I like that you used red for almost everything, and very little of the black and white. Its tone is better fitting to the subject matter too. Anyway I told you which works I liked.
I think I don't like red, but then I'm always attracted to these paintings that are all red. I like that my eye goes to the focal point in the center and all around, and back to the focal point. I'm not sure what it is but it doesn't matter, I like it because the composition works like that.
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