his eye should be thinner, and the collar should be taller (bring hsi shoulder down) and closer to his neck.

This looks really nice so far!

I'm not a big Roy fan, but this is looking really good so far! Very nice first pic.

Roy! *Glomps*

you shouldn't fill in the colours with the airbrush. it makes things loook.. blahish. Also, Im not sure if you did this, but the colours should be ona layer underneath the lines.

God, I suck

so freakin cute! XD & theres nothing wrong with it to me, i like aly's version better! ^-^

Yay, you finished it! It looks great, an awesome start on this site. You did extremely good on his glove!

OMG ROY ROCKS! Just to make sure... is it the Roy off of Fire Emblem? Because if it is, I thought Roy had redish hair? And Marth had Blue?

Nah, it's Roy from Fullmetal Alchemist

(pokes canadian_dragon) Ahhh, Josh, you have much to learn about FMA. Now come on, I'll explain everything on MSN for you. (drags C_D off)
Don't mind him, he's never watched FMA before. I showed him an Ed piccy on MSN and he didn't get it at all. But to people who have ever seen Roy, I'm sure they'll recognize this. I can't get over the amazingness. This looks like something I'd be drawing months from now.

Yay! Go Mustang! Well I must say, Bravo~! XD

It's a bit scetchy but it looks pretty good :)