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my wings are brocken
no room to fly
is this the cost of freedom
to give you up
letting the best of me die
giving in to myself
folowing a heart i don't know
so i'm left...
free and alone
brocken and bounded
the light i see is faded
a darkness surrounds me
nothing seems right
the pain lifting
as i drift into an emotionless state
feeling nothing
but dead inside

9 comments – latest 4:

darkk_angel (edited Jul 10, 2003)

awesome detail... beautiful picture..... the greytones accentuate the awesomeness of it, man! i love it!

nitegodess (edited Jul 14, 2003)

wow, that is a great picture. i also love your poetry. you have great talent

pyrobarbie (edited Jul 14, 2003)

thanx *feels loved*

nyao (edited Aug 5, 2003)

ooo.... i luv this pic.... i luv the tonez and darknezz... and great poem... ^^

Picnic

Turtlebuster (Aug 3, 2003)

>:}

8 comments – latest 4:

AnimalRights (edited Aug 4, 2003)

Oh, how cute. I love picnics!

Turtlebuster (edited Aug 4, 2003)

marcello dislikes paintbbs? i love paint bbs for doing metals/clouds/water. it's a little harder for me to detail them in paintbbs, but fun all the same. and fyi, those big white lumps are supposed to be like holes in the picture... i would have used black so that they wouldn't look like clouds, but i had already used black for the people/grave marks..

forgotten-memory (edited Aug 4, 2003)

oh,, ha ha, I thought it was...snow....

beautiful nonetheless.

nyao (edited Aug 5, 2003)

ooo... purtie.... i luv the colourz and the feeling it givez off.... ^^

Lizard Shirt

Turtlebuster (Aug 4, 2003)

Before anyone asks, no, he isn't made of lizard scales. i wanted to see that dot style on a person instead of clouds and water for a change. unfotunately, my hand gave out so i only did it half assed.

1 comment – latest 1:

marcello (edited Aug 5, 2003)

um, it doesn't look anything like lizard scales, or scales at all. Works pretty well in fact.

Tower2

Turtlebuster (Aug 3, 2003)

A 'sequel' to the lighthouse. i almost like the clouds, but not quite.

2 comments – latest 2:

taori (edited Aug 3, 2003)

Yow. Those clouds rock out loud.

Knockoff (edited Aug 5, 2003)

yea the clouds are awsome.! great job!

Hot summers

Eliafin (Jul 26, 2003)

*dies* X.x This is my first drawing with Lascaux so I put a LOT of effort in to it. Now the timer's off by about 15 minutes, even so, that's the longest I've ever spent on a drawing! ^_^ The bg sucks 'cause I'm useless at them -_-;; C&C would be nice ^_^;;

3 comments – latest 3:

marcello (edited Jul 26, 2003)

You might try adding detail in the background by using finer brushes (not black).
The lineart is pretty good, nice style. The rays of light look a little cheap, and I'm not sure if they should be there or not, cause at the moment they seem half-assed. I would recommending going over them with freehand eraser/paint until they look more natural.
Otherwise, pretty good for first time in the applet. I take it you picked it up quickly?

Eliafin (edited Jul 26, 2003)

Thank's for the comments, I'll see what I can do about the light, I usually cheat and use the filters on Photoshop! ^_^;; I'll see if I can fix the bg too, I normally don't bother but he needed something to lean on O.o;;
Heheh, I learn fast ^_^;;

:edit: Ack the layers are merged!! -_-;; I don't this I'll be able to do anything. O.o;;

Mikki (edited Aug 5, 2003)

^_^ it's really good, appart from the fact that his body looks a bit sort of square...I dunno, he doesn't have any shoulderblades O.o *is half asleep* don't mind me...

Eaten by the flames

Eliafin (Jul 18, 2003)

ooooo, see the dark-ish-ness

1 comment – latest 1:

Mikki (edited Aug 5, 2003)

I really like it.. Specily how you sort of got it to glow like a real fire...

Started as character devolpment..

Kazukie (Aug 3, 2003)

Ended up as lyrics. To the left you'll see a character I'm working on.. Kiku`Mae.. She's into the whole "Make love not war" thing. To the right, lyrics.. Guess the song and get a cookie. :d C&C welcome.

||edit|| The bluring on the animation got messed up. =X

7 comments – latest 4:

pyrobarbie (edited Aug 3, 2003)

i love the outfit..i want it!..good song too awesome pic

purplestarfishy (edited Aug 4, 2003)

wow it looks great!! the shading on the girl is brilliant and your writing looks so neat =^.^= yepyep me loves

nyao (edited Aug 4, 2003)

^^ wooo nice.... great detailz...and it'z true that believeing iz doing... or sumthin like that. ^^

Knockoff (edited Aug 5, 2003)

Great job Kazukie! WOnder shading coloring lineart and details. I like her hair. =)

shy

Lumi (Aug 3, 2003)

a random person... ^^'
just her clothes I had in my mind...
they're from a cleric of mine, one day i'll draw she for you ^_^

(sorry for the bad english)

7 comments – latest 4:

Mari (edited Aug 4, 2003)

^_^ Oh, very well done! *applause* I really like the hair, shiny! And such nice clean line art. . . I'm slightly jealous.

tappie_chan (edited Aug 4, 2003)

i very much like the shading and the highlights. the background is also very interesting.
loverly buddy
^__________________^

nyao (edited Aug 5, 2003)

oooo.... cute! ^^ great lineat and colouring.... i luv the fzzie background especially. ^^

Knockoff (edited Aug 5, 2003)

Very very good picture.! great shading and lineart! Nice background also, Nice colors and smoth.

John Crackers

Doodlibop (Jul 30, 2003)

I don't know why I drew it...I don't even think it's funny...

3 comments – latest 3:

marcello (edited Jul 30, 2003)

4 minutes on the intermediate board? shame ;)

Turtlebuster (edited Jul 30, 2003)

XD looks like most white guys to me!
j/k don't flame me

Mandy (edited Aug 5, 2003)

John Crackers, eh, Doodlibop?

Suicide Jump

SandyDexHamtaro (May 17, 2003)

I thought the theme was a little suggestive, so it's 13+. No, I'm not depressed or anything, just bored.

10 comments – latest 4:

Mnemosyne (edited May 22, 2003)

Xod, that's kind of the point. But actually it'll only od that if your lucky and land head down, I you land feet first you're screwed. You lower body will take it all the impact your legs will be mush, but by the time it gets to your head most of the force will have been used up and you might survive. You know about 70% of suicide attempts fail? people have shot themselves in the head and survived. (with extensive brain damage mind you, but still . . .)

SandyDexHamtaro (edited May 23, 2003)

Hahaha! More lovely pictures in my head!

Ameraq (edited Jun 17, 2003)

so jump head first...

Mandy (edited Aug 5, 2003)

Why jump at all?