"The Day Begins"

Cold hearted orb that rules the night,
Removes the colours from our sight,
Red is gray and yellow white,
But we decide which is right.
And which is an illusion?
Pinprick holes in a colourless sky,
Let insipid figures of light pass by,
The mighty light of ten thousand suns,
Challenges infinity and is soon gone.
Night time, to some a brief interlude,
To others the fear of solitude.
Brave Helios wake up your steads,
Bring the warmth the countryside needs.


~Moody Blues~

This is the best thing you've ever done here, in my opinion. It has great depth, I love the angle on the sidewalk and it definitely has a solitary mood to it.

YaY! comments!

lol cute

homg nice piccie, yo! ;>

delicious. the colors truly are edible..like some evil cotton candy or something. your usual sick meltyness paired with the muscle and bone definition is pretty freaktastic.

I'm glad you have varied up your color palette...it works extremely well for you in this piece. The colors remind me of sunset on a desert. The figure is strong and struggling...I love that you used alot of "verticle" lines...great movement. Keep up the great work.

This turned into something wonderful. What can i say... this is fucking great. *into the favourites folder*

Wonderfully rendered and excellent choice of colours.

No squee, it would have been a pointer and a hint if you offered advice on how to fix it to make it look more like a gorillaz character.
Or if you had said "nice try, it looks good but not quite as it should. I also had trouble with my rendition of a gorillaz character"
Cause if this is, as you say "not very gorillazish", then yours is way off the mark as well.
But, as I see it, both yours and alones are good versions of yourselves as gorillaz characters.
If you are going to criticize, do so with the intention and advice on how to fix it.


My hostility is only directed at meaningless, empty criticism

Sorry kejoco for not being as literate as you are. I'm sorry if I didn't word my flippin comment right. People make mistakes, no one's perfect. If people don't comment or draw like you think they should then you shouldn't put your nose where it shouldn't be. We all have different ways of commenting. They may mean different things. I mean come on! People shorten up comments and usually people get the picture. This is the internet for crying out loud! No one is definately not going to be perfect at criticism and commenting. You shouldn't go off and about ranting on how people comment. Someone could say you're too literate or something then rant on about that. Cool it down kejoco, and remember that no one is you.

O_O
How about we just say he tried hard which is all that matters...
Geez, must you people get so into it?
Just ignore what everyone else says...
>>;

Thank you sooo much. I'm MUCH better with Adobe Photoshop Elements 4.0, however~ this is for someone on deviantART... VashSystems (Joey) to be exact! Hee hee... heh heh... and I'm Palinorah on deviantart.com, too! ^^ Oh... and again, thanks for the comment. It didn't turn out too creat, but I DID try using an oekaki. :3

This guy looks like he could handle the Tums...Cool style Clox

That intentional color banding is so slick.

slick - absolutely. i must be the thick lines but his nose looks too far to (our) left. its definitely that thick line on the right of it, but it looks like its broken or summit, but that just adds to hard he looks

cuuuute freckles :).... I can never get them to look right when I draw them, they just look like really bad acne.

thanks :)

the hair and the hair color are really cool