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Dragnakita (Sep 12, 2004)
drawn in 3 hours 10 min

I need to color it. But, this is the line art.

Dragnakita (Sep 12, 2004)
drawn in 53 min

It didn't really take me this lone... I was just on AOL for a while chatting until one of my friends went to bed, so I really only spent like twenty minutes on the fire... I will make it look better... does anyone have any suggestions on how I could make the fire look better?

Thear (Sep 12, 2004)

0_o Flame looks awesome! i can't wait to see this ready! =)

davincipoppalag (Sep 13, 2004)

Ambitious piece Liz. That flame is good, and so is your lineart.

Dragnakita (Sep 13, 2004)

Hee hee... thanks, you guys. So... I am Advanced board material? >:3 Then, if this is good, be expecting even better in the future... I can't wait until I'm sixteen, right now I'm thirteen... o.O; I thought that I had forgotten how to draw until I drew this and read your comments. Heh heh... this is also the first male figure that I have successfully drawn. Okay. So... I guess I should scratch the fire off of my to work on list. Miranda said that the line art was all horrible and rough with wobbly lines... I'm glad that there are others who think differently. But, all comments, good and bad are appriciated.
Liz 'o4

Xodiak (Sep 13, 2004)

I love the flame! I cannot wait to see the rest of it finished! <:D
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Dragnakita (Sep 13, 2004)
drawn in 1 hour 46 min

I colored his hair, eyes, skin, and the cross... the timer is off by quite a bit. I stayed on the cellphone with my luffily cutie and chatted online most of the time.

DreameRadial (Sep 13, 2004)

Ooh, this is turning out nicely =3

Dragnakita (Sep 13, 2004)

Nya~ thanks. Do you think that the cross looks good enough? It's supposed to be golden...
Liz 'o4

Gigandas (Sep 13, 2004)

Hey, this is coming along pretty good :).I have a suggestion though if you don't mind, you may want to put some reflection of the flames into his eyes too :)....

kejoco (Sep 13, 2004)

You might also want to have a look at the hand holding the fire, it appears to be backwards
excellent job in the fire

Dragnakita (Sep 13, 2004)
drawn in 1 hour 7 min

Okay. Thankies for the comments. =3 I will fix his clothing tomorrow as well... yes, I will ad fire to his eyes. >=3 Mwa ha... ha..

Cordelia_Pink (Sep 14, 2004)

Ooooh pretty!!! This is nice. I especially like the fire. The fire is in his hand. =)

Hakkai (Sep 14, 2004)

Not to pick out the little details or anything (I just want to see a good picture outta this. >=) ), but the left hand is wrong. The thumb should be on the other side of the hand (as Kejoco stated). His shoulders are too slanted, it makes his neck look too long. His ear is a bit too high... And the left fore arm looks a bit short. The shading can use some touches (you left some unshaded areas where there should be shade). The wrinkles look good, though. -thumbs up- Good wrinkles and fire!

Lines are a bit too thick in my oppinion, but thats just me. >_>; Can't wait 'till you're finished!

Dragnakita (Sep 15, 2004)

Okay... I will do what I can... I was kinda tired when I drew this picture... I will try my best to fix it. I think that the lines are thick as well.. I can't fix that, though... I do appriciate the comments. I won't be able to work on this picture for about a week or two... there are some things going on in real life and I also need to be updating my website... personal problems that have to do with me and no one else in the world... x.x; bah... I'm sorry... really... I am...
Liz 'o4

Dragnakita (Sep 26, 2004)
drawn in 50 min

Dragnakita (Sep 28, 2004)
drawn in 2 hours 36 min

Dragnakita (Sep 28, 2004)
drawn in 8 min

I knew that would happen. x.x; INTERMEDIATE BOARD... but, then again... I basicaly said screw it with the background... I gave up... T_T next time I draw in the Advanced board, if there is a next time, I'll make sure that I am willing to draw something worth looking at... sorry, guys... bah... I know, I'm a loser... I suck... x.x;

Xodiak (Oct 29, 2004)

This is awesome! You are definately not a loser and you certainly do not suck. You are a very talented person. This is a very beautiful drawing and the background is fantastic. <:)
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