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Life's Dear Enemy
Cheese_is_good
(Mar 7, 2005)
OoI like the redness that's supposed to be blood in the little corner. I also ike the background. The timer is screwy again tho. ^^
Shanghai (Mar 7, 2005)
The shade of red you used works well with the greys and blues here and the soft texture of the background is a very nice touch, but as I've said before to someone else here I think blood tends to be far overused in art posted online and it does very quickly lose its effect. I think compositionally too it'd look better if the only red was in the eyes since the red of the corner is pulling my attention too far from the main subject area here. You have a great "in the moment" effect going on. It really looks like a snapshot of time as some unseen event was really happening. |
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breac
(Feb 27, 2005)
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Shanghai (Mar 7, 2005)
It's looking nice so far, though a few of the shaded areas seem almost more random than actually following where light and shadow would naturally be. Good detailing in the feet, by the way.
sxk (Mar 7, 2005)
wow you are very good with animals. i lke this alot and cant wait until the finished product is here.Minor line-art changes, complete redo of color pattern, and STILL working on the texture.
finally done!
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vamp2
(Mar 6, 2005)
I liked drawing this.
Shanghai (Mar 7, 2005)
It's good that the gun was drawn so large since it helps the idea he's a kid. The background is also cool how it's simple but it compliments the character well.
vamp2 (Mar 7, 2005)
Thanx you, I wanted to draw a hellboy kid to show his middle years of age...
TaCO (Mar 7, 2005)
Great pic!!!!You should color all your pics!!!!!!!
vamp2 (Mar 7, 2005)
I'm going to start coloring all of my pic's.....Thanxs. |
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featherstone
(Mar 7, 2005)
So, basically that means.... I'm either high or low or somewhere in between. Where are you on the compass?
Shanghai (Mar 7, 2005)
It's an interesting concept. I'd thinking it'd be better if some of the letters didn't go off the page though.
featherstone (edited Mar 7, 2005)
maybe I'll do another one sometime... I'm tired today..... I'm curious to know who's part of the W.E. in the middle... and who's not
Shanghai (Mar 7, 2005)
I'm never sure where I am anymore. |
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Dragon_River_Spirit
(Mar 6, 2005)
all that jazz
Shanghai (Mar 7, 2005)
White fox demon angel? That's quite a mouthful, not to mention an oxymoron. Anyways, I know it isn't finish, but I was thinking that maybe you should consider using smaller "spikes" for the hair, since hair doesn't really clump together into such large spikes like that. This sort of has an Egyptian look to it. Maybe you could push that a little more by using some Egyptian references? Just a thought.
Cheese_is_good (Mar 7, 2005)
Oo I like the piccu,but coconut, yo cant be a white fox demon angel. That's just trying to, how could I say it, your attempt at upstaging me. Neva gonna happen. Sowwy!
Dragon_River_Spirit (Mar 8, 2005)
...your still the top demon....the angel part was only to describe the piccy...im only a demon with wings and your still the better demon cheese
Shmoopy (May 27, 2005)
The hands are extremely small. Red, I think the drawer is going for some sort of 'anime' approach, so the hair is spiky. I'd like to see the parents of this creature.An albino fox mates with a demon, who was so nice he became an angel. Dah. :D |
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Saiyanangie
(Mar 6, 2005)
.... I just can't seem to do this at all. I need a tablet.... but I don't have one.
Shanghai (Mar 7, 2005)
Don't worry about the tablet issue. It's a useful thing to have and I always use it myself, but you're still doing well here. The character has a very graceful look to them. |
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ILoveKenshin
(Mar 6, 2005)
Kinda really bothers me >_<
Kenshin (Mar 6, 2005)
Cute, in a weird way XD I like the brightness. The shine on the hair is also nice. Something about the body bothers me, though.
silver_maiden (Mar 6, 2005)
sooo cute!
Shanghai (Mar 7, 2005)
I think it might be the grid pattern that's bothering you. Well it's bothering me anyways. Also there's a few parts you didn't shade such as under the breasts (heehee I said parts). Besides that though I think it's looking good. I like how at the top of her head the shine almost forms a star, which matches the personality she's showing. |
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Axil62
(Mar 5, 2005)
I thought a toon version might be fun.
featherstone (Mar 6, 2005)
who gives a crap about the lettering, it's legible... now the guy has to say.... well what the hell do you want it for?
Kasha (Mar 7, 2005)
lol, you=clever
cyclops (Mar 7, 2005)
...i dont think she "borrowing" the money Lori...lol awesome as always axil O)
featherstone (Mar 7, 2005)
chya... bangs head on desk... |
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Saiyanangie
(Mar 6, 2005)
This is harder to draw than it looks, and I did it, it's done now...Ahh...this is better. She's actually diving, and the part we see clearly is UNDER the water.
featherstone (Mar 6, 2005)
who taught her how to dive? :) that's called a 'pencil jump'... according to my son and I :)
Shanghai (Mar 6, 2005)
Her body and proportions look fairly good, and she does definately look halfway underwater, but I think you went overboard with the blurs. I think parts underwater should be blurred, but I don't see any reason for blurring things such as the outlines on her top or her upper arms. |
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TheCrimsonKing
(Mar 6, 2005)
She enjoys scuba diving, nitting, ping-pong, and eating faces.
Shanghai (Mar 6, 2005)
The other stuff is okay, but I'm just not sure about scuba diving. Too many sea monsters. She looks like she'd disguise herself with a big turtle neck sweater before revealing herself.
featherstone (Mar 6, 2005)
she could play Forrest Gump in a good game of ping pong... I think, yeah.. clothing might do her justice, she's kinda, uh... skinnay
DarkCloak (Mar 6, 2005)
She's one very attractive gal, she's definately a keeper! :P
davincipoppalag (Mar 6, 2005)
Joe..I still think you and Mike (sincity) should do a collab...this is great. |
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