, 2003)

Cuz I blew up the sun yesterday :)

Ari (edited Mar 6, 2003)

Forty-two is why.

ChinkyFlip (edited Mar 12, 2003)

Very symbolistic.

I luv purple

shinyoungKim (Mar 12, 2003)

WHAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!! This is like mai first tyme drawing on da computa...keke...write comments plz!!!!

2 comments – latest 2:

ChinkyFlip (edited Mar 12, 2003)

Lol. This is not the first time.. O_o I saw your other one. >>; But good job. She looks very surprised. I like the chosen eye color too--violet is very uncommon.

shinyoungKim (edited Mar 12, 2003)

I mean 1st time on this version...keke ( :( u caught me out man~ *sobz*)