I really like this, but I think a little more variation in the tone of his skin and pants would make this great.
It looks too flat for the subject...some highlights would make it pop.
I think his right arm and left leg coming out look great though
Kejeco suggested going back and putting in some highlights to make him stand out more, and he was right. I did a half assed job on this and just felt I could do better. Now, I really really like this. I'm glad I went back and worked on it more. Thanks Kejo.
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It looks too flat for the subject...some highlights would make it pop.
I think his right arm and left leg coming out look great though
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You're very welcome, glad I could help