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pyrobarbie (Sep 16, 2003)

sitting there thinking
bout whats wrong with life
the painted emotions
and day by day strife
teachers voices in the backound
can't seem to concentrait
she's tearing at my thoughts
i'm not thinking strait
a new light surrounds her
i try to coprehend
whats going on with my feelings
and and thoughts inside my head
theres something about her
putting her in this light
something new is stirring
a feeling i just won't fight

pyrobarbie (Sep 16, 2003)
drawn in 1 hour 28 min

mazi (Sep 16, 2003)

haha i know that feeling.. paying attention.. pfft.. id interpret this but im biased >_>

[p.s. concentrate^ straight^ comprehend^]

nitegodess (Sep 18, 2003)

prettyness... i like your little poetry thing... prettyness

pyrobarbie (Sep 18, 2003)

i' wasn't really conserned w/ spelling ^ ^;; will fix later

marcello (Sep 18, 2003)

you should be concerned, it makes the poem look really lame.

dragon_girl (Sep 21, 2003)

Like the drawing but Im not such a big fan of poetry