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Doodlibop (Feb 25, 2004)
drawn in 26 min

Doodlibop (Feb 25, 2004)
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Doodlibop (Feb 25, 2004)
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Doodlibop (Feb 25, 2004)
drawn in 49 min

Doodlibop (Feb 25, 2004)
drawn in 58 min

fleeting_memory (Feb 25, 2004)

this is amazing-but so sad-I love the way the guys hand is opening toward her and us-that's HARD to draw (at least for me ^^) The lighting on the skin contrasted by the black background and the white hair has a strong heavenly ghost kind of effect-I hope wherever he is you'll see him again-astounding job

Soshell (Feb 25, 2004)

oh wow i love this, their golden bodies make them look so statuesque but they still look alive...and sad...i love this so much its beautiful ::sigh::
thats a good song too, my immortal..it fits with this pic :) and i like how they're a slightly different colour too...great anatomy! good thing angels are anatomically incorrect cuz that would suck for the guy...if he were....a guy...um...yeah i like this pic ^^

marcello (Feb 25, 2004)

um, he's missing something...

Marienkind (Feb 25, 2004)

angels aren't supposed to have those parts anyway. and besides, it's 13+.

it's so glowy and purty... no intelligent criticism out of me today.

dixielandcutie (Feb 25, 2004)

wow, thats so pretty. i love the glow...so nice

DeadlyBlondeArcher (Feb 25, 2004)

Your figures have very good proportions, and you did an especially nice job on his hands, one of them is at a very difficult angle. Don't lose the way you have it sketched out when you finish this because it's great right now.

PinkuEspeon (Feb 25, 2004)

MARCELLO!! You... you... bleh... nevermind... but, hey, Doodlibop, I think that this picture is very pretty... I wish that I was as good as you... you rawk! ^_^

Doodlibop (Feb 25, 2004)
drawn in 7 min

...minus the line art! I actually perfer it this way.

What do you guys think?
And thank you for your comments!

Gigandas (Feb 26, 2004)

Yeah, I definitely think that this was a change for the better.Lineart on this one just wouldn't be right.I like the whole gold thing you did there.Almost looks like a statue or something you might have in your house that suddenly started shimmering.This is very well done.

method3 (Feb 26, 2004)

Overall I think the lineart wasn't so great with the feeling you had going, but I don't completely like it without the lineart either. Especially because now the figures have no features whatsoever! Maybe you can add back in the lineart and then go in with a real light eraser in specific places to soften the harsher line (as in fade in the line or something).

DeadlyBlondeArcher (Feb 26, 2004)

I liked it both ways, but I like it better this way. (That's just my opinion, I don't like most lineart -yours has been an exception) You can still add detail without it being so drastically lined, if you wanted to, but I love it just like this. Gotta keep it how you like it, cuz ya just can't please everybody. :) Either way, it still has a great feeling to it, and that's what counts.

Soshell (Feb 27, 2004)

oh no! it's still great but now some of the emotion went away with the facial features. i agree that you should do some subtle lineart...if you can...i dont know if you could change something that you declared finished but if you can thats just a suggestion...as long as you like it you dont have to change it :)

foxman8245 (Feb 28, 2004)

wow!!! I love this!! Look like angels!

fleeting_memory (edited Mar 1, 2004)

Ah no! what happened? You blurred it all? you lost so much character with the line art...I loved how the faces described their longing for each other and how you could see his hand reach out with the fingers...it still looks good but I liked it much better the first way-though I admit I like the hair without the outline

morbidboblover (Mar 2, 2004)

Wow....that is amazing! I love the colors and the detail!

Asridaein (Nov 9, 2004)

this is soo awesome! you did a great job on this.