This is good for begginer, but this is not Advanced. Not being a bitch here but if you look at the requirements for Advanced this doesn't fit. Really you need to work more to use this board. As a newcomer please read the rules.

sure looks like you used a pencil...great stuff

Well the neck is decidedly thicker, the arms a very thin though, they look like sticks (not trying to be mean honey, really) the shoulders are too broad, makes her upper body very awkward. If you make her shoulders smaller, and properly round out the arms (look at your own for reference on how they round out at the shoulder, slowly taper to the elbow, round out at the elbow again, then slowly taper to the wrist) then it would make more sense. And, her thighs from the hip joint to the knee joint would start big and taper thin. As well her hips wouldn't look so small and non-existent (you might want to put more curve there too) And less bosom, it's... a bit much. You have come a long way but you have to practice your anatomy. Get some books, or just look some stuff up online, you'll learn a lot. Cute face, and love those wing hair bands.

too cute :) I like this better than the other versions

Uhmm, its very clean and nicely done but there are several anatomy flaws and its never good to start out on the bored with yaoi because its not a porn board so try to draw a few more things befor rushing into what may seem to many as popular demand.

Wow! Two free tickets :-O congrats ;D I am so obsessed with Ruper Grint too.

I like this draw very muuch! The coloring is nice:]