forumsthe post boarda poem the mods will hate
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Akechi456 (edited Jul 23, 2005)
do u ever get tired of looking at urself??
well then,dont look in the mirror.
ever want to just walk up to ur mom and damn ur ugly?
do it and run.
r u 19 years old and still a virgin?
do worry,some pretty girl will come along and please u in ur sleep.
dont worry all ur needs will be fulfilled if u just do it.
shit happens cuz ppl make it happen,
this aint really a poem and it aint about the mods,
its about how my friend wants to get laid.
so have a good evening and remember,
get ur ugly ass up,
and draw.
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Nightmare (Jul 11, 2005)
You need grammar classes. I cannot understand this 'poem' at all.
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Akechi456 (Jul 11, 2005)
u werent meant to..u have to have a mind like mine...
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squee (Jul 11, 2005)
It's not a peom. Read the dictionary. Get a life.
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Akechi456 (Jul 11, 2005)
i told u its not really a poem it was intended to be tho..then vincent to the keyboard and typed all this in i just submitted it...and u need a life...shit...i dont need a life..dont want one is more like it...
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squee (Jul 11, 2005)
At least don't post crap like this. You're stinkin' up the forum.
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Nightmare (Jul 11, 2005)
I don't want to have a mind like yours. Its a wonder you can even use the computer let alone form a coheirent sentence.
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Akechi456 (Jul 11, 2005)
*coughkindalikeucough*..blah blah..i dont even like 2draw my damn bf forces my to come here..he thinks its cool...this place takes up my free time only came to the forums because the sign tricked me and said its a great place!>.< thats a fucking lie!!!
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squee (edited Jul 11, 2005)
Nightmare: Yesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss.

Me? Get a life? I bought one for two cents two years ago and it's going pretty smoothly. I just get pissed easily especially when people wanna try and be "funny".

*coughkindalikeucough*..blah blah..i dont even like 2draw my damn bf forces my to come here..he thinks its cool...this place takes up my free time only came to the forums because the sign tricked me and said its a great place!>.< thats a fucking lie!!!
Then leave and don't come back. Why do people say that they hate a place then don't leave? Tell your bf you hate it here and he'll understand. If he was you back on, tell him no. I don't wanna see you if you hate this place. Get off or stay and enjoy yourself.
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Akechi456 (Jul 11, 2005)
i aint tryin to be im really pissed off myself....i aint got much to look foward to and i dont blame u for gettin pissed at me i piss ppl off alot because im a freak say all u want about me im a freak!!!! i dont give a damn about what happens i just wanna be left alone about my life and what i do ppl comments cant change m e i hope u didnt enjoy the speech and this took time out of ur life
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concannon (Jul 11, 2005)
*clears throat* Correction time.

"Do you ever get tired of looking at yourself?
Well then, don't look in the mirror.
Even want to just walk up to your mom and damn your ugly?
Do it and run.
Are you nineteen years old and still a virgin?
Do worry, some pretty girl will come along and please you in your sleep.
Don't worry all your needs will be fulfulled if you just do it.
Shit happens because people make it happen,
This ain't really a poem and it ain't about the mods,
It's about hwo my friends wants to get laid.
So have a good evening and remember,
Get your ugly ass up,
And draw."

Congratulations. You have completely mutilated the meaning of poetry.
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squee (edited Jul 11, 2005)
I have all the time in the world. I bet you do too you just refuse to use it. Usually I scare people off after I tell them I'm Emo. For some reason it scares people where I live off. If you don't wanna be on here then leave. You have a choice and we're not stopping you.

VV: well done.
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Akechi456 (Jul 11, 2005)
squee...emo kids dont scare me..i love emo kids..i just hate to be criticized...so yea..i no i bother u i just try to hard to fit in
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squee (Jul 11, 2005)
If you don't like critcism this isn't the place for you. We criticise a lot here. You would fit in a little better if you didn't mutilate poetry, you didn't let stupid friends comment for you, and you don't say "I hate this place" When you won't leave. That pisses a lot of people off.
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Xodiak (Jul 11, 2005)
I want a pretty girl to come and please me in my sleep too! >;D
Do not worry if you are still a virgin. A person who is 10 years old is usually a virgin. >:)
|XOD|
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Nightmare (edited Jul 11, 2005)
Can you just stop rambling? You cannot seem to form a thought at all, and have killed the meaning of poetry.
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squee (Jul 11, 2005)
Here's some advice. You can have friends or enemies here on 2draw. So far I have one enemy and almost everyone here is my friend. You can choose on which side of people you wanna be on. Advice about me, Don't be a fucking idiot and I'll start to like you.
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solve (Jul 11, 2005)
FACED!
squee set the story straight.
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Gigandas (Jul 11, 2005)
Seems to me that after having pointed out 'your' views about the poem itself, is pretty much unnecessary. Things like "get a life" or "it's a wonder you can even use a computer" are asking for pointless arguments. What I'm saying is, pointless arguments are a waste of time, and here, it's a waste of space as well.
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Knockoff (Jul 11, 2005)
That's just moronic and you should die. Thanks.
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squee (Jul 11, 2005)
*bangs head on desk*

You're right Gigandas.. You're so smart. You and the almighty Zak. *bows at your feet*
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Zack (edited Jul 11, 2005)
People who go on the internet to call people losers and tell them to "get a life" crack me up. What a sweet thing is this irony.

Also funny is how people treat virginity like a disease. Some people want to get rid of it as soon as possible, and when you tell people you still have it, they say, "oh, man, that sucks."
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p3ndragon (Jul 11, 2005)
Laughing out Loud at XOD's pure ownage.
 
safescene (edited Jul 11, 2005)
Ha, I wouldn't be so sure as to call Xod's pwnage "pure"...
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squee (Jul 11, 2005)
I'm a virgin and I ain't complaining. w00tness! I haven't even made out with a guy before.... -_- *shuN*
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Xodiak (Jul 11, 2005)
I like virgins. <:)
|XOD|
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15grifficorntears (Jul 12, 2005)
Poor me I feel left out of the virgin ring. :(
And Squee, I think you need to chill out. Go smoke some weed or sumthin.
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Hakkai (Jul 12, 2005)
Weed is bad, Mmkay?
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squee (Jul 12, 2005)
o-o I'll go drink some koolaid. k Trish?
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HunterKiller_ (Jul 12, 2005)
Here's the moral of the thread kids, if you don't want to get ass fucked on the internet, learn to spell.

Weed is bad, but weed + elevators = fun.
I'm a virgin Xod, do you like me? =) (rofl at your ownage by the way.)
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solve (Jul 12, 2005)
weed and elevators? thats a new one.
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squee (Jul 12, 2005)
alcohol+narrow hallways=time of your life.

D: Sad to say I drink.
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Cordelia_Pink (edited Jul 12, 2005)
do u ever get tired of looking at urself??
You mean you get tired of looking at yourself?
well then,dont look in the mirror.
why not look in the mirror?
ever want to just walk up to ur mom and [insert "say"?] damn ur ugly?
lol why would you want to walk up to your mom and say that?
do it and run.
Why run? If you tell her that then you should stand on your two feet and wait for a reaction and see if she'll ground you or beat you up. hehe or worse. To run would only mean you're a chicken. Duh.
r u 19 years old and still a virgin?
What's wrong with being nineteen and a virgin? Oh and to answer that question, yes.
do worry,some pretty girl will come along and please u in ur sleep.
Yes I should worry because I don't want some pretty girl to come into my room; lmao I'd rather see a guy.
dont worry all ur needs will be fulfilled if u just do it.
how do you know that my needs will be fulfilled if I do it? speaking of "it", do what? lol
shit happens cuz ppl make it happen,
how does it happen?
this aint really a poem and it aint about the mods,
I'm used to reading poems that have a rhyming scheme but what's mods got to do with it?
its about how my friend [insert "who"?] wants to get laid.
your friend wants to get laid by a chicken? lol why?
so have a good evening and remember,
Thanks for ruining it!
get ur ugly ass up,
But I'll get tired right away if I stand up
and draw.
Draw what?
That was fun! :D You guys should try it.
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squee (edited Jul 13, 2005)
lmao..
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Cordelia_Pink (Jul 12, 2005)
Anything I can do, you can do it TOO! lol This is like child's play. hehe
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squee (Jul 12, 2005)
It's fun! :D
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solve (Jul 12, 2005)
do u ever get tired of looking at urself??
no, im narcissistic.
well then,dont look in the mirror.
dont tell me what to do, i pwnz you dood.
ever want to just walk up to ur mom and [insert "say"?] damn ur ugly?
no, stop projecting yourself unto me.
r u 19 years old and still a virgin?
im 22, and never have sex, ever.
do worry,some pretty girl will come along and please u in ur sleep.
can i get a time and a date?
dont worry all ur needs will be fulfilled if u just do it.
what about all of my wants? gimme some money.
shit happens cuz ppl make it happen,
wouldnt that be cause and effect?
this aint really a poem and it aint about the mods,
yeah, poems contain: alliteration, symbolism, rhythm,ryhme,intelligence, etc etc.
its about how my friend [insert "who"?] wants to get laid.
the passion and want could consume him untill he has sex, then he will want more and more. wants are funny like that. lame.
so have a good evening and remember,
get ur ugly ass up,
and draw.
ive been up. try to keep up.

well that wasted some time on something so dull. yay i contributed!
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squee (Jul 12, 2005)
Wee yay solve!
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Xodiak (Jul 12, 2005)
Of course I like you Mr. HunterKiller! I also like the poem, it has deep messages. <:)
|XOD|
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Animegirl250 (Jul 12, 2005)
If your friend wants to get laid tell him/her to crawl up a chickens ass and wait.
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thug (Jul 12, 2005)
this reminds me of a line from a song that happens to rhyme like a poem:
"I didn't get fucked and I didn't get kissed, I got so fucking pissed"
well, there's my 2 cents, and the monetary value of this whole discussion
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Akechi456 (Jul 12, 2005)
thank u..all of u.especially squee.i guess...but really..yesterday the arguing was mostly vincent...hes a guy to answer one question and is 13.he thinks i wont notice all the unknown comments i made...i appreciate all of ur comments everyone.especially squee's.ur really smart,like a god!!::bows in squee's greatness::
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me007 (Jul 12, 2005)
If your boyfriend does all of this stuff to you under your account, why don't you go in and change your password? I honestly don't know who was talking if that wasn't you before, but, if I read what you wrote correctly, your boyfriend went under your account, and started posting comments that made you look like an idiot? Is that correct?
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Knockoff (Jul 12, 2005)
That's either stupid or you are just trying to cover yourself up now. :|
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davincipoppalag (Jul 12, 2005)
Better idea..just go draw something and stop wasting everyone's time
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Akechi456 (Jul 12, 2005)
it was him but the pics were mine..no im not tryin to cover myself up he has problems with "verbal abuse". so yea...i set up the account for me originally but i was showing him aorund the website and then i left i guess he commented because usually i agree with ppl critisim.i appreciate it..!!!
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me007 (Jul 12, 2005)
So you like the site, and your boyfriend doesn't, but he made up the lie that you didn't like the site, and that he was keeping you on it? Here is my one bit of advice: If you have a boyfriend that is that immature, and likes messing around with your life with disregard to everybody else around you, I would suggest either finding a new "boyfriend" or wait a couple of years for a relationship. Your boyfriend sounds like he has more than a few issues within himself that he needs to get worked out, and a lot of growing up to do.
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squee (Jul 12, 2005)
thank u..all of u.especially squee.i guess...but really..yesterday the arguing was mostly vincent...hes a guy to answer one question and is 13.he thinks i wont notice all the unknown comments i made...i appreciate all of ur comments everyone.especially squee's.ur really smart,like a god!!::bows in squee's greatness::

I don't care if it's sucking up or not. That fucking rules :D
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Xodiak (Jul 12, 2005)
I like your boyfriend. Tell him to get a separate account so I can tell who is who. <:)
|XOD|
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Noremac (Jul 13, 2005)
never thought i would see the day that squess is worshipped by something, let alone a human.
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Hakkai (Jul 13, 2005)
=/ That was kind of mean.
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Nightmare (Jul 13, 2005)
do u ever get tired of looking at urself??
No. The mirror breaks by the time my eyes focus upon my mug.
well then,dont look in the mirror.
Too bad. I already did.
ever want to just walk up to ur mom and damn ur ugly?
...could you re-phrase that?
do it and run.
Why run? I am too fucking lazy too run.
r u 19 years old and still a virgin?
No. Then again, I am not 19, and I could care less being a virgin.
do worry,some pretty girl will come along and please u in ur sleep.
No, that would be creepy. I am asleep, I am tired. I DON'T WANT TO BE DISTURBED.
dont worry all ur needs will be fulfilled if u just do it.
Do what?
shit happens cuz ppl make it happen,
Shit happens? Wow. You must be a detective, Dick.
this aint really a poem and it aint about the mods,
I kinda figured that out, Dick.
its about how my friend wants to get laid.
Well, no problem there. Just give him 75 cents and point him towards that woman on the corner.
so have a good evening and remember,
...it's evening?
get ur ugly ass up,
No. STFU. I like my chair.
and draw.
No. But I will refill my coffee mug. :B
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Cordelia_Pink (Jul 13, 2005)
do u ever get tired of looking at urself??
No. The mirror breaks by the time my eyes focus upon my mug.

lol, good one!!
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Akechi456 (Jul 13, 2005)
nightmare's last comment was funny
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squee (Jul 13, 2005)
never thought i would see the day that squess is worshipped by something, let alone a human.

I'm worshiped by mosquitoes.. :3

Nightmare: lmao
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MorbidBeauty (Jul 13, 2005)
do u ever get tired of looking at urself??
Who says I am always looking at myself? o.o
well then,dont look in the mirror.
I'm not =/
ever want to just walk up to ur mom and [insert "say"?] damn ur ugly?
Not at all.
do it and run.
Do what? And I'm not so good at running. o.o
r u 19 years old and still a virgin?
No, I'm 16 and a virgin.
do worry,some pretty girl will come along and please u in ur sleep.
Ugh, I don't want a girl I want a boy =\ I'm not a lesbian.
dont worry all ur needs will be fulfilled if u just do it.
Do what now?
shit happens cuz ppl make it happen,
Uhm, duh? >>
this aint really a poem and it aint about the mods,
What a misleading title.
its about how my friend [insert "who"?] wants to get laid.
Like I care or want to know?
so have a good evening and remember,
It's not evening here either =\
get ur ugly ass up,
and draw.
Why would I get up just to sit down again so I can draw? You're rather confusing.

o.o Hm. That was.. pointless, Lol.
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squee (edited Jul 13, 2005)
do u ever get tired of looking at urself??
Yes, I do without a doubt..
well then,dont look in the mirror.
How do you expect me not to? Rip my eyes out?
ever want to just walk up to ur mom and [insert "say"?] damn ur ugly?
What if I don't wanna talk?
do it and run.
Erm do what and run? I trip over my own feet can I walk?
r u 19 years old and still a virgin?
I'm 14 and a virgin. Wow you were off
do worry,some pretty girl will come along and please u in ur sleep.
A girl please me in my sleep? Hope its two guys instead. *cough*
dont worry all ur needs will be fulfilled if u just do it.
What do I do to become ruler of the world? Hey you said my needs.
shit happens cuz ppl make it happen,
It happens a lot and so does pee.
this aint really a poem and it aint about the mods,
You suck at rhyming you whore
its about how my friend [insert "who"?] wants to get laid.
Try giving him money to have sex with the hooker at the corner of a store
so have a good evening and remember,
What if it's dusk? Remember? Remember What?
get ur ugly ass up,
No I like to sit on my butt D:<
and draw.
Die.

I rhyme better than you do.

Sry. had to do it again.. Its so damned funny.
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Nightmare (Jul 13, 2005)
Tell me about it. I wish another ass-hat would make another one of these, they are fun to do.
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squee (Jul 13, 2005)
I hope one doesn't rhyme so I can make my answers to them rhyme like I just did. Haha.. fun.
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Cordelia_Pink (Jul 13, 2005)
You actually might come to like the poem once you do it some more. lol
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marcello (Jul 13, 2005)
There once was a dude who was cool;
And everyone thought that he ruled.
He was so cool that he died.
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Nightmare (Jul 13, 2005)
That poem pwns.
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Cordelia_Pink (Jul 13, 2005)
Marcello, who was that dude that died who was once cool and ruled?
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MoonlitShadow (Jul 13, 2005)
I believe those inquiries were rhetorical, but ah well.. Your responses were quite hilarious to read. =D
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squee (Jul 13, 2005)
There once was a dude who was cool;
And everyone thought that he ruled.
He was so cool that he died.

lmao. That sucks.
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Nightmare (Jul 13, 2005)
You need things.
Lots of things.
Were are things.
I like things.
Were do you put things.
I have alot of things.
Look!
A box.
Whats in the box.
Trees.

:B


I had to make one, now answer mine.
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HunterKiller_ (Jul 14, 2005)
That's by far the best poem i've heard in awhile.

Here's one,
If you can't spell
Then don't post
Or you look like an ass
As big as a bass (o.0)
And you'll get owned
Like your mother got pwned

I should be a writer.
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Ty854 (Jul 14, 2005)
Heres a poem i wrote a while back, im pretty proud, so dont bash it.


Happy
I Found
Cracker Jacks Box
No Prize In Box
Just Stale Popcorn
And Silence
Sad
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HunterKiller_ (Jul 14, 2005)
Omfg! That's even better than my one. *sob*
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Gigandas (Jul 14, 2005)
Hah, this is still going eh?
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HunterKiller_ (Jul 14, 2005)
Ok ok, this one will pwn you all.

2day i go on 2drew
i drew pokmon!!11! ^.^
only take me 5 minuts!
ppl calld me nooby
so i sed, u suk! ^.^
nd thn i got band
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Kasha (Jul 14, 2005)
Ty, that was very moving. I loved it....oh...still loving it.
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Cordelia_Pink (Jul 14, 2005)
lol those are neat poems you got there peeps! lol I wanna post mine but it's too too long and I wrote it two nights ago. I was reading that "poem" backwards and sounded even better! lol

and draw.
get ur ugly ass up,
so have a good evening and remember,
its about how my friend wants to get laid.
this aint really a poem and it aint about the mods,
shit happens cuz ppl make it happen,
dont worry all ur needs will be fulfilled if u just do it.
do worry,some pretty girl will come along and please u in ur sleep.
r u 19 years old and still a virgin?
do it and run.
ever want to just walk up to ur mom and damn ur ugly?
well then,dont look in the mirror.
do u ever get tired of looking at urself??
I'll bet you scare yourself a lot.
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Nightmare (Jul 14, 2005)
LMAO.

Toliet
Hard and cold
Eating up Waste
Ending our pain
Never stopping
Deathly Smelling

:P
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squee (Jul 14, 2005)
I call this one trashcan

Trashcan oh Trashcan!
You stink!
Trashcan oh Trashcan!
You're nasty!
Trashcan oh Traschcan!
How I love thee!

:D
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Nightmare (Jul 14, 2005)
I call this one, my sanity.

HOW MUCH MORE
OF THIS CAN
I TYPE
LIEK OMG
TREES!!!!

:B
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Kasha (Jul 14, 2005)
alright, I think it's safe to say this topic should be locked.

you people get a little out of hand. :(
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solve (Jul 14, 2005)
BEST FORUM EVER!
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Nightmare (Jul 14, 2005)
Indeed. This should be pinned or something...
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Xodiak (Jul 14, 2005)
Girls have big breasts,
and boys have big toys.
I like to faq like a horny duck,
today my day was gay straight.
|XOD|
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Akechi456 (Jul 14, 2005)
alriight then...XOD you have quite a....um.....alright then XOD..
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Xodiak (Jul 14, 2005)
Oh and happy birthday Miss Mimi-chan!
Happy birthday to you.
Happy birthday to you.
Happy birthday dear Mimi-chan,
Happy birthday to you!
|XOD|
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Cordelia_Pink (Jul 14, 2005)
Who is Miss Mimi-chan, Xod?
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Ty854 (Jul 15, 2005)
Akechi456
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HunterKiller_ (edited Jul 15, 2005)
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I like girls
And so do you

[st]w00t![/st]
EDIT: [s]w00t![/s]
EDIT2: [sk]w00t![/sk]
EDIT3: w00t
EDIT4: Yes! w00t! Pwnage.
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Akechi456 (Jul 17, 2005)
thank u XOD.....
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squee (Jul 17, 2005)
Erm.. Happy late bday? I think.
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Akechi456 (Jul 20, 2005)
yea..my b-day was the 15th...of july...this month...of summer...otness...sweaty teenage boys always coming over into my driveway!!!...>.< it actually sux...cuz they all ugly except one..who i dont no whos name is...dang..
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MoonlitShadow (Jul 20, 2005)
o_o

For longer than I can remember
I've been looking for someone like you..
Someone with a head like yours
And a torso, too..
Birds sing
And you're gonna PAY!
The end.

xD Anyone know what the poem is from? >>; ... o.O;;
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Akechi456 (Jul 21, 2005)
no...not really...nope nada not a clue aint got nothing..not a thing.......i dont no where its form...but its nice...nicey nice nice
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MoonlitShadow (Jul 21, 2005)
I'll give you a hint, it was on an episode of a certian cartoon.. o.o;
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Akechi456 (Jul 21, 2005)
.....uumm!! i wanna say FMA but sometin tells me..no! dont go that way! turn the other way,go back! go back! ur goin the wrong way!!
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MoonlitShadow (Jul 21, 2005)
It isn't an anime. =x
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fleeting_memory (edited Jul 21, 2005)
zzzzz I tried to read this whole thread through and gave up about 3/4th of the way though. Hey Akechi you should try this place called www.animeleague.com it is like a board like this except that its for poetry. You might get a kick out of it it's pretty cool. Yeah and even though I didn't finsh readin the thread-dude just tell your bf where to stick it and do what you want.
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Asriel (Jul 22, 2005)
okay wow. two things. first, a poem:
roses are red
violets are blue
i'm schizophrenic
and so am I.

second: I'm really surprised that a topic lasted so long from such a stupid little thing. it's kinda... sick. someone (nightmare)(squee) just had to respond. If you hadn't that one entry w/ the poem would have just sat there. You could have just let her feel dumb about posting and she could express herself to the open air.
However, it's also Akechi's fault for even posting in the first place. I'm sure there are even other sites you could have ... "vented your anger on" anyway. no need to bother 2draw unless you're going to be a kind individual and become part of the... 2draw "family".
Anyway, it's also interesting to me that so many different random topics branched off from this. (partially thanks to Xod's random interjac-- I'm sorry, interjections... lol

hasta la pasta *whoosh*
 
pwn3d.moron (Jul 22, 2005)
pashtes is godo
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Akechi456 (Jul 22, 2005)
first of all...i dont care because im 2 sleepy to read thru ur comment Asriel and i broke up with my bf about half way thru these comments so yea...thanx a lot..
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SimplyX (Jul 23, 2005)
It's strange to see that this topic is still an on-going process.
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Akechi456 (Jul 23, 2005)
yes it is..
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Maiko (Jul 23, 2005)
Locked :3
 
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