i agree with a bit of that i think work may need to be done on the shoulder neck area

Something about the hand on our right ..her left...looks like the arm and hand are too small ? I dunno.. I like it anyway and I can't do it

Thanks for the comments.

Sweetcell: The large hips are intentional, that's how like to draw em'. =P I agree with the rest. Thanks.
JK-Arts: I'm pretty poor in that area, yes.
Dave: You're right, it is too short. You can do it if you practice! =]

The size of her hips are fine...but the only thing that is weird is the position of her crotch at the angle she is posing...I don't want to be picky but you said you want criticism :-)

I greatly appreciate that her hips are big :-) Cuz not all women are a size 2

Anyway I think the position that she is in, you might want to move her crotch toward your left it would look anatomically right...you should look at Crimson Kings stuff he always has the anatomy right...in a really crazy squeued way :-D

I said bony not big, I myself wish I was that thin. And the crotch does need to be lowered but I repeat myself.

i loveth, im workin on anatomy too, this looks perty hot to me so fars

That's tight Hunter. I really like the direction you're going. You're skills are certainly growing.

Thanks again everyone.

Qwerty: I see what you mean. I've screwed up the weight placement. In my drawing, her left leg taking most of the weight, when really the opposite leg should be the weight bearer. It's a tricky thing. ;)
Sweetcell: Oh yeah, you didn't even say big. I misread, sorry. x.x
mooki: Graci. =)
Kloxboy: Thanks broski. Good to know that all the time spent hasn't gone to waste.

I'm not gonna go with the general "nitpick shit to death" thing going on here, (I know you're open to criticism, that's why you're getting better all the time, I just don't see anything to be critical about, here)

I would like to say that in all of your female form sketches, there's a very appealing curvey flowing femininity that comes across in each one, and the proportions don't have to be exactly correct for them to be very pleasing to view. I absolutely love the movement of the hands in this one, and the exaggerated pelvic structure.

No not you Hunter, but s'allright. :)

I love the pencil look of this, and if you're doing this without ref: applause applause.
It makes me wanna do a nude too, Ghe ghe... but I'm no good without refs, maybe gonna do myself. Hope that doesn't sound sick...

Cindy: You're too kind, Cindy. =)
Sweetcell: Not me what?
Enjoy:

maybe gonna do myself.

LOL! It's ok, we all do ourselves sometimes. ;)

Good job. If it's supposed to be somewhat cartoonish, I think it's perfect. If you're going for realism, I'd give a few tips but I like it the way it is.