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clover_pocky (Nov 11, 2007)
Crit, please. I'm going to do this linelessly coloured, but I am not exactly sure how to begin at it with a lined-drawing.

I almost had a heart attack, the internet in my dorm here lags very badly sometimes, and so the applet hung for awhile while it was uploading. Woo.
clover_pocky (Nov 11, 2007)
drawn in 1 hour 46 min
davincipoppalag (Nov 11, 2007)
It's a pretty drawing already and it's not close to finished
solve (Nov 12, 2007)
shoulder length, shape of neck, define the chin a lil more, refine the shape of the nose, etc. If you work on it I am sure it'll be alright : )
thesolarwinds (Nov 13, 2007)
This is really awesome, the lips I like especially.
clover_pocky (Nov 16, 2007)
drawn in 36 min
Uh, the applet froze on me. :\ Also, I think I'm gonna need a bigger boat.

More contrast on the skin?
UnWanted (Nov 17, 2007)
uhh. less purple lips? or is it supposed to be like that?
DoOp (Nov 18, 2007)
use oranges and reds and blues and greeenns. but mostly orange :D like... a redish brownish orange, something stickingly contrasting :DD i think it'll work
clover_pocky (Nov 19, 2007)
They're supposed to be pretty purple.

She's a snow queen or sommit.
lori (Nov 19, 2007)
this is looking pretty - I'd color the rest, then I think you'll know whether or not to add more contrast to the skin
Maiko (Nov 19, 2007)
She looks a bit masculine.
I think it might be because the neck is too thick and her face is too angular.

More definition on the nose, since it looks somewhat flat right now and the shoulders should be bigger.
davincipoppalag (Nov 20, 2007)
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Sweetcell (Nov 21, 2007)
The eyes seem a little high. I feel they should be lowered a bit. And I agree the neck seems too thick. And the lips seem small in comparison. But looking good otherwise. Loving the detail.
Purple_Misery (Nov 22, 2007)
I like it,the lineart is very clean and the skin tone is perfect. ^^

It's not even finished and it's already beautiful. Good job.


I have a problem btw. O_O how do you make the layer multiply. I can't find it in the shi-painter.
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