I disagree with you, this is not up to the standard of intermidiate level, and besides the more critacism (sp?) the more that person can improve on. Critasism (sp?) is nothing to get affended of and nor is it personal. Hideyourface may not have included why he thinks its beginner, but you should know by looking at this anyone can draw that, theres no colour just a plain background and no heart gone into this drawing. Just because its over 30mins and supposidly has effort doesn't mean its intermidiate, anyone can do that, if thats the case then everybody would be drawing on intermidiate. I suggest you work on your pictures more and stick to the beginners board for doodles like this, otherwise carry on what you do best ^___^ like to see more pictures from you and see your full potential!!
By this I mean, go for something you've never thought of drawing before, something that will blow everyones mind and think ' WOAAAAA THIS KICKS BUTT!!! '
Sorry if I seemed that I was getting at you but I couldn't resist >___<

*criticism (It's spelled like critic)
*offended
*it's (its is possessive)
*supposedly
*intermediate (it's freaking written on this page)

You asked for critique, however, so I am not surprised people gave such comments. You can't draw realism, but that's does not seem to apply here since you did not even attempt to do so. I would say, yes, this is beginner level. While the lines are fairly clean, they still lack thought and seem rather arbitrary. Random text does not a make a picture better or more abstract, and in this case, I would say it detracts from the overall piece. I imagine you added it because you felt the picture was missing something, it still is.

This is all very fine and well for a quick sketch, but it's hard to imagine it took you 30 minutes.

*le-gasp* Here's an actual tip on realism. =O
The eyes are generally a bit further back on the head, that's probably why the forehead looks 'funny' to you. ^^;;
Though I think this picture really looks cool in a designy sort of way, it does kind of look like she has just one eye in the middle of her forehead.
The shape of the head/chin bugs me just a little, too, but it's not too far off, there, and I'm sure not all people have perfectly round heads anyways.

I hope I helped!

this is cool its different and thats why i like it ....i like how you can tell what the picture is talking about ...its not just one of those crappy things that you dont understand !...yeah it does look like jack the SKELETON ...lol yeah great work you did awesome keep it up

CUTE

the everyday stuff that usually goes blind .

Oh yah :)

Cute :)

Thank yas

Thanks mon :)

Wanna do a collab some time ? :)

yah mon, for sure :)

I am bad at drawing penises because it makes me sick to use life references. I'll try and work on that though.

hide your face = hide matsumoto album name. Thus, yes, broken-lock

it makes you sick to look at a real penis, but you dont have a problem with drawing a guy licking one? :p

Yup.

I love her hair the most. I like how it blurs at the back^^
and the colour for it^^

Very nice work! I think you need a touch more work on the hair and eyebrows with some finer lines, but generally this is very good.

Yes, good job it I really like the face esp the eyes mon

The neck's a little too long.

or maybe she's wearing a very low cut shirt? >_o; who knowwws~

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