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You need to be bolder with your color. Your pieces are far too light and soft, they get lost. Don't be afraid to practice blocking full color down then adding highlights, shadows and form.

Chocolates 4 UR Valentine

jpjp1052 (Feb 10, 2008)

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Cameo (Feb 11, 2008)

Yum!! Scrumptious drawing! ;o)

enjoydotcom (Feb 11, 2008)

Already had my choccy dose today, but this could persuade me to get some more :D.

gel_o (Feb 11, 2008)

Sorry but I seem to be drooling on the keyboard! This is wonderful jpjp and just in time for Valentine's Day. I recognize the one with a cherry inside on the third row down and in the middle....uummm!

Sweetcell (Feb 12, 2008)

Caramel, I'll take caramel.
Have to say one thing though,
these looks great, but they're
just a tad too sketchy.

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Wizzard (Feb 11, 2008)

The cream of the crop

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Wizzard (Feb 11, 2008)

Thank you Mr. D

gloworm043 (Feb 11, 2008)

This is very good there Wizz..like the detail.:)

Wizzard (Feb 11, 2008)

Thanks gloworm043

Sweetcell (Feb 12, 2008)

This is good, one of your best, but it could be so much better. Do you know about layers? Try coloring on a lower layer and block on color that way you don't have to worry about going over your lines. There's just too much white. Take advantage of the bezier, circle and square tools, they can help you get nice curves (especially for the wheels and fender) you can clean up the lineart as well. And put in highlights and shadows, you'd be amazed how a simple highlight can transform a piece. You have more than enough space I encourage you to go back and work on this more with my suggstions (and they are just suggestions) and if you run out of space memo me and I'll grant you more. The best way to improve, as always, is with practice and taking your time.

ahhhhhh

DoOp (Sep 21, 2007)

doodle :x in java class again

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davincipoppalag (Sep 21, 2007)

Poor little bunny gettin drwoned in colors cuz you dont wanna pay attention to the teach@! Jeez DooooOpppy

accidentalidentity (Oct 2, 2007)

Ah... yes, I agree. I like this. All the colorful textures and designs and that cute little bunny.

sudeki800 (Feb 11, 2008)

*o*
So colorfull!
xD Bunny!!
:3
-Ish new here- Btw i think i already said this buts!
im nijntje from kupika XD
-Stalk- Dx

Sweetcell (Feb 12, 2008)

All the colors of the rainbow.

What the hell did sudeki say? Is that english or engrish?

Yeee Denizen

DreameRadial (Feb 12, 2008)

I miss drawing here ='(

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Sweetcell (Feb 12, 2008)

And we miss you drawing here. Yeah big headed men with blue reflective light and cotton candy pink hair. :D

davincipoppalag (Feb 12, 2008)

Glad you came back to draw then1 This is so cool

shocked

Michikoko (Feb 12, 2008)

shes shocked and i dont know y but she pretty hope ya like it plz comment

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Sweetcell (Feb 12, 2008)

Again, spend more time on your pieces, clean up the lineart (try a darker color of the skin tone, the black stands out too much) Lower the head a bit (necks too long) and thicken said neck, make her body larger (too small for the size of her head) round out her lower chin and jaw, and clean up the coloring. It's rather messy. I see you have talent, you just need to practice and refine it.

One last thing, you should stick to begginers before moving to intermediate. If you need to know what qualifies as intermediate check the board.

cherry love

Michikoko (Feb 12, 2008)

im new at oekaki its so much harder than pencil and shes cherry girl yay i love cherries hope ya like it plz comment

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Sweetcell (Feb 12, 2008)

Well, you might want to spend more time on your pieces Michi, and clean up your lineart by thinning the lines (they're far too thick) and clean up the highlights of the hair. This is pretty, but I feel it could be better. Remember, if your just doodling or getting a feel for the tools there's no need to send. Try reading the rules while your here. Welcome.