Wow, I love your shading techniques! They truly add volume to the whole picture! And your wings aren't white like most of them are, and although I love white wings, your uniquely (is that a word?) colored wings are beautiful and do fit in this pic ^_^. I like the bg, although it may be too much in contrast compared to the bright colors of the focus, and I also like the way you hid the girl's eyes... a wise decision *nods*. However, maybe you could add a little more details to this picture, such as putting more detail in the hair and maybe drawing creases and such on the clothes...? I don't know, but it feel as if something's missing. Yet this oekaki is already fantastic, and I love it!
drawn in 1 hour 25 min