do u ever get tired of looking at urself??
well then,dont look in the mirror.
ever want to just walk up to ur mom and damn ur ugly?
do it and run.
r u 19 years old and still a virgin?
do worry,some pretty girl will come along and please u in ur sleep.
dont worry all ur needs will be fulfilled if u just do it.
shit happens cuz ppl make it happen,
this aint really a poem and it aint about the mods,
its about how my friend wants to get laid.
so have a good evening and remember,
get ur ugly ass up,
and draw.

You need grammar classes. I cannot understand this 'poem' at all.

u werent meant to..u have to have a mind like mine...

It's not a peom. Read the dictionary. Get a life.

i told u its not really a poem it was intended to be tho..then vincent to the keyboard and typed all this in i just submitted it...and u need a life...shit...i dont need a life..dont want one is more like it...

At least don't post crap like this. You're stinkin' up the forum.

I don't want to have a mind like yours. Its a wonder you can even use the computer let alone form a coheirent sentence.

*coughkindalikeucough*..blah blah..i dont even like 2draw my damn bf forces my to come here..he thinks its cool...this place takes up my free time only came to the forums because the sign tricked me and said its a great place!>.< thats a fucking lie!!!

Nightmare: Yesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss.

Me? Get a life? I bought one for two cents two years ago and it's going pretty smoothly. I just get pissed easily especially when people wanna try and be "funny".

*coughkindalikeucough*..blah blah..i dont even like 2draw my damn bf forces my to come here..he thinks its cool...this place takes up my free time only came to the forums because the sign tricked me and said its a great place!>.< thats a fucking lie!!!

Then leave and don't come back. Why do people say that they hate a place then don't leave? Tell your bf you hate it here and he'll understand. If he was you back on, tell him no. I don't wanna see you if you hate this place. Get off or stay and enjoy yourself.

i aint tryin to be im really pissed off myself....i aint got much to look foward to and i dont blame u for gettin pissed at me i piss ppl off alot because im a freak say all u want about me im a freak!!!! i dont give a damn about what happens i just wanna be left alone about my life and what i do ppl comments cant change m e i hope u didnt enjoy the speech and this took time out of ur life

*clears throat* Correction time.

"Do you ever get tired of looking at yourself?
Well then, don't look in the mirror.
Even want to just walk up to your mom and damn your ugly?
Do it and run.
Are you nineteen years old and still a virgin?
Do worry, some pretty girl will come along and please you in your sleep.
Don't worry all your needs will be fulfulled if you just do it.
Shit happens because people make it happen,
This ain't really a poem and it ain't about the mods,
It's about hwo my friends wants to get laid.
So have a good evening and remember,
Get your ugly ass up,
And draw."

Congratulations. You have completely mutilated the meaning of poetry.

I have all the time in the world. I bet you do too you just refuse to use it. Usually I scare people off after I tell them I'm Emo. For some reason it scares people where I live off. If you don't wanna be on here then leave. You have a choice and we're not stopping you.

VV: well done.

squee...emo kids dont scare me..i love emo kids..i just hate to be criticized...so yea..i no i bother u i just try to hard to fit in

If you don't like critcism this isn't the place for you. We criticise a lot here. You would fit in a little better if you didn't mutilate poetry, you didn't let stupid friends comment for you, and you don't say "I hate this place" When you won't leave. That pisses a lot of people off.

I want a pretty girl to come and please me in my sleep too! >;D
Do not worry if you are still a virgin. A person who is 10 years old is usually a virgin. >:)
|XOD|

Can you just stop rambling? You cannot seem to form a thought at all, and have killed the meaning of poetry.

Here's some advice. You can have friends or enemies here on 2draw. So far I have one enemy and almost everyone here is my friend. You can choose on which side of people you wanna be on. Advice about me, Don't be a fucking idiot and I'll start to like you.

FACED!
squee set the story straight.

Seems to me that after having pointed out 'your' views about the poem itself, is pretty much unnecessary. Things like "get a life" or "it's a wonder you can even use a computer" are asking for pointless arguments. What I'm saying is, pointless arguments are a waste of time, and here, it's a waste of space as well.

That's just moronic and you should die. Thanks.

*bangs head on desk*

You're right Gigandas.. You're so smart. You and the almighty Zak. *bows at your feet*

People who go on the internet to call people losers and tell them to "get a life" crack me up. What a sweet thing is this irony.

Also funny is how people treat virginity like a disease. Some people want to get rid of it as soon as possible, and when you tell people you still have it, they say, "oh, man, that sucks."

Laughing out Loud at XOD's pure ownage.

Ha, I wouldn't be so sure as to call Xod's pwnage "pure"...

I'm a virgin and I ain't complaining. w00tness! I haven't even made out with a guy before.... -_- *shuN*

I like virgins. <:)
|XOD|

Poor me I feel left out of the virgin ring. :(
And Squee, I think you need to chill out. Go smoke some weed or sumthin.

Weed is bad, Mmkay?

o-o I'll go drink some koolaid. k Trish?

Here's the moral of the thread kids, if you don't want to get ass fucked on the internet, learn to spell.

Weed is bad, but weed + elevators = fun.
I'm a virgin Xod, do you like me? =) (rofl at your ownage by the way.)

weed and elevators? thats a new one.

alcohol+narrow hallways=time of your life.

D: Sad to say I drink.

do u ever get tired of looking at urself??
You mean you get tired of looking at yourself?
well then,dont look in the mirror.
why not look in the mirror?
ever want to just walk up to ur mom and [insert "say"?] damn ur ugly?
lol why would you want to walk up to your mom and say that?
do it and run.
Why run? If you tell her that then you should stand on your two feet and wait for a reaction and see if she'll ground you or beat you up. hehe or worse. To run would only mean you're a chicken. Duh.
r u 19 years old and still a virgin?
What's wrong with being nineteen and a virgin? Oh and to answer that question, yes.
do worry,some pretty girl will come along and please u in ur sleep.
Yes I should worry because I don't want some pretty girl to come into my room; lmao I'd rather see a guy.
dont worry all ur needs will be fulfilled if u just do it.
how do you know that my needs will be fulfilled if I do it? speaking of "it", do what? lol
shit happens cuz ppl make it happen,
how does it happen?
this aint really a poem and it aint about the mods,
I'm used to reading poems that have a rhyming scheme but what's mods got to do with it?
its about how my friend [insert "who"?] wants to get laid.
your friend wants to get laid by a chicken? lol why?
so have a good evening and remember,
Thanks for ruining it!
get ur ugly ass up,
But I'll get tired right away if I stand up
and draw.
Draw what?
That was fun! :D You guys should try it.

lmao..

Anything I can do, you can do it TOO! lol This is like child's play. hehe

It's fun! :D

do u ever get tired of looking at urself??
no, im narcissistic.
well then,dont look in the mirror.
dont tell me what to do, i pwnz you dood.
ever want to just walk up to ur mom and [insert "say"?] damn ur ugly?
no, stop projecting yourself unto me.
r u 19 years old and still a virgin?
im 22, and never have sex, ever.
do worry,some pretty girl will come along and please u in ur sleep.
can i get a time and a date?
dont worry all ur needs will be fulfilled if u just do it.
what about all of my wants? gimme some money.
shit happens cuz ppl make it happen,
wouldnt that be cause and effect?
this aint really a poem and it aint about the mods,
yeah, poems contain: alliteration, symbolism, rhythm,ryhme,intelligence, etc etc.
its about how my friend [insert "who"?] wants to get laid.
the passion and want could consume him untill he has sex, then he will want more and more. wants are funny like that. lame.
so have a good evening and remember,
get ur ugly ass up,
and draw.
ive been up. try to keep up.

well that wasted some time on something so dull. yay i contributed!

Wee yay solve!

Of course I like you Mr. HunterKiller! I also like the poem, it has deep messages. <:)
|XOD|

If your friend wants to get laid tell him/her to crawl up a chickens ass and wait.

this reminds me of a line from a song that happens to rhyme like a poem:
"I didn't get fucked and I didn't get kissed, I got so fucking pissed"
well, there's my 2 cents, and the monetary value of this whole discussion

thank u..all of u.especially squee.i guess...but really..yesterday the arguing was mostly vincent...hes a guy to answer one question and is 13.he thinks i wont notice all the unknown comments i made...i appreciate all of ur comments everyone.especially squee's.ur really smart,like a god!!::bows in squee's greatness::

If your boyfriend does all of this stuff to you under your account, why don't you go in and change your password? I honestly don't know who was talking if that wasn't you before, but, if I read what you wrote correctly, your boyfriend went under your account, and started posting comments that made you look like an idiot? Is that correct?

That's either stupid or you are just trying to cover yourself up now. :|

Better idea..just go draw something and stop wasting everyone's time

it was him but the pics were mine..no im not tryin to cover myself up he has problems with "verbal abuse". so yea...i set up the account for me originally but i was showing him aorund the website and then i left i guess he commented because usually i agree with ppl critisim.i appreciate it..!!!

So you like the site, and your boyfriend doesn't, but he made up the lie that you didn't like the site, and that he was keeping you on it? Here is my one bit of advice: If you have a boyfriend that is that immature, and likes messing around with your life with disregard to everybody else around you, I would suggest either finding a new "boyfriend" or wait a couple of years for a relationship. Your boyfriend sounds like he has more than a few issues within himself that he needs to get worked out, and a lot of growing up to do.

thank u..all of u.especially squee.i guess...but really..yesterday the arguing was mostly vincent...hes a guy to answer one question and is 13.he thinks i wont notice all the unknown comments i made...i appreciate all of ur comments everyone.especially squee's.ur really smart,like a god!!::bows in squee's greatness::

I don't care if it's sucking up or not. That fucking rules :D

I like your boyfriend. Tell him to get a separate account so I can tell who is who. <:)
|XOD|

never thought i would see the day that squess is worshipped by something, let alone a human.

=/ That was kind of mean.

do u ever get tired of looking at urself??
No. The mirror breaks by the time my eyes focus upon my mug.
well then,dont look in the mirror.
Too bad. I already did.
ever want to just walk up to ur mom and damn ur ugly?
...could you re-phrase that?
do it and run.
Why run? I am too fucking lazy too run.
r u 19 years old and still a virgin?
No. Then again, I am not 19, and I could care less being a virgin.
do worry,some pretty girl will come along and please u in ur sleep.
No, that would be creepy. I am asleep, I am tired. I DON'T WANT TO BE DISTURBED.
dont worry all ur needs will be fulfilled if u just do it.
Do what?
shit happens cuz ppl make it happen,
Shit happens? Wow. You must be a detective, Dick.
this aint really a poem and it aint about the mods,
I kinda figured that out, Dick.
its about how my friend wants to get laid.
Well, no problem there. Just give him 75 cents and point him towards that woman on the corner.
so have a good evening and remember,
...it's evening?
get ur ugly ass up,
No. STFU. I like my chair.
and draw.
No. But I will refill my coffee mug. :B

do u ever get tired of looking at urself??
No. The mirror breaks by the time my eyes focus upon my mug.

lol, good one!!

nightmare's last comment was funny

never thought i would see the day that squess is worshipped by something, let alone a human.

I'm worshiped by mosquitoes.. :3

Nightmare: lmao

do u ever get tired of looking at urself??
Who says I am always looking at myself? o.o
well then,dont look in the mirror.
I'm not =/
ever want to just walk up to ur mom and [insert "say"?] damn ur ugly?
Not at all.
do it and run.
Do what? And I'm not so good at running. o.o
r u 19 years old and still a virgin?
No, I'm 16 and a virgin.
do worry,some pretty girl will come along and please u in ur sleep.
Ugh, I don't want a girl I want a boy =\ I'm not a lesbian.
dont worry all ur needs will be fulfilled if u just do it.
Do what now?
shit happens cuz ppl make it happen,
Uhm, duh? >>
this aint really a poem and it aint about the mods,
What a misleading title.
its about how my friend [insert "who"?] wants to get laid.
Like I care or want to know?
so have a good evening and remember,
It's not evening here either =\
get ur ugly ass up,
and draw.
Why would I get up just to sit down again so I can draw? You're rather confusing.

o.o Hm. That was.. pointless, Lol.

do u ever get tired of looking at urself??
Yes, I do without a doubt..
well then,dont look in the mirror.
How do you expect me not to? Rip my eyes out?
ever want to just walk up to ur mom and [insert "say"?] damn ur ugly?
What if I don't wanna talk?
do it and run.
Erm do what and run? I trip over my own feet can I walk?
r u 19 years old and still a virgin?
I'm 14 and a virgin. Wow you were off
do worry,some pretty girl will come along and please u in ur sleep.
A girl please me in my sleep? Hope its two guys instead. *cough*
dont worry all ur needs will be fulfilled if u just do it.
What do I do to become ruler of the world? Hey you said my needs.
shit happens cuz ppl make it happen,
It happens a lot and so does pee.
this aint really a poem and it aint about the mods,
You suck at rhyming you whore
its about how my friend [insert "who"?] wants to get laid.
Try giving him money to have sex with the hooker at the corner of a store
so have a good evening and remember,
What if it's dusk? Remember? Remember What?
get ur ugly ass up,
No I like to sit on my butt D:<
and draw.
Die.

I rhyme better than you do.

Sry. had to do it again.. Its so damned funny.

Tell me about it. I wish another ass-hat would make another one of these, they are fun to do.

I hope one doesn't rhyme so I can make my answers to them rhyme like I just did. Haha.. fun.

You actually might come to like the poem once you do it some more. lol

There once was a dude who was cool;
And everyone thought that he ruled.
He was so cool that he died.

That poem pwns.

Marcello, who was that dude that died who was once cool and ruled?

I believe those inquiries were rhetorical, but ah well.. Your responses were quite hilarious to read. =D

There once was a dude who was cool;
And everyone thought that he ruled.
He was so cool that he died.

lmao. That sucks.

You need things.
Lots of things.
Were are things.
I like things.
Were do you put things.
I have alot of things.
Look!
A box.
Whats in the box.
Trees.

:B


I had to make one, now answer mine.

That's by far the best poem i've heard in awhile.

Here's one,
If you can't spell
Then don't post
Or you look like an ass
As big as a bass (o.0)
And you'll get owned
Like your mother got pwned

I should be a writer.

Heres a poem i wrote a while back, im pretty proud, so dont bash it.


Happy
I Found
Cracker Jacks Box
No Prize In Box
Just Stale Popcorn
And Silence
Sad

Omfg! That's even better than my one. *sob*

Hah, this is still going eh?

Ok ok, this one will pwn you all.

2day i go on 2drew
i drew pokmon!!11! ^.^
only take me 5 minuts!
ppl calld me nooby
so i sed, u suk! ^.^
nd thn i got band

Ty, that was very moving. I loved it....oh...still loving it.

lol those are neat poems you got there peeps! lol I wanna post mine but it's too too long and I wrote it two nights ago. I was reading that "poem" backwards and sounded even better! lol

and draw.
get ur ugly ass up,
so have a good evening and remember,
its about how my friend wants to get laid.
this aint really a poem and it aint about the mods,
shit happens cuz ppl make it happen,
dont worry all ur needs will be fulfilled if u just do it.
do worry,some pretty girl will come along and please u in ur sleep.
r u 19 years old and still a virgin?
do it and run.
ever want to just walk up to ur mom and damn ur ugly?
well then,dont look in the mirror.
do u ever get tired of looking at urself??
I'll bet you scare yourself a lot.

LMAO.

Toliet
Hard and cold
Eating up Waste
Ending our pain
Never stopping
Deathly Smelling

:P

I call this one trashcan

Trashcan oh Trashcan!
You stink!
Trashcan oh Trashcan!
You're nasty!
Trashcan oh Traschcan!
How I love thee!

:D

I call this one, my sanity.

HOW MUCH MORE
OF THIS CAN
I TYPE
LIEK OMG
TREES!!!!

:B

alright, I think it's safe to say this topic should be locked.

you people get a little out of hand. :(

BEST FORUM EVER!

Indeed. This should be pinned or something...

Girls have big breasts,
and boys have big toys.
I like to faq like a horny duck,
today my day was gay straight.
|XOD|

alriight then...XOD you have quite a....um.....alright then XOD..

Oh and happy birthday Miss Mimi-chan!
Happy birthday to you.
Happy birthday to you.
Happy birthday dear Mimi-chan,
Happy birthday to you!
|XOD|

Who is Miss Mimi-chan, Xod?

Akechi456

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I like girls
And so do you

[st]w00t![/st]
EDIT: [s]w00t![/s]
EDIT2: [sk]w00t![/sk]
EDIT3: w00t
EDIT4: Yes! w00t! Pwnage.

thank u XOD.....

Erm.. Happy late bday? I think.

yea..my b-day was the 15th...of july...this month...of summer...otness...sweaty teenage boys always coming over into my driveway!!!...>.< it actually sux...cuz they all ugly except one..who i dont no whos name is...dang..

o_o

For longer than I can remember
I've been looking for someone like you..
Someone with a head like yours
And a torso, too..
Birds sing
And you're gonna PAY!
The end.

xD Anyone know what the poem is from? >>; ... o.O;;

no...not really...nope nada not a clue aint got nothing..not a thing.......i dont no where its form...but its nice...nicey nice nice

I'll give you a hint, it was on an episode of a certian cartoon.. o.o;

.....uumm!! i wanna say FMA but sometin tells me..no! dont go that way! turn the other way,go back! go back! ur goin the wrong way!!

It isn't an anime. =x

zzzzz I tried to read this whole thread through and gave up about 3/4th of the way though. Hey Akechi you should try this place called www.animeleague.com it is like a board like this except that its for poetry. You might get a kick out of it it's pretty cool. Yeah and even though I didn't finsh readin the thread-dude just tell your bf where to stick it and do what you want.

okay wow. two things. first, a poem:
roses are red
violets are blue
i'm schizophrenic
and so am I.

second: I'm really surprised that a topic lasted so long from such a stupid little thing. it's kinda... sick. someone (nightmare)(squee) just had to respond. If you hadn't that one entry w/ the poem would have just sat there. You could have just let her feel dumb about posting and she could express herself to the open air.
However, it's also Akechi's fault for even posting in the first place. I'm sure there are even other sites you could have ... "vented your anger on" anyway. no need to bother 2draw unless you're going to be a kind individual and become part of the... 2draw "family".
Anyway, it's also interesting to me that so many different random topics branched off from this. (partially thanks to Xod's random interjac-- I'm sorry, interjections... lol

hasta la pasta *whoosh*

pashtes is godo

first of all...i dont care because im 2 sleepy to read thru ur comment Asriel and i broke up with my bf about half way thru these comments so yea...thanx a lot..

It's strange to see that this topic is still an on-going process.

yes it is..

Locked :3