This is one of your oekakis that have a more unique style than your other works, although I'm sure you intended to make it that way ^_^. Kawaii little sadistic Bethy, hehe *pets both chibi Beth and real Beth's head*. The combinations you used to create this piece is bizarre, but it adds a nice and interesting twist to the picture, although is the red-spot-maybe-blood? thing representing something...? I just can't figure that out O_o. I'm amazed at how well you pulled off the gray background, and I love how vivid the whole bg looks ^ ^. Great pick, Urei... and now I must return to Koneko-sama!
~ TK-San

very cool... nice lineart and colouring... :)

this is pretty damn cool! i like it alot. especially the blood splattered on one side and the style you've drawn it in. awesome! way to go!

Illuvet*
-stares at the bg- -gains a headache- The colors... they're so bright and neon-like... and the shapes are so random... But who says that's a bad thing? Well... maybe my aching head, hehe ^_^;;. Yet I still like the originality of the bg, and the colors fit strangely well together... either that or my vision got impared ^-^;;.
The colors of the girl (probably you) are good and fit well, although you could've done more shading (don't mind me much when I'm on that topic: I'm somewhat obsessed on the quality of shading *sweatdrops and Koneko-sama rolls her (or his {snicker}) eyes* The lines could be more accurate, and although the color of the lips goes very well with the pic, I don't think the dots are supposed to be there... O_o
I love the brilliance of the eyes, and although the font color could be changed, overall, I like this picture. ^_^ You're improving fast, Koneko~
~Takeru

P.S.: Do you want to know why I said *(or his)* in my above comment? It's because I don't think your profile is correct, telling other people you're male... *smirks* Well, I hope you corrected the mistake before you receive this! ^ ^;;

weeee! i will. At least it doesnt look bad... The only thing to make this picture alittle more stylish would be to use the pen or airbrush tool on the lineart. thats all ^_-

Beth, you are amazing. *hug*
I felt compelled.

Sparklies are fun! *eats the sparkles*

Beth, I never can critisizesomething very well on your art, you know that... but right now the only thing, is that the lips are so...dollish, like a perfect shape, lips aren't perfect, but these are like parallelled all around. thats all...
~*~Kit:.:.

So this is the finished product, huh? I love the hair color (so brilliant red ^_^), and I agree: the face's shading is as near as perfect as it can get... or at least, until I can research more into this criteria, but moving on... I also admire how you colored and drew the golden stream, and the sudden change of the shape really improves your oekaki ^ ^. Plus, the semi-transparent stars circling around it add a nice touch. Yet I can't help agree with Kit, at least a litte... the eyes are great, but the lips (although very good) don't look very natural, and the upper nose line could've been erased, too. However, they are only small details you can improve, and the overall work looks terrific!

WhOa... the girl reallly is going to drown in her hair... *runs away before Urei-sama can attack*

oo, this looks really good, but do you use layers? that would stop the outline... but the hand shape is done very well. maybe define the beads alittle... find a light source and have a light spot on the surface where it faces the source, darker on the the side. easy easy and very useful for defination ^_-

suks 4 him...just joking this is VERY dramatic!!!!

~Yo
*stares at self* If only I had that sweater... *stares more* Do I actually have that long hair? *stares until my eyes pop out* How can you still remember what I said the other day...? *Koneko-sama glares* I'll stop now.
The yellow color of the yang is probably better than the original white in this oekaki, and I'm glad that it's that color ^_^. I like the symbol, I love the swirls, and I adore the circles ^_^. The face is elegant, too, and although once again the lines could be more accurate, the figure seems almost perfect for some reason ^_^. I guess it really fits in this drawing.
I see that you haven't put any shading in this picture, and looking at it, I think it would've been nice if the left side was light while the right side was darkened to put more emphasis on the meaning inside the drawing. Yet it isn't as if it looks as if that's missing in the picture... to be honest, it looks as fulfilled as can be... except for minor adjustments ^ ^;;.
I love this oekaki: it's so meaningful *sniff*. Of course, this may be because that's ME, but still ^_^. The picture really goes well with my quote, and this whole thing inspired me to do ANOTHER poem that you have already read. It is an outlet for inspiration!
||Fantastic||
~Takeru

Heh, to tell you the truth? I copied-and-pasted it.

ooo, i like it alot!! very well done ^_^

OKay i'll change teh to the and I might draw his body, but before i was tired of it so i didn't do the body. I'll do another version then. ^_^ thanks for the wonderful comments!

O.O GREEN HAIR!! YA FOR FLOATING HEADS! Great job on Shading!!

*bows down to the goddess of profiles*

hehehe.. soo cyooote! its pretty good.. Curtis looks a lot diff from the comic but still himself.. and I love it. You're good at requests. nice details..

or a tablet pc O_O

This is sweet. I like it, and the picture would make a really sweet welcome home greeting card. = ) Is Copper your kitty?

yup, Copper's one of my babies

Wow, this is wonderful. I love your sun pic almost as much as your moon pic. Can't wait to see what else you're gonna do. :)

Not bad at all for a first try..The shapes are very nice, as are the colors. I like the moon picture better but this is a good start.Keep at it!

This is your first attempt? I HATE you, just kidding. You really seem to have a good command on the tools. Perhaps you're already working in computer graphics? = )

Wow, I love your shading techniques! They truly add volume to the whole picture! And your wings aren't white like most of them are, and although I love white wings, your uniquely (is that a word?) colored wings are beautiful and do fit in this pic ^_^. I like the bg, although it may be too much in contrast compared to the bright colors of the focus, and I also like the way you hid the girl's eyes... a wise decision *nods*. However, maybe you could add a little more details to this picture, such as putting more detail in the hair and maybe drawing creases and such on the clothes...? I don't know, but it feel as if something's missing. Yet this oekaki is already fantastic, and I love it!

OOO! I agree with Pence, I like the idea! Awesome job!

Thanks X3