Hmm...well, youv'e got a couple basic issues going on here, but nothing a little practice won't fix. The hair looks good, but for starters, check out that face shape. See that lump? Bye-bye, lump. Also, the lips and the nose seem a little misplaced- they don't slant with the rest of the face. Pretty good perspective on that one arm, the other seems a little... bone-less, though. That'll improve over time. Her body's a tad bit funkeh, too-- the hips are too big or the chest is too narrow, one or the other, but they're disproportionate to each other. Good efforts with shading on her legs, neck, and chest. All in all, with some more shading and practice on anatomy, you'll get good soon! Nice job.

Yesh, boodiefull hair!

I love your style. I know you pretty much draw the same thing, but it doesn't annoy me so much as it might.
I love the colours in this one too, very rich and warm.
And she must be a fortune to Pantene ProV ^_^.
And hey! Lineart. Veerry cool. Keep it up. How 'bout some 300X300 pictures; I bet you could come up with some amazing dresses.

A suggestion. It is better to finish your unfinished piece (and in the future, perhaps; pieces) before starting new ones. Other than that, the shading on the hill is too dark from shade to shade, let the colours sort of leak into eachother; I don't mean blur it more, I'm not fond of the blur too, I mean to pick at least one colour to go in between the colours you have (try selecting a colour where the shades merge).

Her head is too big as well, perhaps you wanted to have it big for more detail, but it would be more aesthetic if she were proportionate (And remember to darken up the lineart, it will be easier to colour that way).

The clouds are very nice though, I often have trouble doing clouds, one bit of advice about them though; I don't think that they should slope with the hill, but that's the only thing odd I can find about them.
Just trying to be helpful, so you can't complain that no one tells you how to be better ~_^.

(P.S. Giving the girl a bit of a shadow would be cool too.) *Shrugs* Anyway, I'm not trying to be harsh, I know your unfinished, but I always think that if one starts out with a strange picture, they'll end up with a bad one. Just trying to prevent that, but do your own thing.
OH and be sure to finish your picture with your next edit, because you're close to the KB limit.

*claps* I am amused by your picture of robber sneezing! ^^

whee, it's done! great detailing on the clothes... you're so elusive, ky.
edit: a fan. i used to go by another name. i'm very sorry for being so clingy.

yep. it's very blue. that makes him even more sad looking... but it's very pretty!

WOW!!! O_O *falls off her chair* So......BLUE!!!! I like it!

Very cool :) I love the evil, angry vibe it gives off, would look awesome in color

This is nifty. heh the bg looks like carpet or something. hmmm O.o something about her lower body is out of proportion though. . like she has no butt or something. . .

thats awesome! It could use some more shading and a bg though ^.^ . Love the expression.