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pyrobarbie (Jul 25, 2003)
she gave up her wings
so that he could fly
up and away
to leave her behind
she wanted him
so much deep inside
but he still had another
one to call his own

edit; ok done ..finito..finished..well whatcha think?




pyrobarbie (Jul 25, 2003)
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icybluecub (edited Jul 25, 2003)
oh.. wow! i love your poem! and your pic goes great with it! .. okay.. you konw me and my bgs.. *thinks* try shading the back in blues, liek the skys, maybe stars? depends, do you want a gloomy look or a dreamy look? happy- light blues like day, scrarednes??? dark with stars... a quarter moon! put one on the upper right cornor, have streams of light showing on either/both? lol. sry.
pyrobarbie (Jul 26, 2003)
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pyrobarbie (edited Jul 26, 2003)
thanx...well i put light in the bg..and recolored it and went over the lines s'more i think it looks a lil better
Mari (edited Jul 26, 2003)
It's excellent! ^.^ I just love where the idea came from! Nice poem as well! Very well done.
icybluecub (edited Jul 31, 2003)
oh .... *tears* i love your poem! i dunno if it brings out your pic or vice versa! i like how you showed how much she cares about him. makes you think- when little problems show up, he'll fly to her when she calls out to him. and maybe, just maybe, he'll go to her, just to be happy with her! no one else! *think about it in your terms kc, think*
pyrobarbie (edited Jul 31, 2003)
aww thanks sissyfers..u undersood it perfectly ^ ^
delusion86 (Sep 29, 2003)
well kc it's me april, I just got on here since I needed a new backround and I picked one of ur pics! hehee hey I wanted to comment on this one in particular b/c....well kc, it makes me sad now that I understand when I 1st saw it a while back I thought mike but, now I know and I'm so sorry....:( I wish you could tell me maybe you will someday but til then be stronf life sucks I know this....:( but dun worry that why u have friends who care ~.^ <3 ya much byes
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