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ocean view

kisara (Aug 5, 2005)

I posted at the intermediate for tips to get better..alas in beginner I get none..u__u..
please critique..?? ^^..

this was based off a painting in real life..^^

my hand hurts now..e__e..*shakes mouse* and ...I am sorry if colors seem off to everyone. My computer is bad and colors get weird on me..^^;;;;

7 comments – latest 4:

emmamommalag (Aug 5, 2005)

I like this picture very much. I agree that it needs more sharpness in places. The places depend upon your intention.. I see the plants as mostly underwater with the water surface being the defining line.. in that case, the plants and grass above the water line need sharpening. If you intended the plants to be in the foreground with the the water as the background, then the whole thing needs sharpening. Hope this makes sense. :-\

kisara (Aug 5, 2005)

thank you all very much *^^* I will work on this some more with what has been stated ^^

oikitsumaru (Aug 5, 2005)

I disagree with davin about the water that is furthur away being the darkest. Its not nessesarily true. Maybe if it were at nighttime. And I also disagree with emma, If you want your focus to be on the plants in the front, that is where you should be more detailed. Not even nessesarily sharpened. The background you can get away with it being more out of focus. And with shading, things closest to the sun should be brighter. Since there isn't anything blocking light.
XD It is really nice, what you have. I think you have a really good feel for backgrounds!

lycene (Aug 5, 2005)

Actually, I don't mind the coloring at all; it's very pretty, and could be more so if it was more defined. Also, I think that it would be much more powerful compositionally if you lowered the horizon line and/or raised the hill in front to make the difference between the two really stand out. I can't do landscapes for beans, but you really have something going here--good luck!

Another avatar

George_Goat (Aug 3, 2005)

Another avatar commision for someone's birthday. =O

4 comments – latest 4:

Shoebox (Aug 3, 2005)

ooh, neat... could use slightly less blotchy lineart (though goodness knows I'm not one to talk, I'm not good at it myself) but I really like the skin done,a nd the shading...

Xodiak (Aug 3, 2005)

Mmmm... she has a beautiful shape! And her shades are fabulous! <:)
|XOD|

oikitsumaru (Aug 3, 2005)

Love the radical colors. Very impressive. =p

22darkangel22 (Nov 2, 2005)

i want shades like those!those shades are the shit ^_^

Hopeful.

quintessence (Aug 3, 2005)

Mm, solids.

10 comments – latest 4:

fleeting_memory (Aug 4, 2005)

nice job on the lips and good hand-very nice :)

Ian (Aug 4, 2005)

ooohh ahhh! very well done! like the pastel colours!

Knockoff (May 3, 2006)

I love this, everything about it. Esp. the colors. Wish she'd draw here more :[

Sweetcell (May 5, 2006)

Looks like a pop poster, this is beautifully colored, I'm with you knockoff.

Public Boards/Beginner

hideyourface (Aug 3, 2005)

4 comments – latest 4:

Xodiak (Aug 3, 2005)

Sexy, will she take off the rest of her clothes too? Hehe! >;D
|XOD|

Zakura (Aug 3, 2005)

I really like her shirt, and the shadows, and the time...Wow :D

silver_maiden (Aug 3, 2005)

Pose is really cool

oikitsumaru (Aug 4, 2005)

onna no ko? interesting.

Public Boards/Intermediate

Beware, L

Garnet (Jul 31, 2005)

Oooh. Finally, some legitimate Death Note fanart from me. :D
That series is so amazing... <333
I wonder what Raito is planning... n__n;;

7 comments – latest 4:

solve (Jul 31, 2005)

perfect! these two look fantastic. kudos upon kudos.

DieChan (Aug 1, 2005)

I adore the lineart on the hair! *o* Great coloring, the jeans look real. :3

Gigandas (edited Aug 5, 2005)

For some reason, I see Cloud and Garnet in this picture....wonder if this manga/anime show has similar characters?

-Not to mention, your user name here is Garnet :o....*Twilight Zone theme*

oikitsumaru (Aug 5, 2005)

mewh! I have the first couple novels that I bought while I was in Hakone, Japan. =_= however, I can speak japanese, but I can't read it worth crap. okay, so I can read some stuff... thats beside the point. Anyways, this is really wonderful!

pain

~unwritten_law_girl~ (Jul 30, 2005)

>.> i dunno..

10 comments – latest 4:

Truearashi (Aug 1, 2005)

really REALLY cool pic' ^_^ the wings kick ass
"pain really sucks" it has a nice ring to it xD

~unwritten_law_girl~ (Aug 1, 2005)

lol, thank you!!^_^

Cianteed (Aug 3, 2005)

you know what else sucks? crohn's disease.

Sora-chan (Aug 31, 2005)

ccol! ^-^ that looks like Kaname from Juvenile Orion.

Public Boards/Beginner

Koinu-kun as Koneko-kun!

xiau (Jul 29, 2005)

I've always wondered what Koinu-kun would look like as a koneko ^o^

Sorry, Hakkai. I know, I'm flooding the boards with koinu-kun waaay too much. But I can't help it -_-

5 comments – latest 4:

KaykuyoAkabane (Jul 29, 2005)

Oy, So Kawaii! ^.^ I luff it, keep up the good work! <3

whitebunny1063 (Jul 29, 2005)

cool

xiau (Aug 1, 2005)

Thanks for the comments!

DivineStar (Aug 1, 2005)

Aww....KAWAII!!! >XD LOL! I love the bell...so cute ^___^

Angel of Light

sheniko (Jul 21, 2005)

Yay! Zen is the Angel of Light, Zeno is the Half-Breed, and Arishol is the Angel of Dark. Zeno and Arishol will be done after this.

4 comments – latest 4:

darkshadow (Jul 21, 2005)

uummmm ok kool pic what manga are you reading

sheniko (Jul 21, 2005)

It's my story.

darkshadow (edited Jul 28, 2005)

ah kool i loke you picture i dont know why others have not commented. i say to hell with them and keep the pics comming :P

oikitsumaru (Aug 2, 2005)

gosh. I kinda feel bad for the guy! Looks like he's had a rough time. Lovely work!

eyes

fer_sasaki (Jul 16, 2005)

just doodling...guess what, I'm totally crazy about eyes, as you can see...^^;

5 comments – latest 4:

~E.U.R.O.B.E.A.T.~ (Jul 16, 2005)

If only the eyelashes were softer like the rest of the picture, then it would look better.

sarna (Jul 16, 2005)

I think this is a very good picture. I especialy like the hair.

Akechi456 (Jul 16, 2005)

i love em...i want contacts that color...and always have.unfortunantly im only 11,so i cant get em yet....>.<

oikitsumaru (Aug 6, 2005)

eeeyyyeeess.. ^_^ love it. I suck at drawing eyes. XD I'm a hands sort of person.. *dies*

Public Boards/Intermediate

innocent..

~unwritten_law_girl~ (Jul 15, 2005)

safty-save

3 comments – latest 4:

jigglybuttmonky (Jul 15, 2005)

ooohhh i like this picture its pretty!!!it caught my eye *.*

oikitsumaru (Jul 15, 2005)

I really like the black and silver hair. Its sooo very neat!

~unwritten_law_girl~ (Jul 16, 2005)
drawn in 7 min

7 MINUTES!? woah..

Xodiak (Jul 16, 2005)

Fantastic background, I love it! >:D
|XOD|

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