Nah, kinda makes me wanna staple her pants to to her waist.. shading plx?
And is that ulttra thin fabric or is it body paint? Clothes are generally not implanted into the skin, they should stand away from the body some.. speaking of the body, a bit more... shape.. would be nice, more elbowness int he elbows ( a semi-circle, in my opinion, doesn't really cut it XD)
good skin tone though.. if only there was more than one shade of it, hehe
Having botherd to look at the rest of amys gallery i can see she is attemting to pull away from drawing just cartoons... would be nice to see people giving her helpful advice rather then sly insults I would have hoped people here with talent wouldnt be so snobby -.-
If she "doesnt cut it" do as I have done, ive offerd to help amy learn more when she has time, as i dont get my chuckles from pulling people down. tnx
vv See thats helpful stuff vv
vv See thats helpful stuff vv
Shading, you already have darker lines, no just add shading around them. The lineart in the body is excelent for someone newer like you, although it looks like you used the line tool in some spots, maybe next time you could use the freehand? The t-shirt is a bit weird, i'm not quite sure what's going on, Maybe clarify it a bit more. Add a background too, be creative!
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And is that ulttra thin fabric or is it body paint? Clothes are generally not implanted into the skin, they should stand away from the body some.. speaking of the body, a bit more... shape.. would be nice, more elbowness int he elbows ( a semi-circle, in my opinion, doesn't really cut it XD)
good skin tone though.. if only there was more than one shade of it, hehe
If she "doesnt cut it" do as I have done, ive offerd to help amy learn more when she has time, as i dont get my chuckles from pulling people down. tnx
vv See thats helpful stuff vv
vv See thats helpful stuff vv
Needs work on...
Shading, you already have darker lines, no just add shading around them. The lineart in the body is excelent for someone newer like you, although it looks like you used the line tool in some spots, maybe next time you could use the freehand? The t-shirt is a bit weird, i'm not quite sure what's going on, Maybe clarify it a bit more. Add a background too, be creative!
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I like this better with coloured outlines...
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