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Turtlebuster
(May 31, 2003)
turtlebuster approaches the old home and peers inside... |
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Turtlebuster
(May 31, 2003)
XD thanks to some good tips from some good people, i've worked on this and made it a little more to my likeing.1) cleaned up some 'too soft areas' so they look like rocks instead of marshmellows 2) made a brand new tree that doesn't quite look real, but i like much better. 3) worked a little on the sky for shading i couldn't seem to lighten the shading in the back anymore than this, so i will have to make sure i do that from the start from now on. refresh to see changes ^^
Turtlebuster (edited May 31, 2003)
i actually did start with lineart. i then made some colored layers and deleted the layer with the line art, so as to make the picture look realistic. after all, not everything has a black outline. thx furyofroy, although i was hoping more for info on doing bark/leaves (so tough for me, considering you don't actually paint every individual leaf). XD
Kazukie (edited Jun 1, 2003)
The white stuff in the water doesn't really go with it... And uhh using the blur tool is a cheap way of doing it but.. IDK. The tree's roots look like they need to be elongated or whatever because the one kind of bluntly goes into the rock then stops... Uhh and the clouds just look like streaks. =P Sorry I still think this looks cool if you don't study it a whole lot! ^^;;;
marcello (edited Jun 1, 2003)
Ok, so I just watched your animation to get a better idea how you went about doing this. Besides the fact I think you completely overuse the smudge tool, you used it well. I personally think smudge works best with liquid substances (water, fire, clouds, etc). And in this case I'll have to disagree with kazukie, I think the water looks fine.One general problem with this piece is while you have good local shading, you need to focus on the overall shading of the piece, from end to end. In order to give your piece more perspective, you should consider the gradual lighting from back to front, in addition to local shading. In the case of the tree, I think you have the general idea down, and the leaves don't look terrible. Perhaps more concentration on the structure of the tree. For example, how big do you imagine the entire tree? What type of tree are you trying to draw? The shape of the base and branches will be governed by the answers to these questions. For shading the tree, for one, I would not use smudge on the bark, it totally ruined the beginning of what could have been good shading in your animation. Again, of course, it depends on the type of tree, birch for example has quite different bark than most trees. But for a stereotypical tree (lol), I would use a combination of diffused brush, vertical strokes of good contrast, and then an overall shading from edge to edge over that. For leaves, well, what you have isn't terrible, perhaps a little more differentiation... Anyway, it's not really a bad piece, and the animation didn't corrupt so you could edit it further. :-)
Turtlebuster (edited Jun 1, 2003)
ooh! thanks guys :) i will try to edit this (i usually don't even bother trying since it screws up 90% of the time). i might just redo the tree completely, and definitely fix up the shading. when i was shading, i tried to darken the front and lighten the back more, but that lost somewhere along the way :( |
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Turtlebuster
(May 31, 2003)
very morbid, for me at least. Don't mess with don froggo or this could be you. it's 13+ because no... organs are actually showing.
Turtlebuster (edited Jun 1, 2003)
well... it's one of those 'shot through the pillow' deals. ever watch mafia/gangster flicks? i do. those be my favorite films. those and Noir films.
Minitsaru (edited Jun 1, 2003)
poor girl..... she's dead..... *tear tear* well too bad..... guess thats whatcha get when the don ends up being a frog with a short temper and you talk back to him!
Xodiak (edited Jun 3, 2003)
it must be those child molestation cases were the father rapes his daughter and then kills her so she doesn't tell the police. nice drawing >:)|XOD| |
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Turtlebuster
(May 29, 2003)
You can't expect the don to be use harmless little inuendo's ALL the time! Sometimes, there's a rat who just needs smokin'.
Einz (edited May 31, 2003)
Cosa Frogstrai presume
Turtlebuster (edited May 31, 2003)
Cassa Frogula, to be more accurate.;p
Einz (edited Jun 1, 2003)
some one is gotta take that DON Outill have a word with fat Cat he likes froGs ;-) |
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Turtlebuster
(May 29, 2003)
As long as there are turkeys to kill, there will be guns to kill them with. these pictures of mine are getting a little half-assed though.
Xodiak (edited May 30, 2003)
no Turtlebuster! turkey people are good! <:(|XOD| |
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Turtlebuster
(May 29, 2003)
Turtjey's don't taste good when the have bat wings and tails
taori (edited May 29, 2003)
Turkey from hell: Good for the body, baaaad for the soul.
Turkey_Girl (edited May 29, 2003)
HEY! It's turkey girl, and I'm MAD! I was just in heaven for a while, but i was released on good behavior, now me and my army of turkeys are out to get you! (And they don't taste good either, they have horns and spikes!) RRAOR!!!from, TG |
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Turtlebuster
(May 29, 2003)
*sniffs* I tot i smelled a rat. Whaddaya look so bad? those shoes fir you, no?(just watched the Godfather, can you tell?)
taori (edited May 29, 2003)
Okay, envision that line. Then envision Carol Channing saying that line.....Yes?
Turtlebuster (edited May 29, 2003)
LOL! ya i can kinda see that! although i've only hear her 'voice' on the Simpsons, so it was probably exaggerated.
Xodiak (edited Jun 1, 2003)
he reminds me of the mighty mouse series' evil character! >:D|XOD|
Turtlebuster (edited Jun 1, 2003)
i can see that too... i miss the old mighty mouse. now they have some pokemon and x-men evolution crap on... in america at least. such a pity |
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Turtlebuster
(May 28, 2003)
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raenboe (edited May 30, 2003)
Ha! Maybe I can get rid of my assistant girl scout leader? Hmmm.........*evil grins*
Xodiak (edited May 30, 2003)
can I use it to depilate my legs? <:)|XOD|
Turtlebuster (edited May 30, 2003)
no, pytobarbie! there is no need for a lighter! i have discovered the secret formula for liquid fire and bottled it for practical everyday use! and yes, XOD, you it works for hair removal, just be careful (unless you want some sexy burn marks)
pyrobarbie (edited Jun 5, 2003)
awwww...well thats no fun **puts lighter back in pocket** |
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Turtlebuster
(May 28, 2003)
eeeep. yet another wierd composition... this needs more layers
rosalyn (edited May 28, 2003)
*00* Oooo.....I like it! The red in the middle almost looks like a flower.... this pic reminds me of a dream... or a strange space anommilly.....Wow....*0-*
Turtlebuster (edited May 28, 2003)
well, i don't think anyone will ever find THIS in outer space, but yes, i was thinking of a flower when i made that red thingy. that red thingy was the only thing that kept me from scrapping this
icybluecub (edited May 29, 2003)
OH! I like that. Can you tell me how you layer? I still haven't figured that out yet. Help?
Turtlebuster (edited May 29, 2003)
layer in oekaki? ok, just look on the left side of the applet where the little white box is (the box will fill with a tiny version of whatever your drawing on that layer so it might not be white if you've started drawing already). There's 4 pictures to the left of the white box. one of them is an eye, one is a trash can, i don't know what the hell the other one is and one of them is the 'new layer' button. click that one and another white box with the same 4 buttons will magically appear above the previous box. click on THAT box to switch to that layer. note that the higher up on the list of layers the higher priority that layer has. the trash can button deletes that layer and the eye button makes that layer dissappear and reappear. does that help? i can give you a better description if you want since i know this one was rushed. |
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Turtlebuster
(May 28, 2003)
You.. you owes me a lotta moneys, youa fat pig! Sink 'im boys. I got bigga fish ta fry.
quintessence (edited May 29, 2003)
...roight. Nice cigar.
Turtlebuster (edited May 29, 2003)
Miss Quint, is it? Yous sound like a fish. Don't EVA patronize me or you'll be sleepin' with you own kind.yous follow me?
concannon (edited May 29, 2003)
*cracks up* Woow. *nudges quin* Sleeping with our own kind, eh? Watch your innuendo, amphibian.
quintessence (edited May 30, 2003)
Bwahaha. *snickers* |
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nice pic but it seems a bit empty.... and ....... empty >.< =P