Is this finished?

i guess.

^^ Thanks.

Yes, but what could be improved without losing the feel of the piece. Saying it is not good enough is exactly the same as saying it is not of intermediate quality, an opinion with no helpful comments to back it up.

A helpful comment would be something like "the shadows could use more depth"

I know that there are some very good artists on these boards, and I would appreciate some constructive comments.

I wrote something long, but I accidently went back a page while writing it.. Basically, the picture is small. Small pictures are good as long as they have detail. Allthe buildings/walls lack textures and detail. The fence/buildings would probably be just as dark as the person since the light is coming from behind. Maybe a street light by the person would make it look better.

Thanks for the comments hideyourface :)

I was trying for a the world outside your windows type of thing, with the shadowy nature and fuzziness. The person is not supposed to be a person, but rather a shadow of the past... Obviously I was unable to portray this meaning with my drawing. I will give some though as to how to better get that point across.

Too bad the long post was lost, I would have really enjoyed seeing it.

Thanks again, and if anybody else has some comments I'd really like to hear them.

Yes, it's the lucky cricket from Mulan...Disney movies do rock!! Thanks everybody!!

pfff.... Yeah right.

Uggh..... Come on.

uggh to u too..ya little son of a--ahem anyways........well i stopped what i was originally going to say. that beads thing,well some 14 yr old clled on my friends phone and started singing that in a funn voice.im not even sure i got it all right...cuz i was laughing to hard to pay attention.but it seems so nice to picture it.....now picures bush with an afro and be happy oor healthy or sad,mad irritated,stupid,mental,hungry,lost,idiotic,im putting down what comes to mind when i say the word.......mofafa.

Bitching. Simply bitching.

its bitchin' not bitching. duhhhh. gawd.

the colors....it's so pretty..

do those work? =_=;

Yes. And i'm going to stop sinning tomorrow morning after I start dieting.

This is a very cute picture, I like the way her face looks shy and innocent and she has nice hair! <:)

Xod once got a chain letter that said that if I fall out of a window on the 10nth floor of a building I will get super powers.
It also told me to send the letter to 10 other people including the person who sent me the letter, or else I would get a hair tumor. I assume that sending the same e-mail back and forth to the same person can result in an endless loop that can perforate the thin fabric of space, time and reality and allow me to ascend to a higher level of existance.

Unfortunately I never tried all these because my evil e-mail client sent the letter to my spam mailbox, alongside with the letter of the Nigerian millionaire offering me his fortune for free, the letters asking me to buy viagra and the endless requests for hentai and porn registrations. >;)
|XOD|

errhmm... ooook
thank you for the comments...n_n
they made me feel better
*hugs!* X3 you guys are awesome! :D
( i'm glad you never tried any of them xodiak n_n;;)

oo, good idea. And thanks for the comments.

now that I checked, it seems to busy when it's really small. >.>

This looks awesome. Everything is perfect. Good job!

The textures on this are really cool. Very creepy. And I like the teeth. They always give me so much trouble, but you did them very well. It looks almost like a photomanipulation.

It's very nice. <333 The one thing that's bugging me are her eyes. The one of our left is a bit too far over, giving her a "cockeyed" expression. Other than that, very cool! I really like the tree. Pink flowers! >X3

Yeah, I know what you mean XD I set her eyes too far apart.. mesa lazy though, no excuses XD

This is really nice. The pink leaves look amazing!