boardsintermediateBohemian Snackfood.
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drawn in 32 min with Lascaux Sketch
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Estecca (Nov 9, 2005)
Just a doodle right now. :) Maybe I'll colour later.

No, I'm not implying that salmon is a Bohemian snackfood. XD I just like random names sometimes.

CRITIQUE. I CAN'T DRAW REALISM. The forehead looks like it needs help. D;
Estecca (Nov 9, 2005)
drawn in 30 min
mybettastorm (Nov 9, 2005)
COOL
Estecca (Nov 9, 2005)
Heh, thanks.
Estecca (edited Nov 11, 2005)
drawn in 1 min
Fixed the eye. That bottom lash was bugging me. D:

Edit: Aw crap, I liked it better before. T_T Can you delete a seperate version? D:
hideyourface (Nov 11, 2005)
I think it's beginner :p
Estecca (edited Nov 11, 2005)
Why? It's over 30 minutes, I can obviously draw faces to some extent, I put effort into it, why don't you think it's intermediate?
IamaCunt (Nov 11, 2005)
I like it I can't draw faces at all so way to go, plus you used my favorite color lime green :)
mybettastorm (Nov 11, 2005)
You shouldnt be critasizing so much, simplt tell the person what they need to work on. I dont think that is so hard, Im trying to do that more often myself! :) XP
Minty_hippo (edited Nov 12, 2005)
I disagree with you, this is not up to the standard of intermidiate level, and besides the more critacism (sp?) the more that person can improve on. Critasism (sp?) is nothing to get affended of and nor is it personal. Hideyourface may not have included why he thinks its beginner, but you should know by looking at this anyone can draw that, theres no colour just a plain background and no heart gone into this drawing. Just because its over 30mins and supposidly has effort doesn't mean its intermidiate, anyone can do that, if thats the case then everybody would be drawing on intermidiate. I suggest you work on your pictures more and stick to the beginners board for doodles like this, otherwise carry on what you do best ^___^ like to see more pictures from you and see your full potential!!
By this I mean, go for something you've never thought of drawing before, something that will blow everyones mind and think ' WOAAAAA THIS KICKS BUTT!!! '
Sorry if I seemed that I was getting at you but I couldn't resist >___<
marcello (Nov 12, 2005)
*criticism (It's spelled like critic)
*offended
*it's (its is possessive)
*supposedly
*intermediate (it's freaking written on this page)

You asked for critique, however, so I am not surprised people gave such comments. You can't draw realism, but that's does not seem to apply here since you did not even attempt to do so. I would say, yes, this is beginner level. While the lines are fairly clean, they still lack thought and seem rather arbitrary. Random text does not a make a picture better or more abstract, and in this case, I would say it detracts from the overall piece. I imagine you added it because you felt the picture was missing something, it still is.

This is all very fine and well for a quick sketch, but it's hard to imagine it took you 30 minutes.
George_Goat (Feb 12, 2006)
*le-gasp* Here's an actual tip on realism. =O
The eyes are generally a bit further back on the head, that's probably why the forehead looks 'funny' to you. ^^;;
Though I think this picture really looks cool in a designy sort of way, it does kind of look like she has just one eye in the middle of her forehead.
The shape of the head/chin bugs me just a little, too, but it's not too far off, there, and I'm sure not all people have perfectly round heads anyways.

I hope I helped!
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