Good job for a firstie! You are right about the eyes, though.... the right one needs to be a tid larger and a tad further to the left. Welcome to 2draw!
well, the lopsided-ness could be a style choice (thats what i thought it was when i first saw it) but the shading on the eyes is absolutely wonderful! I also like the transparency of the hair....looks all nymph-like.
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=3 P.S. her eyes aren't lopsided, they're just too far apart (no offense or anything n_n)
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