I'd volunteer to color, though I can't seem to find the pen to my tablet anywhere. Well my mouse should work well enough, not like I haven't made plenty of moused drawings in my life.

Now I fantasize an older adult woman tying him on the bed and molesting him. That would be sexy! >:D
Very pretty drawing and colouring, good work! <:)
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that picture make me all teary eyed, its realy good

I think that you can work on the hair a bit more before calling it finished. The color scheme looks good but the way you've set it up there's black likes and airbrushed color, and they don't match up. Because in places a bright highlight will cross over from one part of hair, over a black line, and onto another part of hair, it makes me wonder why even have the lines if they don't have any relation with the light and shadow. To make this finished I'd like to see you adjust thost highlights and shaded areas to match up with the lines better.

cute ^^ Love the saying on the shirt. XD

I think it could use more refinement before calling it finished. Watercolors are great for their delicacy and their flow, though that's not the only way they're used, but here I'm getting much more the impression of a marker that was running out of ink rather than the smoothness of water. I think you should pay more attention to the lighting and the shadows here myself.

Since you say it'll be scary later I'm wondering if you're planning on adjusting the expression. As it is she looks somewhat happy and has an anticipating look to her, sort of like a puppy. Maybe if you changed it enough that she's not so innocently happy but more in a sinister way then combined with the anticipation she'd look like she's about to attack?

I think now it's looking a bit disturbing, and the harsher lighting helps a lot. To some extent there's an aspect of fear here, partly from her looking scared and partly from us being concerned about what it is she's seeing/experiencing that has her in this state, but I'm not sensing the fear being something that she is purposefully causing. It's more like she's the one in fear and we feel it through her. The pure and near-pure whites you've used in her, her clothes, and the background all add up to giving an impression of hositalization. Maybe she's in a mental hospital? The collar on her neck certainly indicates bondage and being inprisoned because of the chain link on it. If you wanted to explore that further you could have some aspect of being wrongfully placed in a mental institute, something that does sometimes happen and is a very real fear that many people have.

does she have a nervous tick or something?

I wish it were larger, but it's still looking good. Your use of grey gives a somber mood to this, and the fact she's dancing with a shadow furthers that into a feeling of loneliness to me.

I think each of Dan's cartoons have a certain quality that only an Intermediate artist (or better) could achieve. The compositions were thought out and the concept for the series is a quick read, as they were intended. Many editorial cartoonist and illustrators use little to no color and have subtle backgrounds if any at all. The simplicity and style will probably be lost on folks who hold a finished picture to color and complexity. I like the series, it's refreshing and it's not Anime, keep em' coming Dan!