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Fluffysheep
(Feb 17, 2004)
Ok, I could really use some tips for the lineart here...I'd be very happy if someone could help me to make it smoother and nicer. Thanks :) |
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PinkuEspeon
(Feb 17, 2004)
Alright Marcello, Mazi, and Armando... please... please... PLEASE just remember that I am only learning... Mazi was basically saying that I was a n00b... and, Mazi is totally right... so... I looked at the links that she had on some of the little postings that she (he?) left... then, from there, I looked at them, and followed the directions and all that jazz... so... yah... well... I'm not finished with this. But, I will be soon...OKAY. JUST. LEAVE. COMMENTS. I don't know how to draw the eye... boy, if that ain't quite obvious... but... still... I'm just learning.
Knockoff (Feb 18, 2004)
Hmmmm, not bad, though you should try to blend all the blue together, because eyes dont have solid colors. The Eye lid looks ok, I think its shaped a little weird, but I like the colors.
PinkuEspeon (Feb 18, 2004)
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Childlike_Vampire (Feb 18, 2004)
Sweetie, if you don't want critiques, there are drawing forums out there that don't allow critiques. This is not one of them. People are just trying to be nice and helpful, like people were to them. Myself, I appreciate critiques far more than the comments, because it's harder to offer them. About the picture, it's very nice, very good for a beginner. The colors are good, and it looks kind of sad, although emotions are hard to portray with just an eye. The best help I received on how to draw eyes was on one of the tutorials Mazi has posted many times...Here. The rest of her posted tutorials can be found here. *shrug* Hope that helps. |
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PinkuEspeon
(Feb 16, 2004)
This is what my dog looks like. Do you like the shading... I am trying to learn how to shade using the shi-painter. That's the only painter I'm going to use. Okay... well... just post comments on this and tell me how you like it. I will be adding a background soon. On version two. That's the last version of this. But, I haven't started on the background (v. 2) yet...Oh, this is the finished drawing. Make your main focus the dog. Don't mind the background. Tell me how I'm doing on the shading. Please leave comments telling me how I could improve.
dixielandcutie (Feb 18, 2004)
your shading is definitely improving a lot. great work! few things to maybe look at while you're workig on it..his rear paw looks kinda bent funny, and try and make the background more solid rather than having all that white space. keep up the good work!
Knockoff (Feb 18, 2004)
Hmmm, not bad. The face looks good, though the ears need just a little work.ear: They should be so pointy on the bottom, and the should be a little smaller. The front paws look good, but the back ones, look a little smushed. backpaws: They should be just a little longer, and the one closes to us should be facing up, or mabby it should, but it doesn't look right (like I said mabby just a little longer) The wrinkles where the dog bends are good, except the one is indented to much, and it makes the dog look a little fat. Shading: I think your getting the hang of shdaing though, it doesn't seem to have a light source. I think the background could have a little more detail, jsut not textures,. Its still good, and your getting better. |
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sky_warp
(Feb 17, 2004)
its hotrod yay!
PinkuEspeon (edited Feb 18, 2004)
O_O;; Rikku... that was really uncalled for... I mean... at least this person tried...
Deformed (Feb 18, 2004)
im sorry.... i was just mad at the time. it was uncalled for..... i shal delete my opinion. it is good other than the line overlapping. wich is not a big deal at all. u are right! i could not draw a better transformer if i tried.
sky_warp (Feb 18, 2004)
thank u rikku sorry how i use the line tool all the time im realy a great drawer in real life but the freehand tool and the mouse make tis all squigly.
Deformed (Feb 18, 2004)
It's ok!! I know how hard it was when i started drawing with a mouse. i used the line tool alot too. |
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sky_warp
(Feb 17, 2004)
its goku!
muckluck (edited Feb 17, 2004)
oh yea......i worked on my goku too!...... i used some blur on his hair. by the way USE SHADING!!!!!
seepra (Feb 17, 2004)
oh my god! its horrible, look at those nipples, they look like candies!he looks like lego figure..
foxman8245 (Feb 18, 2004)
Is that spit on his lip???
muckluck (Feb 19, 2004)
he looks kinda boxy.... |
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evil_cloud
(Dec 25, 2003)
Here my creation of a rebel elve, nothing more
Knockoff (Dec 27, 2003)
Looks pretty nice.I love the hair <3
tappie_chan (Dec 27, 2003)
oooh dang this is pretty. i'm lovin' his hair a lot, esp. the sideburns i think the hand might be a tad too big, but thats not a major or glaring problem. very lovely, yo. ^__^
evil_cloud (Dec 27, 2003)
thx, i think like u tappie chan that the hand is sooo big, i will revise it
dixielandcutie (Feb 17, 2004)
wow thats cool lookin, and yea, im definitely lovin the hair. :) rockin. |
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sky_warp
(Feb 16, 2004)
sorry about the arms my computer screen wouldnt show the rest of the paper so i couldnt do the arms |
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laurael
(Feb 14, 2004)
Lost the first one...damnit, so trying again...I know...these pics have been done time and time again...but not by 'me'...
Salahare (Jul 27, 2005)
*gasp* My Favorite Animal in the WORLD!!!!....>_>....<_<...>_> *sniff* It's so beautiful...
Lalayne (Jul 29, 2006)
OH.. My.. GOSH! That's so awesome! My favourite animal is a killer whale! Sweet!
Miss_DJ (Apr 15, 2007)
beautiful work Laurael!
davincipoppalag (Oct 7, 2019)
I wish she would come back |
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Minitsaru
(Feb 7, 2004)
ran outa space, and i'd rather not leave it as unfinished forver when i've already done so much so, there! |
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Deformed
(Feb 14, 2004)
its hard to shade with green skin
Deformed (Feb 18, 2004)
I never said you were!! Read Marcello's comment on you're goku before saying anything!! I was talking to Sky Warp at the time, Duh.
muckluck (edited Feb 18, 2004)
I am very sorry! Please forgive me! (I used grammar!) !!!!wait a sec... So skywarp made fun of my picture?!
Gigandas (Feb 18, 2004)
I don't know too much about your situation muckluck, but I wouldn't be surprised if it were skywarp after seeing what he said to Harmanye...
Deformed (Feb 24, 2004)
Huh....... Me confused...... Why do my drawings always start tangents!! |
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I like the shading and the clothing rocks, you did a very nice job.