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Just a doodle right now. :) Maybe I'll colour later.

No, I'm not implying that salmon is a Bohemian snackfood. XD I just like random names sometimes.

CRITIQUE. I CAN'T DRAW REALISM. The forehead looks like it needs help. D;

9 comments – latest 4:

mybettastorm (Nov 11, 2005)

You shouldnt be critasizing so much, simplt tell the person what they need to work on. I dont think that is so hard, Im trying to do that more often myself! :) XP

Minty_hippo (edited Nov 12, 2005)

I disagree with you, this is not up to the standard of intermidiate level, and besides the more critacism (sp?) the more that person can improve on. Critasism (sp?) is nothing to get affended of and nor is it personal. Hideyourface may not have included why he thinks its beginner, but you should know by looking at this anyone can draw that, theres no colour just a plain background and no heart gone into this drawing. Just because its over 30mins and supposidly has effort doesn't mean its intermidiate, anyone can do that, if thats the case then everybody would be drawing on intermidiate. I suggest you work on your pictures more and stick to the beginners board for doodles like this, otherwise carry on what you do best ^___^ like to see more pictures from you and see your full potential!!
By this I mean, go for something you've never thought of drawing before, something that will blow everyones mind and think ' WOAAAAA THIS KICKS BUTT!!! '
Sorry if I seemed that I was getting at you but I couldn't resist >___<

marcello (Nov 12, 2005)

*criticism (It's spelled like critic)
*offended
*it's (its is possessive)
*supposedly
*intermediate (it's freaking written on this page)

You asked for critique, however, so I am not surprised people gave such comments. You can't draw realism, but that's does not seem to apply here since you did not even attempt to do so. I would say, yes, this is beginner level. While the lines are fairly clean, they still lack thought and seem rather arbitrary. Random text does not a make a picture better or more abstract, and in this case, I would say it detracts from the overall piece. I imagine you added it because you felt the picture was missing something, it still is.

This is all very fine and well for a quick sketch, but it's hard to imagine it took you 30 minutes.

George_Goat (Feb 12, 2006)

*le-gasp* Here's an actual tip on realism. =O
The eyes are generally a bit further back on the head, that's probably why the forehead looks 'funny' to you. ^^;;
Though I think this picture really looks cool in a designy sort of way, it does kind of look like she has just one eye in the middle of her forehead.
The shape of the head/chin bugs me just a little, too, but it's not too far off, there, and I'm sure not all people have perfectly round heads anyways.

I hope I helped!

Wave.

chickenmonster2001 (Jan 31, 2006)

-.-
-Edit:
This, is gaia, and I didn't want it to come to the first page again after I marked it finished. *sigh* Its not a child. >.>

12 comments – latest 4:

chickenmonster2001 (Feb 4, 2006)

Think what you want, talk about ducks all you want, But I still don't care.
Its just a drawing. Calm down.
No need to rant on and on about the definition of 'Chibi', and how I draw things. It does not effect you, nor does it effect me much. Because honestly, I'm cracking up at the amount of detail your putting into something simple.

She's not naked, she's not defiling anything, and she is certainly not posing in a horrible manner. She's smiling, and waving.

You are the only one thinking of it in a horrible way, and therefore it is your responsibilty to accept your own thoughts.

Zack (Feb 4, 2006)

I am calm. The duck thing was an analogy to the way you're denying that this is a drawing of a kid.

The reason I pointed out the definition of "Chibi" is because you didn't seem to understand what the word actually means. I found it ironic that you were telling me that the difference between a child and the japanese word for child was "greatly."

My main point is that this picture looks like a child in a skimpy leather outfit, which I think is grossly inappropriate. If you're going to have a character dressed like that, go for an even more abstracted super-deformed style, or at least something that looks less like an adolescent.

chickenmonster2001 (Feb 5, 2006)

I can't say I will exactly apologize for drawing something. However, I can see where you may have been offended.

I'll tell you this now, so we can stop this debate: It was not my intention to create something that could get a reaction this great.

PolythenePam (Feb 12, 2006)

"Its just a drawing. Calm down."

Kind of interesting, what with all the religious cartoon hoodaddy.

speed painting #2

Zack (Feb 12, 2006)

from a Frazetta reference, took a bit too long

9 comments – latest 4:

davincipoppalag (Feb 12, 2006)

You did great on this. His stuff always reminds me of N.C. Wyeth for some reason.

terracotta (edited Feb 12, 2006)

Love it. I got a Frazetta calendar couple weeks ago to use for some reference pics. I'm gonna try that one with the Egyptian woman, the slave, the pillar and the big kitty.

Zack (Feb 12, 2006)

Thanks!

Terracotta: Cool! I'll be looking forward to it, for sure.

staci (Feb 12, 2006)

i can see your ego from here, yano. :)

chickenmonster2001 (Feb 12, 2006)

Hm. O.o I think its ok.. But I'm not sure about the expression.

0 comments

amber

PolythenePam (Feb 9, 2006)

speechless

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davincipoppalag (Feb 12, 2006)

The perfect woman? jk I like this one Giselle. It looks like you did her face with pastels

emmamommalag (Feb 12, 2006)

She doesn't look too happy about her speechless condition. lol Nice work, Giselle. :)

Ashes (Feb 12, 2006)

WOOOAH, Amber is the color of your energy~

:D Nice.

valentine.

voodoobunny (Feb 10, 2006)

I like the colors and stuff.
It looks much better on paper, though.

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voodoobunny (Feb 12, 2006)
drawn in 7 min

Heppayh valentine's day.

YouLovePoop (Feb 12, 2006)

Oh my gawd I love the cloud! Haha, it's beautiful! >.<

whitebunny1063 (Feb 12, 2006)

Happy Valentine's Day

voodoobunny (Feb 12, 2006)
drawn in 51 min

This was supposed to be a sketch O__O;;
Anyways, the clock is 02:47AM
:--D

frst

asli607 (Jan 31, 2006)

theyand?nkans?r

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davincipoppalag (Jan 31, 2006)

This is good, but he appears to have two noses,one on top of the other?

brujah (edited Jan 31, 2006)

its your first work does it?then good work my friend ?ts very very good.

asli607 (Jan 31, 2006)

i will pay attention to do not make two noses, thanks davinci.

brujah (edited Feb 12, 2006)

s?rf puan ok haaaaaaahaha gecenin bi yar?s? nedir bu ya uyku tutmaz

yasumi ^^

pas (Feb 12, 2006)

Already it is very late here it is 12:00 of the night and before being going to sleep I do this drawing ^^ hope that you like

0 comments

Chester.

chickenmonster2001 (Feb 12, 2006)

I like how it turned out. ^^

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Pseudonymous (Feb 12, 2006)

Chester, have you heard from Tony, just came back from the army...

Heeeere's Donny!

laurael (Nov 14, 2005)

A ninja turtle with a big stick. Yep. :P
As you can see by the date...this was done quite some time ago. Just want it out of my studio.
Nm...

6 comments – latest 4:

HunterKiller_ (Feb 11, 2006)

Yay, Ninja Turtles are back.

laurael (Feb 12, 2006)

Fuck DA. No farewell...I'm really laurael, I guess...that's who I've been forever it seems and that's how I'll stay. *shrugs* I'm glad you love my work, G...this smooth is for you.
Thanks Dave...next time, don't talk so much...lol.
HK...they never left. :P

TaCO (Feb 12, 2006)

I'm glad your keeping this account :)
Never leave!!!!!!!
And draw lots more pics!!!!!!!

laurael (Feb 12, 2006)

Hi Derrick!!!! I will draw lots more pics...thanks!!!!