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Just a doodle right now. :) Maybe I'll colour later.

No, I'm not implying that salmon is a Bohemian snackfood. XD I just like random names sometimes.

CRITIQUE. I CAN'T DRAW REALISM. The forehead looks like it needs help. D;

9 comments – latest 4:

mybettastorm (Nov 11, 2005)

You shouldnt be critasizing so much, simplt tell the person what they need to work on. I dont think that is so hard, Im trying to do that more often myself! :) XP

Minty_hippo (edited Nov 12, 2005)

I disagree with you, this is not up to the standard of intermidiate level, and besides the more critacism (sp?) the more that person can improve on. Critasism (sp?) is nothing to get affended of and nor is it personal. Hideyourface may not have included why he thinks its beginner, but you should know by looking at this anyone can draw that, theres no colour just a plain background and no heart gone into this drawing. Just because its over 30mins and supposidly has effort doesn't mean its intermidiate, anyone can do that, if thats the case then everybody would be drawing on intermidiate. I suggest you work on your pictures more and stick to the beginners board for doodles like this, otherwise carry on what you do best ^___^ like to see more pictures from you and see your full potential!!
By this I mean, go for something you've never thought of drawing before, something that will blow everyones mind and think ' WOAAAAA THIS KICKS BUTT!!! '
Sorry if I seemed that I was getting at you but I couldn't resist >___<

marcello (Nov 12, 2005)

*criticism (It's spelled like critic)
*offended
*it's (its is possessive)
*supposedly
*intermediate (it's freaking written on this page)

You asked for critique, however, so I am not surprised people gave such comments. You can't draw realism, but that's does not seem to apply here since you did not even attempt to do so. I would say, yes, this is beginner level. While the lines are fairly clean, they still lack thought and seem rather arbitrary. Random text does not a make a picture better or more abstract, and in this case, I would say it detracts from the overall piece. I imagine you added it because you felt the picture was missing something, it still is.

This is all very fine and well for a quick sketch, but it's hard to imagine it took you 30 minutes.

George_Goat (Feb 12, 2006)

*le-gasp* Here's an actual tip on realism. =O
The eyes are generally a bit further back on the head, that's probably why the forehead looks 'funny' to you. ^^;;
Though I think this picture really looks cool in a designy sort of way, it does kind of look like she has just one eye in the middle of her forehead.
The shape of the head/chin bugs me just a little, too, but it's not too far off, there, and I'm sure not all people have perfectly round heads anyways.

I hope I helped!

Public Boards/Beginner

ONMYOUJI ABENO SEIMEI-????????-

manadom_hearts (Nov 10, 2005)

When it says at a word, it is just "an exceptionally talented person." It is the person who existed really in the middle of the Heian period, and is ONMYOUJI of Legend

2 comments – latest 2:

Skai (Nov 11, 2005)

I love the textures in this. <3 The gold in the background especially, it looks like I could touch my screen and feel it. o__o

BUTTERFLIES. <3

marcello (Nov 11, 2005)

great show. you should draw mune mune ;)

Specialty Boards/Elite Bastards

A Place Beyond the Sun

DeadlyBlondeArcher (Nov 8, 2005)

(Venus and Mars) Occasionally I have a semi-creative thought...

Speak to me so I can understand your tongue
You seem rather fragile
It's been said
it's cold beyond the sun
Have you ever been there?

Communicating thoughts of ways to never have to speak again
let me be the fire in your head
Bring what's yours, I'll take what's mine
and meet you on the other side
We'll leave a sign so anyone can find us

A better place, a sweeter time
we won't need any wings to fly
A place beyond the sun....

25 comments – latest 4:

Miss_DJ (Nov 12, 2005)

another positively ARCHERESQUE masterpiece! love the texture of Mz Venus.

sincity (Nov 12, 2005)

I'm loving the thought process here. The painting is GREAT!!!! :}

darkshadow (Nov 17, 2005)

the stone looks great
love the colors of mars
the Venus man the texture is awsome wow

Renuar (Dec 12, 2005)

your good, very good. i like.

Public Boards/Beginner

Fsck you.

Skai (Nov 8, 2005)

Yes, this is mainly aimed toward the homophobes/gay bashers of this board. I've just seen so much lately that I just have to say something.

IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT, SCROLL PAST IT, BITCHES. WE DON'T NEED TO KNOW IF IT SICKENS YOU OR MAKES YOU 'THROW UP IN YOUR MOUTH A LITTLE.'

Damn, and don't try to pass your flame off just because the art is less than perfect. I see tons of pictures that are below par, and you people just skip right the fuck past them. I came to this goddamn board to avoid drama, but I just can't help this. I hate people who can't accept that people can draw whatever the hell they want. I usually don't take that much of an aggressive stance, but if this is how people are gonna react to pictures, it doesn't look like there's much room for a gay man here.

19 comments – latest 4:

solve (Nov 16, 2005)

there will always be someone in the world to piss you off, dont mind them.

marcello (Nov 16, 2005)

My two cents: leave. everyone hates you. and you should die.

But on a less serious note, you actually can't draw whatever you want on 2draw despite what some people might say. In fact, 90% of the crap posted gets deleted. So that leads me to believe we are quite crapaphobic. I think the key problem in "Naruto and sasuke having sex" is the "naruto" part. I mean for crying out loud, 90% of the people here can't draw anime worth crap, and I'm sure there are plenty of japanese artistics committing suicide over the junk posted here every day.

Kichiku (edited Nov 17, 2005)

Marcello: So you are actually saying, if we'd draw really perfect looks-like-a-Japanese-drew-it Naruto and Sasuke having sex people won't mind?...I don't think so.

HunterKiller: That's what we're all saying the whole time...but no one actually keeps to it.

SanzoGirl (Nov 18, 2005)

But Marcello, don't you delete the drawings if they're under 20 minutes and are just up there to piss people off? I mean, the yaoi drawings have had like, no time spent on them. They hardly have any shading at all, and they have a half second backround. :/

Public Boards/Intermediate

Don't kiss the dead, kiss the living!

TheCrimsonKing (Nov 7, 2005)

Or you'll fucking regret it.

Referenced myself.

11 comments – latest 4:

Northern_shadow (Nov 8, 2005)

haha, it looks just like one guy from my class :D
http://irc-galleria.net/view.php?nick=Muffinssi&image_id=1474615
neat pic btw :3

Renuar (Nov 9, 2005)

Its really well drawn, very interesting. encore

DeadlyBlondeArcher (Nov 9, 2005)

I love the way he appears to be either in front of a painting, or just coming out of the background. I choose to think he's coming "out of it". cool

saucy (Nov 28, 2005)

Ooooh... I love it.

Public Boards/Beginner

Honey for the last time stop killing the nieghbors

mybettastorm and Fobix (Oct 23, 2005)

It's a grimreeper as a kid. Just decided to try a holloween pic i screwed up but oh well

13 for the blood i guess

8 comments – latest 4:

marcello (Oct 27, 2005)

you people are silly. the grim reaper was never a kid. =P

mybettastorm (edited Oct 28, 2005)

Yes you are right Marcello, but there is a little something called CREATIVITY!!! lol
Thank You Very much for reminding me!!!

mybettastorm (Nov 7, 2005)
drawn in 58 sec

Just wanted to draw a pic but had to finishlol

TOL-CREW (Nov 7, 2005)

TOYS SHOULD STAY IN THE TOY CHEST!

Naruto and Sasuke kissing!!

Sasuke-fan-Sapphire (Nov 6, 2005)

Yes... this is naruto and sasuke kissing... please don't flame me! I like this couple even though many people think yaoi couples are digusting... but I like it! So please... if you don't like it don't comment on it... thank you.

5 comments – latest 4:

101_Torchic_101 (Nov 6, 2005)

^o^ OMG! YAY!

marcello (Nov 6, 2005)

I'm disgusted by the poor coloring and lines.

TOL-CREW (edited Nov 6, 2005)

lmao bwahaha

Kichiku (Nov 16, 2005)

wtf? I haven't commented this yet? But it's so sweet ;_____; Except Naruto's shoulder part is dark blue/navy blue not dark orange, but what the heck xD

Specialty Boards/Collaborations

Collab with Elleth =)

kristine and Elleth (Oct 27, 2005)

Quick sketch before bed! Tee hee hee they have undies on thier heads =P

10 comments – latest 4:

Noremac (Oct 29, 2005)

should i feel bad for feeling aroused?

marcello (Oct 29, 2005)

yes

kristine (Nov 5, 2005)
drawn in 5 min

ok, lets just say that this is finsihed, ey? cus it didnt look like it was going to get done.

Estecca (Nov 6, 2005)

They should start an undie-head cult. O:

Public Boards/Beginner

Keiyan

artemisapolla~moonandsun (Sep 29, 2003)

Changed it completely. Was ashamed to have the other drawing up here, so I drew over it. ^_^

6 comments – latest 4:

Marienkind (Sep 30, 2003)

if you don't have enought time to make a picture perfect, there's the option in your submit page called unfinished. you can feel free to continue a picture the following day.

Marcello is low on bandwidth for running this site. he doesn't want 5 minute pictures to suck up bandwidth. most people here at least aim for 20 minutes.

artemisapolla~moonandsun (Oct 27, 2005)
drawn in 19 min

WAY different than the original. xD
Sorry, kids. Hated it before. Decided to make Reahnna a man, because 2draw wouldn't let me delete it. ^_^
Ended up with Keiyan, one of my OC's for LTABD. Don't know what that is? That's fine, didn't expect you to. But yeah. Done now. Probably won't be coming back to it.