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Harmanye (Feb 16, 2004)
drawn in 1 hour 48 min

Harmanye (edited Feb 16, 2004)

OH well, aren't we in the critical mood today? I'm sure that will help me improve immensly, I'm so glad you took this time out of your personal life to leave such an insightful and worthwhile comment. Thank. You. -_-
*is P.ed off, don't mind her*

No, I'm not rambling to myself, that was in response to a comment left by a certain person. 'Tis gone now.

Zinc (Feb 16, 2004)

Yup. Deleted. Anyways, the left shoulder looks a bit wide/long. Compared to the reference picture, you have the background closer than it really is, and the light is coming from a different point. In the reference picture, the light is coming from a point slightly to the right, rather than directly above him.. and the light has more blue too. Looks like a lot of details are missing so far (background wise), but this looks promising. Good luck. ;p

Harmanye (Feb 16, 2004)

I'd love to finish it, I haven't the space, I'm begging for more at the moment, With the light thing, if you notice, I changed the angles slightly with the scarcophagus (which is I think what it might be called (and might be spelt)) And now that you mention it, yes, the shoulder does look alittle long^^;. the background is on a different layer, so if I do get more space, I can just Move tool it back a little.

Zinc (Feb 16, 2004)

Well, you could've asked me. :/ You got more space now.. hmm.

Harmanye (Feb 16, 2004)

I didn't know :( Sowwy. I've forgotten anyhting I might've learned in the while I've been gone-ish.

Harmanye (Feb 16, 2004)
drawn in 3 min

Oh this is fun, all I want to do, is select a stupid rectangle, so I can move the stupid shoulder, over ten freaking pixels to the left. But does it let me do that? Nooo, of ocurse it doesn't, because the bloody applet, or the bloody computer doesn't WANT to make this anyeasier than it has to be.

Harmanye (Feb 16, 2004)
drawn in 1 hour 52 min

Once again, the tools just stop working. At all.

taori (Feb 16, 2004)

Ooh, man, that background's awesome. I love the lighting on the stones, they look real. I also adore the ground. Gimli's looking pretty good too. Sorry about your tool problems. :( Wish I could help you.

Harmanye (Feb 16, 2004)

Ah, it's no problem, it's probably good they stopped, or I would have screwed it up worse ^^; I was just in a really bad mood. And I've no clue why. But whatever it was messed with my Grammar; "The tools just stop working. At all."... Yikes.
Thanks for the comment, though ^_^

Gigandas (Feb 16, 2004)

Taori's right, love the texture with the bricks and things.I really like the light shining in there, but looking at your reference, I think the center of the beam could use some white white(as in R:255,G:255, and B:255).But good job overall^^.

Harmanye (Feb 16, 2004)

White, yes of course *bangs head on desk*, I should have done that when I made the light in the first edit. Thank you oO;.

Gigandas (Feb 16, 2004)

Sorry I mentioned this late, but I thought it was better than never mentioning it^^;;;...

davincipoppalag (Feb 17, 2004)

I like the lighting alot.. and the overall feel..