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fishy_luver (Feb 13, 2008)

some avi art, for mi amiga. i need to make the lineart around the eye look more natural... any creative criticism would be verry appreciated.

[edit] HOW DO I DELEET IT??

fishy_luver (Feb 13, 2008)
drawn in 28 min

Magic_Coco_Bits (Feb 13, 2008)

try making the pupil touch the top of the eye. When you don't, the person looks scared.

SanzoGirl (Feb 13, 2008)

If you want the line art around the eye to be better, make it thin.
I always make the lines around the eyes thin, because it looks the best~ ^_^

I love doing eyes, do if you need any help on them, just ask :3

fishy_luver (Feb 14, 2008)
drawn in 19 min

haa, i'l be finishing this a little at a time...
i just made the eyes closed, cuz' its the universal "anime happy face"^__^

fishy_luver (Feb 14, 2008)
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fishy_luver (Feb 14, 2008)
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hmm... looking better...

fishy_luver (Feb 14, 2008)
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fishy_luver (Feb 15, 2008)
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fishy_luver (Feb 15, 2008)
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fishy_luver (Feb 15, 2008)
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fishy_luver (Feb 18, 2008)
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