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Asriel (Jul 22, 2005)

for all the simplicity of the rain and lightning, it still works. and yeah, lets see hideyourface do better, or copy it for that matter.

hideyourface (Jul 22, 2005)

hey, It's just my point of view.Im giving my thoughts on the picture.

Gigandas (Jul 22, 2005)

I think there's a difference between helping and just saying that you dislike the picture. If you don't like something, you could point it out? Then say what you think needs to be done to fix it. That way, it'll be beneficial.
I like the rain, but now the tail seems to blend into the background a bit. You could try lightening up one or the other to separate the two. I might also add some glow around the lightning too. I like seeing how hard you're trying here for sure :). Keep on going.

Knockoff (Jul 22, 2005)

Pretty cool idea, unfortuantly this isn't advnced quality. The clouds are a bit blurry and could have more detail in them, Maybe a bit more variation in them too, it look like one big line of clouds. The lightning is a bit harsh on the eyes, no offence. It looks like you used the linetool. The rain is too thick and you can see it too much. Blocks the picture a bit. Good wings, but they look a little thick at the edges. I'm not sure about the hand behind the back, and after that the proportions go whacky. (though I think that was on purpose) The colors in the black sky are neat, but maybe you could add more detail and add variaiton. The circle of light really needs work on. Make it brighter and less blurry. (it'll bring your eyes to the character) Good attempt. More practice would be better if you plan on taking your art into this board.

seaanemone (Jul 15, 2005)
drawn in 57 min

kay all done

hideyourface (Jul 15, 2005)

I just think it's overrated for a lame anime reproduction :\

STILL, the lineart and shading on this is very smooth and nice.

Xodiak (Jul 15, 2005)

I think the female characters are sexy! >:D
|XOD|

Aikara (Jul 15, 2005)

People can like what they choose, whether obsessed or not, I find it sweet they can remain focused on something. Or inspiration source.
++I like the simple shading on here. It looks especially good with the smooth texture. :)

Rosemary (Jul 15, 2005)

beautiful picture i love the mist :)

Kasha (Jul 15, 2005)

fucking bob ross n shit.

cool

15grifficorntears (Jul 15, 2005)

Reminds me of a book I read with a town in the trees. Love the misty aspect you took.

pandabarrie (Aug 25, 2005)

looks like a giant bonsai tree!