boardsbeginnerMy Little Doggy, Ned
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drawn in 42 min with Oekaki Shi-Painter
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PinkuEspeon (Feb 16, 2004)
This is what my dog looks like. Do you like the shading... I am trying to learn how to shade using the shi-painter. That's the only painter I'm going to use. Okay... well... just post comments on this and tell me how you like it. I will be adding a background soon. On version two. That's the last version of this. But, I haven't started on the background (v. 2) yet...
PinkuEspeon (Feb 16, 2004)
drawn in 31 min
PinkuEspeon (Feb 18, 2004)
drawn in 10 min
Oh, this is the finished drawing. Make your main focus the dog. Don't mind the background. Tell me how I'm doing on the shading. Please leave comments telling me how I could improve.
dixielandcutie (Feb 18, 2004)
your shading is definitely improving a lot. great work! few things to maybe look at while you're workig on it..his rear paw looks kinda bent funny, and try and make the background more solid rather than having all that white space. keep up the good work!
Knockoff (Feb 18, 2004)
Hmmm, not bad. The face looks good, though the ears need just a little work.
ear: They should be so pointy on the bottom, and the should be a little smaller.
The front paws look good, but the back ones, look a little smushed.
backpaws: They should be just a little longer, and the one closes to us should be facing up, or mabby it should, but it doesn't look right (like I said mabby just a little longer)
The wrinkles where the dog bends are good, except the one is indented to much, and it makes the dog look a little fat.
Shading: I think your getting the hang of shdaing though, it doesn't seem to have a light source.
I think the background could have a little more detail, jsut not textures,.
Its still good, and your getting better.
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