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senshi (Jun 25, 2006)
This will turn out pretty good but i gots to take a break 4 awhile. will finish laterEdit: i'll mark it finished cause i can't get a bg idea.
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Its better than the first but its still bad
Any ideas for a bg?
No orange
1. The head is pretty squished, I think you should work on the head a bit.
2. Eyes and facial features, change them, they look a tad wrong.
3. The hair looks somewhat wrong, maybe instead of putting grey around the edges (good thinking anyway) you should put light into her hair, giving it a better affect and showing the different bits.
4. The breasts are wayyyyy too big! If you're gonna do them that big then I think you should do them in a different style.
5. She doesn't seem to have a stomach... Maybe you should put the belt onto her hips, then it would look better, and if it is one that goes around your stomach then she should be thinner around there for it to be tight, if it's loose, then show that.
6. The neck and the legs are the last things I shall touch on. They're a bit distorted, but good try (big hips).
I'm sorry to have to say that, just should have kept mah gob shut. But it's some advice for you in the future, I like the colouring though ^_^. Maybe use a reference pic next time, but this is pretty good! ^_^
2nd of all, this pic sux,
3rd of all, im never using lascaux again,
and 4th of all, yeah, she's way off. i kan't seem to draw her on teh computer.
Here's my new one: http://cellosoft.com/2draw/view/79608/