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Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (Jun 1, 2006)
This is probaboly the best human drawing I have... it's quite weird, but, I would like some critique. I'm sorry if you don't like it.. I need to put some more fine details into it later. My hand started to hurt. Yes, I have a yellow ring around my eye. This is what I'm wearing right now...
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (Jun 1, 2006)
drawn in 34 min
ryank19948 (Jun 1, 2006)
very very good human but looks nothing like you
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (Jun 1, 2006)
LIAR!!! You don't know what I look like right now!!! You're not watching me on web cam, and this is horrible compared to so many other people on this website...
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (Jun 1, 2006)
drawn in 10 min
Added freckles... incase you couldn't tell, and made my boobs bigger because I know Akechi would tell me that they are bigger.... *sticks out tounge* err... If you can't tell what the other thing is (blue green and white) it's a bra strap.. tried to make it realistic...
NOVEMBER93 (Jun 1, 2006)
you don't have that many freckles...and the nose is a little big too....and the hair looks messed up...otherwise it's pretty good
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (Jun 1, 2006)
Em... I kinda have a lot more than there is on there.....You see me a lot so you don't notice. They're very cluttered. Errr... okay, I don't have a picture or anything of me. I'm not refing... I'll work on the nose...
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (Jun 1, 2006)
drawn in 2 min
Okay emily, fixed th enoze...
Sweetcell (Jun 1, 2006)
What I would do is click on the flesh tone and on med low opacity try to blend out those freckles, they look unnatural. Make them so they don't pop out as much. Move the mouth more to the middle of the head. If you look at a face the mouth nose and eyes form an upsidedown rectangle. The corners of the mouth should rest at the corners of the outer eyes. Take the flesh tone and use a darker shade of it to do the outlines, at the moment the black is too harsh. And don't be afraid to outline with thick lines and then erase to thinner smoother lines. That includes the hair too, with a few highlights in the hair just slightly lighter than the hair color. Look in a mirror, see where your eyes and nose fall and where the shadows are and apply accordingly, same with highlights, and if you take too many freckles out just use a darker tone of the flesh color on low opacity and apply sparingly.

I hope you don't take this as harsh critique, you can ignore it if you want, but your doing quite well WMG.
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (Jun 2, 2006)
No, I'm not taking it harshly, I just take critiques as advice. I just don't like it when people say that it's horrible and don't tell me what to fix and yell me. Thanks, I'll work on it.
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (Jun 2, 2006)
drawn in 12 min
The applet got screwed so I'm gonna open it again and do some more work...
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (Jun 2, 2006)
drawn in 12 min
This any better? I couldn't get the hair right though...
xiau (Jun 2, 2006)
You're putting a lot of effort into this, and it's showing. Keep working at it, you're doing a great job!
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (Jun 2, 2006)
Thanks a lot xiau!
Sweetcell (Jun 2, 2006)
Looking much better. The freckles look more like part of your skin and the mouth is better porportioned. Darken the nose and mouth, add some highlights (if you use dodge on LOW opacity and flow with a med large blush you'll get good highlights without having to try out lighter flesh tones.) Highlights are normally on the cheecks under the eyes and on the ridge of the nose and on the chin. Color the brows the same color as your hair clean up the lines a bit and I'd say your done. Coming along sweeting. Good job.

Remember LOW opacity on dodge. People can ruin things putting dodge on high. I know, I have. X)
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (Jun 2, 2006)
Thanks Sweet... going to work on it now...
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (Jun 2, 2006)
drawn in 11 min
TA DA!!! DONE!!!!
xiau (Jun 2, 2006)
This is definately your best picture yet~
Now aren't you glad you put all of that hard work into it? It looks great <3
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (Jun 2, 2006)
Yes, I am. I like the gaillon pic or the Greifer better though.. thanks for commenting though!
Sweetcell (Jun 2, 2006)
Much better. Much improved. The griefer picture impressed me, remember to practice with faces. A head should be drawn as an upsidown egg. Then a line vertically and horizontally half way, dots on either side of the horizontol ___ line help you properly line the eyes and on the lower half of the head it should be halved in quarters. That shows you where the nose and mouth lay. I wish I could describe it better, art books will show what I mean. Keep practicing.
cybunnieswithbraces (Jun 2, 2006)
I won't deny that you have that many freckles, but it looks kinda like you have smallpox or something...
That really struck me as hilarious...*laughs*
OK, done laughing. But it looks really good!
And you're smiling. *tear drop* That makes me feel important...*reminices*
ryank19948 (Jun 2, 2006)
um and why does it make you feel important dd????
cybunnieswithbraces (Jun 2, 2006)
Because...I helped her.
*pokes Griefer drawing*
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (Jun 3, 2006)
Yes, you helped me more than anybody else could. My parents just didn't understand, but, you did. Thank you a lots dd.....
cybunnieswithbraces (Jun 3, 2006)
Uber-welks!
What else am I here for, eh? ;D
Wild_Mustang_Girl312 (Jun 3, 2006)
I dunno.. to make everybody a cyborg and help me and letting the vampires get world domenation!!! BWAHAHAHA!!!! Eh....hehe... you didn't hear aaaaanything..... *whacks with stick*
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